Hey guys! Okay so I just wanted to thank everyone who has reviewed my story or if you are reading it, reviews are great! Please, no negative comments though, thanks. This is just a quick shout out to gymnast4life, tobiasforever, and A for reviewing, and to Serenity2012 who PM'ed me to help me notice something! If anyone has an idea for a character or you want your own OC in the story, just PM(personal message) me the character's info and I'll try and fit them in! Be sure to include:

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~Love u all, Liv…Now onto the story!

I wake up drenched in sweat, panting. I'm getting flashes, but whether they are real or not, I can't tell. I'm not in my own bed, but a room of a bunch of other kids my age, boys and girls. I hear a few kids crying.

"Bryn!" Someone hisses close to my face. I feel a cold hand on me, I look up and see Tobias. He waves his hand, signaling me to follow him. I nod and give him the 'hold on' sign with my finger. He goes to the door and waits in the hall as I shuffle around for clothes. I slip on black sweatpants I find in a box under my bed that I have to roll up a few times. I slip on sneakers and quietly patter out of the room, adjusting my tank top in the dim light.

"What time is it?" I whisper to Tobias. He leads me to the end of the hall where Tris waits tiredly.

"A little before 4." Tris tells me, a frown already set into her face.

"Hungry?" Tobias asks. I shake my head and he laughs quietly. "You can trust the food here." I notice his hand intertwined with Tris'.

"Aren't I suppose to be training with everyone else? Eating with everyone else?" I ask, struggling to keep up with him.

"Yea, but you don't eat." Tobias looks at me knowingly.

"So? I need the tube anyway, I don't get the-" I'm cut off.

"Look. You might hate us later because you'll be sore, but you need a new tube. Your doctor from the hospital contacted us."

"So where am I going?" I ask curiously.

"We…set something up. Training won't start until tomorrow…We have permission from the head to bring you for surgery."

"They don't see it as weak?" I ask, worried I'll be thrown out.

"Quite the opposite. You can survive without food, that's useful…they will be very impressed if you come out on top." Tris tells me.

"Oh, I see. So you are bringing me where?" I ask.

"Hospital, Bryn." Tobias clenches his teeth, his jaw is prominent through his skin. I shiver.

"Anyone else with us?" I question, looking around.

"To many people makes it conspicuous." I nod, zoning into my own world as we jump onto the train, Tris helps me in. I sit across from her and Tobias, watching out the door.

I lie on the floor as I watch out the window, the moon a giant white disk in the sky. I see a black bird fly across the moon, the black shape prominent.

"But the raven, sitting lonely on that placid bust, spoke only
That one word, as if his soul in that one word he did outpour." I whisper the old poem, sure that I just saw a lone raven.

"Nothing further then he uttered; not a feather then he fluttered;" Tobias says the next line. I don't look at him to know he saw the bird as well.
"Till I scarcely more than muttered, "Other friends have flown before;" Tris says the next line. We had to learn the poem in school, unknown reasons support it.
"On the morrow he will leave me, as my hopes have flown before." I whisper.
"Nevermore." We all whisper this together, a whisper in the crisp air. I get goose bumps. We stay silent until we arrive in the city.

"Ready?" Tobias stands, helping up Tris. I flip onto my stomach and use my knees to sit up, pushing myself to a standing position. We jump off the train, stumbling as we land. Tris steadies me before I fall, her touch light but strong. We get to the hospital and as Tris is about to go right in, both Tobias and I stand in front of the door before going in, deep breaths slowly fill our lungs.

"Can I help you?" the woman asks as we go to check in.

"I have Brooklyn Harper for Dr. Peirce." Tobias tells the woman. She nods and leads me back to a room, having me change and lie in a bed. Tobias and Tris come in and wait with me for about half an hour. They take me away and I fall asleep.

*******Meanwhile with Tris and Tobias, Tris' POV

"How long did you know." I ask him, not looking at his face.

"Found out about a year and a half ago." He's uncomfortable.

"Why didn't you tell me."

"I didn't know if you'd believe me…and I wanted you to meet her." I take a deep breath.

"Am I suppose to take this as you are only dating me because you couldn't have her?" I demand. It's stupid, I know. She's my sister, he's my boyfriend.

"Tris." His voice holds a warning in it. He takes a deep breath and speaks. "No, not at all. She's…" he winces, scratching the back of his head. "Very different than you. She's had a tough life, I thought you'd see that by the fact that I met her in the hospital." I frown, not knowing what to say. "But she led me to you. I saw you, and knew I found the answer of who her twin was. I watched you, trying to not have feelings towards you so training would be easier, but it didn't work. That turned out not to matter though, because you held up better than I thought you would. Tris, you two may be twins, but personality wise, you guys are nothing alike. Look what she let Rita do her first day. You've been here a year and the most severe thing you did is cut your hair short and get a few tattoos. You may think alike, you both got the same exact exam results despite her being from Amity, but it stops there. Give her a chance, you have to, she's your sister."

"She's close to you. She's already gotten under Will's skin somehow, who's next? Uriah?" I scoff, but look at Tobias with wide eyes and he tries to keep down a laugh.

"You know how she got to Will?" Tobias asks with a smile. I shake my head. "She snuck out of her house at 4 in the morning the day of the choosing ceremony. He was on guard that day, it was the day he took Zeke's shift. She was nervous bout the choosing ceremony, he sat with her and they talked. He gave her the nickname Bryn, he told her he wasn't Dauntless-born, but more than that, he saw it. She…you two were definitely genetically engineered, maybe as weapons, because she could tell he was lying about that always being his shift. She knew he had a girlfriend."

"Maybe she was suppose to be a Candor if she could tell he was lying…and maybe she was saying the girlfriend thing to see if he was free for her." I try being reasonable, the Erudite in me.

"He knew who she was, you two look exactly alike. And he said it was totally dark, that she couldn't see him at all if he was lying about his shift. She just knew…it's scary. When I used to talk to her, sometimes I thought she was like a robot…she just knows too much about people, she's good with it." Tobias shivers. "It's why she became friends with me in the first place…Tris we need to talk more about this, but we will do it privately and after she makes it." I nod at him, thinking.

"But as long as we have time now, how do you know we are twins? Besides the obvious anyway."

"Fine…but don't let this get to your head. She can figure out stuff about people right?" I nod, trying to figure out where it's going. "You…Tris…" He huffs, thinking. I don't know what he's trying to say.

"You don't have any idea, do you?" Tobias asks, looking at me. "Tris, you see through people…you can tell what people are thinking by their actions, and you don't even realize it. You just can tell." I scoff as the nurse comes out of the doors, wading over to me and Tobias.

"How'd it go?" Tobias stands up.

"Very well, she shall be ready to leave in a few hours…" the nurse trails off, refusing to look at either of us.

"What went wrong." I demand.

"Well…Dr. Peirce did what he could…really he did, but-"

"What. Happened." I demand.

"The feeding tube was changed, but a change in her blood was noticed. Tests were conducted to find that not only was the cemidine levels fatal, but her blood seems to show signs of poisoning."

"What's cemidine?" I ask.

"It's the calming drug used in Amity. What was the poison?" Tobias asks.

"We believe it was triclonizide." the nurse says.

"What's that?" I ask. Tobias is quiet, but his mouth hangs open with disbelieving eyes.

"Triclonizide was used to calm people down, usually from panic attacks."

"What do you mean 'was'?" I demand. "Spit it out."

"Now triclonizide is used along with a multitude of other drugs to preform torture."

"Were the rest found?" Tobias asks quietly. I'm in shock, disgusted, angered.

"Yes…they were all found in her system. It's a miracle she's alive now…she's in recovery with medication to clean her blood." This used to be done with dialysis, but they found a medication that does it without any possible negative side affects.

"So she was tortured…why doesn't she remember?" I ask.

"That," Tobias says "is why the triclonizide and cemidine were used. It made her forget." A snarl on his face makes me know he has new information.

Information that can save lives.