Disclaimer: Is there any real Takoujiness romance in Frontier? No? then I
don't own Digimon.
I opened my eyes. Was that a dream? Or was it real? Had I changed into a corrupt Digimon? I looked up to see where I was. My eyes widened.
Instead of darkness I saw a boy. He was about as tall as me, but he looked a couple inches higher. He had medium length dark blue hair. He also had long sideburns in front of his ears, just like me. He was wearing a pink sweatshirt with a green open t-shirt (a/n: or what ever it is) overtop of it. He had white jeans and wore green shoes with yellow stripes on them.
For a minute, I could have sworn he was my twin or something
(A/N: if he only knew)
He was staring up at the starry blue sky.
I tried to get up. Why was this boy here? Was he here like I was? If he is, what could he do? There are no more spirits left. why would Cherubimon want him here?
I let out a small noise as I collapsed back onto the ground.
The boy shot his head to stare right at me. His face relaxed a bit to see I was okay, but I could tell he was still a bit nervous to see me. He then started to walk toward me.
Who was this guy?
I tried to get up again just incase this guy was bad news, fresh off the print. My left leg suddenly felt a sharp pain like a sewing needle stabbing it. I started to fall.
Then I stopped.
Two arms had caught me. I held onto them as tight as I could. In return he did the same.
I looked up.
It was that boy again. He was the one who had caught me. Why though?
He blinked and stared at me with his mouth slightly open.
What was with his obsession of staring at me like that?
I started blushing. This was a rather. odd.. situation to be in.
I quickly got up. "A-Arigatou.." I uttered to him.
He smiled.
That made me blush even more.
"Um. my name's Kimura K-K-Kouichi." he managed to say.
Kouichi huh? This guy seemed nice enough.
"My name's Minamoto Kouji.." I told him. He seemed to have gotten over his nervousness.
I could have sworn he said "I know that.." under his breath.
"Why are you here?" I asked him. He looked down at the ground, dejected.
". The same reason C-Cherubimon wants you here.. I guess.." he answered back. He looked so hurt now.
Now what did he mean by that? His reason had to be different from mine. I had a spirit. He didn't. There was only ten spirits. Five belonged to us. Fire, Wind, Thunder, Ice and mine, Light. The enemy had the spirits Wood, Earth, Water, Steel and, well, Darkness.
"Do you know how we got here?" I asked him. He shrugged. I guess he didn't know either.
"I think we just. did.." he answered. Mmm I was getting nowhere with this.
"Why do you think we're here?" I asked him.
".I think it's a test." he replied. "We're supposed to stay here. for a while.."
"How long a while?"
He got a very hurt look in his eyes again.
"M-Maybe forever. K-Kouji.."
Forever?! This guy can't be serious!
"What's the reason Cherubimon wants you? Is it the exact same reason as mine? And if so, how?!?" I asked him desperately.
He stepped back a couple of steps away from me. He now looked more or less petrified.
His eyes then flew to the eastern sky.
The sun.
His eyes widened. "What's wrong?" I asked him.
"G-Gotta go!!!!" he yelled as he broke into a run.
"Oi!! Matte!!!" I called after him. "I'll see you later Kouji!!" he called back before he disappeared into the forest.
I blinked. Gone
Suddenly my body started to fade in and out.. like it was disappearing.
The next thing I knew I hard turned into the corrupt Digimon again. It was weird. my first evolution had been horrible, this one.. I hardly felt it.
"Is this a part of the test too?" I asked the dark forest, half hoping for a return.
"Seems so."
I shot my head in the direction of the speaker.
"Oh it's just you"
It had turned out to be none other than Duskmon. He was standing half in the forest, almost like he was trying not to be seen.
"What's with your habit of staring at me?!" I snapped at him.
He just closed his eyes and slightly shook his head. He then reopened them
"Thought you got that all the time." He stated back.
I glared at him.
He just shrugged, turned and left.
Why did he have to treat me like I was his younger brother or something? (A/N: mmm I wonder)
I hated that.
Then I wondered.
When was I going to see Kouichi again? He did say that we could see each other later on. I just can't let him see me like this.
Maybe later on.
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Don't take my line.
Okay so this chapter was a bit longer. I'll now answer reviews:
Firebird: Good story.
Interesting plot.
Spelling is reasonable.
Grammer is moderately poor
Typos are many and varied
analysis -- story should be continued. However since errors distract from readers pleasure the writer should give serious thought to getting a beta reader.
Um thanx for the constructive criticism.. yesh I don't know where or how to get a beta reader.
Thanx for reviews from:
Jen Minamoto
LoneWolf
Zheryta
Moonwing Lobo and Metabee
Ice Puppet
Kawaii Mimi-chan
Babyshiro
Palmon
LillyAngel
Saer
Iniora Nackatori
Next chapter up pretty soon!!
C Yaz!!
I opened my eyes. Was that a dream? Or was it real? Had I changed into a corrupt Digimon? I looked up to see where I was. My eyes widened.
Instead of darkness I saw a boy. He was about as tall as me, but he looked a couple inches higher. He had medium length dark blue hair. He also had long sideburns in front of his ears, just like me. He was wearing a pink sweatshirt with a green open t-shirt (a/n: or what ever it is) overtop of it. He had white jeans and wore green shoes with yellow stripes on them.
For a minute, I could have sworn he was my twin or something
(A/N: if he only knew)
He was staring up at the starry blue sky.
I tried to get up. Why was this boy here? Was he here like I was? If he is, what could he do? There are no more spirits left. why would Cherubimon want him here?
I let out a small noise as I collapsed back onto the ground.
The boy shot his head to stare right at me. His face relaxed a bit to see I was okay, but I could tell he was still a bit nervous to see me. He then started to walk toward me.
Who was this guy?
I tried to get up again just incase this guy was bad news, fresh off the print. My left leg suddenly felt a sharp pain like a sewing needle stabbing it. I started to fall.
Then I stopped.
Two arms had caught me. I held onto them as tight as I could. In return he did the same.
I looked up.
It was that boy again. He was the one who had caught me. Why though?
He blinked and stared at me with his mouth slightly open.
What was with his obsession of staring at me like that?
I started blushing. This was a rather. odd.. situation to be in.
I quickly got up. "A-Arigatou.." I uttered to him.
He smiled.
That made me blush even more.
"Um. my name's Kimura K-K-Kouichi." he managed to say.
Kouichi huh? This guy seemed nice enough.
"My name's Minamoto Kouji.." I told him. He seemed to have gotten over his nervousness.
I could have sworn he said "I know that.." under his breath.
"Why are you here?" I asked him. He looked down at the ground, dejected.
". The same reason C-Cherubimon wants you here.. I guess.." he answered back. He looked so hurt now.
Now what did he mean by that? His reason had to be different from mine. I had a spirit. He didn't. There was only ten spirits. Five belonged to us. Fire, Wind, Thunder, Ice and mine, Light. The enemy had the spirits Wood, Earth, Water, Steel and, well, Darkness.
"Do you know how we got here?" I asked him. He shrugged. I guess he didn't know either.
"I think we just. did.." he answered. Mmm I was getting nowhere with this.
"Why do you think we're here?" I asked him.
".I think it's a test." he replied. "We're supposed to stay here. for a while.."
"How long a while?"
He got a very hurt look in his eyes again.
"M-Maybe forever. K-Kouji.."
Forever?! This guy can't be serious!
"What's the reason Cherubimon wants you? Is it the exact same reason as mine? And if so, how?!?" I asked him desperately.
He stepped back a couple of steps away from me. He now looked more or less petrified.
His eyes then flew to the eastern sky.
The sun.
His eyes widened. "What's wrong?" I asked him.
"G-Gotta go!!!!" he yelled as he broke into a run.
"Oi!! Matte!!!" I called after him. "I'll see you later Kouji!!" he called back before he disappeared into the forest.
I blinked. Gone
Suddenly my body started to fade in and out.. like it was disappearing.
The next thing I knew I hard turned into the corrupt Digimon again. It was weird. my first evolution had been horrible, this one.. I hardly felt it.
"Is this a part of the test too?" I asked the dark forest, half hoping for a return.
"Seems so."
I shot my head in the direction of the speaker.
"Oh it's just you"
It had turned out to be none other than Duskmon. He was standing half in the forest, almost like he was trying not to be seen.
"What's with your habit of staring at me?!" I snapped at him.
He just closed his eyes and slightly shook his head. He then reopened them
"Thought you got that all the time." He stated back.
I glared at him.
He just shrugged, turned and left.
Why did he have to treat me like I was his younger brother or something? (A/N: mmm I wonder)
I hated that.
Then I wondered.
When was I going to see Kouichi again? He did say that we could see each other later on. I just can't let him see me like this.
Maybe later on.
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Don't take my line.
Okay so this chapter was a bit longer. I'll now answer reviews:
Firebird: Good story.
Interesting plot.
Spelling is reasonable.
Grammer is moderately poor
Typos are many and varied
analysis -- story should be continued. However since errors distract from readers pleasure the writer should give serious thought to getting a beta reader.
Um thanx for the constructive criticism.. yesh I don't know where or how to get a beta reader.
Thanx for reviews from:
Jen Minamoto
LoneWolf
Zheryta
Moonwing Lobo and Metabee
Ice Puppet
Kawaii Mimi-chan
Babyshiro
Palmon
LillyAngel
Saer
Iniora Nackatori
Next chapter up pretty soon!!
C Yaz!!
