Ok, well I've gotten some comments from my friends and some reviews saying that people are out of character. Well that's kind of what I'm going for. I mean….well I want them to have new outlooks on life.
I'm going to have to give you some background too because I complaints about that too.
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Bella is in a bad relationship with her mother at this point because Renee has got a new and abusive boyfriend (Phil). Phil has been pretty much brainwashing Renee into thinking that Bella is a slut and is trying to break them up.
So Renee is defiantly not happy with her daughter and sends her off to live with Charlie.
Charlie is more laid back in this story. Edward doesn't have to tense up and fight the urge against just her blood. He doesn't have that urge at all. Which makes their relationship special. For now….
And Bella is more reclusive than she was before. But she is still Bella, just raised differently, and going through different hardships.
That's it for now….any more questions, just ask!
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