(a/n: hey everybody so welcome to chapter 3 revised. I hope you like this better than the first oh and also, I will be starting a sequel once I finish revising. So when I say ember's point of view I mean dead ember looking back not the living ember's point of view. Also jj does love ember he just doesn't know how, but ember doesn't know that and you will see why later on Okay so let's get ready to rumble.

Welcome to

Chapter 3: bliss bands and lots of hot sex


Ember pov

After the night at the race track, me and jj hung out like every day. We grew closer and closer, each day the most prominent day though, the one that set me in love with him, was the day he told me he loved me. Like a fool I believed him. I remember it was a day like any other day, we had been going steady for three months, but it felt like eternity.

We were driving around in his truck, and the song "nothing my love can't fix for ya" by joey Lawrence cam on. I was shocked when he pulled over. He turned to me, and pulled out this necklace and this ring. The ring said "jj and ember forever", and the necklace said "our love will never die just like the embers of a flame".

Tears of happiness came to my eyes, at the moment then he sealed the deal by saying "ember I'm in love with you". That was all I needed to hear, he had been trying to fuck me, since our second date. Even though I was a rebel I was still catholic, and I wanted to wait for a guy who loved me.

I thought he did, so right then and there I jumped him, and straddled his hips, and right before I pressed my lips to his, I whispered in his ear. "I surrender"


(a/n: okay non lemon reader's lemon alert, If you do not enjoy lemons skip over this part, and I wait for the next author's note ensuring the lemon is over, however if you do read the lemon know that it is in ember's pov. Also I do not own anything my love can't fix for ya or DP)


Once he realized he was getting lucky, the little basters eyes, filled with happiness and lust. I began to remove his shirt, and lay kisses from his neck all the way down his stomach. I then unbuttoned his jeans, and realized the effect I was having on him.

I looked up at him, from the spot where I was and said, "You like that baby" the little ass hole nodded in glee. I then realized that I wanted him naked, so I could get a good view, of the man I was making love to. So I pulled the rest of his jeans off, and couldn't help but notice, his bulge was getting bigger.

I was pretty damn proud of myself, right about then, so I removed his boxers and gasped at the size, I didn't know boys could get that big. He was roughly seven in half inches, but I knew I could take it, I loved challenges. Besides even though, I was a virgin I didn't have a hymen.

I had been raped several times before. I then proceeded to use my tongue, to circle the mushroom shaped tip. My decided to put a little more of it in my mouth, and once I got use to the feeling, and I put the whole damn thing in there. I had my head bobbing up and down, and he was screaming name.

Just to make it more fun, I temporarily took my mouth off of the prize long enough to say, in a husky voice "talk to me dirty baby". Then in a flash it was back in my mouth, I was bobbing up and down, my mouth making that gaging noise. I knew he was close as fuck; I could taste the pre cum.

"You take it like a bitch" he said to me, I loved being dirty, it was like this side of me only he could unleash. Like I said I was a rebel but I wasn't a slut. My eyes were looking at him, and I knew damn well he liked it. You have no clue what this did for my ego, ember McLain was a damn natural.

How about that, for the history books. As he got closer and closer, u began sucking faster and harder, and I loved the noises I was getting from him. I was gonna make him forget all his past flames, he was gonna be mine. So I though. I knew he couldn't hold off much longer, finally he came in my mouth, and some of it dribbled down my chin.

I showed him, it before I swallowed it. Then I removed my shirt, an and he helped me remove my jeans, and panties. He pushed me back down on the, car seat and spread open my legs revealing my wet pussy. I was ready for him; this boy had me so wet. "Fuck me baby, I want you now" I screamed and he put himself inside me.

I loved the feeling I could feel every inch of him moving inside me, in and out in and out, and I was screaming his name. "oh my god, harder baby fuck me harder" I said over and over, it was becoming hard for me to, come up with coherent words. I knew it I was close.

"Oh holy fuck, I'm gonna cum baby" I screamed we both were reaching our climaxes. We were in pure ecstasy. I couldn't hold it in any longer and I came. I loved it, the feeling of cumming. Soon we were done and he pulled out of me, as we both re dressed our selves.


(a/n: okay all my non lemon readers you are now free to roam about the cabin. All the ones who did read the lemon, how did I do)


I put on my panties, and his shirt and he put back on his boxers and jeans, and we just laid there getting over, what we had just done. I was the one to break the silence, of course I already knew the answer, but I was just needed him, to say for my ego.

Dialogue

Ember: was I good.

Jj: oh god you were amazing.

Ember: it was my first time, unless you count the rape administered to me, by my own dad.

Jj: the fucker, does it still happen.

Ember: not for the past two years, but that doesn't stop his drunken ass from trying. I just learned a little self-defense.

Jj: never doubt a kick ass woman.

Ember: hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

Jj: I'll remember that.

Ember: out of curiosity, what got you into drumming?

Jj: well it's a long story.

Ember: I have time.

JJ: good, cause you'll need it. It all started when I was ten, and my mom died of cancer. My dad remarried not 3 weeks later, To a 20 year old bitch, named Jenna regal. He didn't get that I needed, someone there for me. So I went looking for love in the wrong places I guess. I was 11 when I hooked up with the girl named jenny trous, she was 14 and we were both high.

I had a lot of girls after that, no steady ones until I met Talia. I was 13 and she was 15. She thought she could "fix me". She tried to get me, to give my step mom a chance. She didn't get I wasn't ready for that, to me Jenna was some gold digging bitch, who could take a long walk, off a short cliff for all I cared.

She didn't get that to me, Jenna midst well have killed my mother. After a while I was holding on to Talia, for reasons I myself didn't know. She was a 17 year old woman, and I was a 15 year old child. She needed a man; she needed more than I could give her. I had no one to talk to, my "friends" deserted me, my dad was too busy with Jenna, and my little sister jelly or angelica wasn't born yet.

So that's when I snapped. I took all my anger, it was built up from the time I was 10 years old, some from my mom dying, some from my dad remarrying, some from a little bit of everywhere. I took it all out on Talia, I hit her. After that I had to serve two weeks in juvi, and get anger management.

When I got out Talia told me she was pregnant, and that the baby was mine. I knew it was true, and even if it wasn't I had caused her enough pain already. My anger management coach said that I needed "a positive place to put my anger". So he said to take up an instrument.

I needed one that expressed how I was feeling, I choose the drums. They were beat up, had been beat on and tattered but they were still standing. So from then on I started writing songs, and used the drum to play them. I never sing the words though. So that the story of how I started drums.

Ember: so that's the real reason you moved out here, to follow you son.

Jj: yeah, I'd do anything for him.

Ember: so I'm guessing, Talia turned on you after that.

JJ: not just me, she turned on herself, she was a caring competent selfless young woman. And now she an uncaring incompetent selfish, bitch. Hitting Talia is my greatest regret. Although I never loved her, it's still my greatest regret.

Ember: when do I get to meet, this famous dash Baxter.

JJ: when do you want to meet him?

Ember: come on; give me a straight answer for once.

Jj: I'm going to pick him up now, you want to come.


Ember's pov

So with that, we got redressed in our rightful clothes, as we speed off to Wendy, elementary. Our town was small and small meant cheap. Grades preschool through 6th, were considered elementary, and grades 7th through 8th were considered, middle. There were only 5 schools in all of amity, Wendy middle and elementary, Casper high, amity park community college, and Amity Park University.

Yes that's right middle and elementary were in the same building, nothing separating the toddlers from, the preteens but fence that went right thought the school. Yep classy old amity park. It just so happened that dash went to preschool, so that's where we were going Wendy elementary/ middle.

It brought back memories just riding there; I hadn't really been that way in a while. Wendy was no more run down than I remember it, the same rusty fence still barely stood there, trying in vain to keep the , fast 6th and 5th graders away from the middle schools. Long ago a whole had been snipped, into the fence and cheap old amity never bothered to fix it, we'd just snip it again any way.

Since Amity Park was so small, there was no rich school that didn't have poor kids there, so they had to come to the same schools we did. It was the only time; they probably ever came to the wrong side of the tracks. Some were school but most, were filthy think there all that in a weed sack, type of kids.

Good times, good times I let those memories run through my head, as we approached the entrance for cars, and jj parked. I remember look out the window, and I didn't know it then, but the innocent looking trio, would be kicking me and my friends asses in the future. We gave them a run for their money, but somehow they always writhed through.

As we were pulling up I got my first view of dash, picking on none other than Danny Fenton, Sam Manson, and tucker Foley. It was quite the seen I'll admit, it seems damn near impossible, for such and innocent looking group of kids, and could one day save the world.

That's another story though, well except for Sam, that girl and I were alike we were never innocent, we always knew bad things lurked just around the corner. In fact were a lot alike, minus her taste in men. She had on a black poufy dress, filled with frills and bows. Although you could tell that wasn't the dresses original color, you could see patched of pink sticking out, through the masses of think black paint.

Her hair was what shocked me though, it was blond as could be, and you could see she tried to spray paint that to, but it didn't work so well. Danny was wearing this blue shirt that was the color of his eyes, and these ugly red shorts, that made him look like he lost a bet.

Then there was tucker, the techno geek who later on in my after like, I would do something shocking with, but again that was another story, he was wearing a short sleeved yellow shirt and a brownish green, version of the shorts, Danny had on. Apparently both of them lost a bet.

They were all play just like kids should, not knowing the things, that lurk about, the figurative things the real things, the dangers, and all the pain that will soon begin in their lives. Children should never know any of that, and at that point they didn't. They were just kids, I sometimes wonder, when it had stopped being that way.


Flashback

Danny tucker and Sam all run around the school yard playing pretend.

Danny: I'm gonna save the fair gothic princess, from the evil dragon.

The toddler said as he, pointed to a nearby broom that was the "dragon", then started running towards her.

Sam: I don't need help, I can rescue myself. Woman can do anything men can.

The future activist screamed, as she blushed at the though, of Danny rescuing her from danger.

Tucker: and I'll knock out the evil fire walls, by throwing my pda at it.

Sam: will you guys stop narrating.

The girl stated irately as, dash approached them running there fun.

Dash: hey fen tee tee, you and that ugly vampire and hat where freak playing games.

Sam: I'm not a vampire, im a girl!

Dash: yeah and ugly one

Danny: no she's not, she's really pretty, and smart, and unique, and really fun to play with!

The boy stated with anger, as he glared at dash before he did the unthinkable, by kicking dash in the balls.

Dash: you better run fen tee tee!

The future prep stated, as he held the injured spot, and watched the trio proceed to run.

Sam: my hero.

Sam stated half-jokingly as she to, begin to run.


Ember's pov

It was actually kind of fun to watch the seen unfold, only if I knew that one day dash Baxter would become a big pain in my ass. The girl band loving… oh my bad, that is another story to. Any way once I and JJ parked us, both removed ourselves from the car, and began to make it towards, dash who was still gripping his balls.

I actually kind of felt bad for the kid at the moment, even though as much as I hate to admit, he deserved it. Once we were in touching range of dash, I helped him up, as I began to get on his good side.

I figured if dash was anything, like jj that he was gonna have a hard time excepting, anyone his parents were into. So I decided to work, some of my ember charm. I guess maybe that's why jj decided to reveal, his past to me that day, so I'd know what to expect from dash.

I began my saying "hi buddy I'm ember, it's nice to meet you." I stated trying not to sound condescending, but in a way, he knew I was on his side. It didn't take him long to respond, he was quick with the quips like his father. He simply stated, "You're not my mother."

He was rather blunt, for a little kid especially, so I decided to try and step up the, par. I started with, "I'm not trying to be, I could be your friend though." I said just as bluntly, as I adding a smirk. I think he liked the fact, that I wasn't talking to him like he was 2, even though he was, he wanted me to keep shit real.

I could respect that, his gaze soon softened, much to jj surprise, as dash simply said "we'll see what you bring to the table." This time he too, added a smirk, I guess thins was why jj was hesitant about, the meeting of dash and I. I suppose I really didn't blame him, dash was a little force to be reckoned with.

That's when it hit me, I knew exactly how to when this kid over, and I said " I could bring you to a table at chuck e cheese's" I stated, with a since of arrogance, and accomplishment in my voice, knowing I had just passed the test. With that jj decided to step in, like anyone with limited, money would.

Since he went to juvi and had a kid, his parents, were a little on the dry side, with the money. So I synced his thoughts, so to speak and made the situation all right, with a few words. "I'll pay" I stated and almost instantly his face, brightened, and all three of us headed to the car.

The ride was a rather pleasant on, ironically the song "life is a highway" came on, and me and dash, stated singing it almost immediately, I took jj on the other hand, little encouraging. After that, we were about five minutes away from our destination, and "living on a prayer" came on.

We repeated the actions, and song the song all the way there. Once there we a paid, and ordered a pizza and a salad bar, with free refill drinks. Just like that the three of us ate our meals, as if all was at peace, as if nothing could bring us down.

Eventually dash finished his, food and asked for money to buy, tokens so he could play games. He did, and jj and I just sat there and watched, him. It was pure bliss, when I was with jj, I don't know how are why, but somehow I feel in love with jj, and I was in deep.

That moment though, it as if no harm could come to us, I was safe there watching my boyfrineds, son scurry around, an arade. I loved this feel that I had never felt before, and somehow it saved me. It made me forget all my my troubles, it made me forget about my mom and dad, about the wrong side of the tracks. It made me at peace and I loved it.

To bad it would only be short lived…


a/n: so i hope you liked it, look out for the next chapter