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1. I get bored and eventually I stop writing for a long time.

2. I get rid of the story and it gets deleted for good.

I am not trying to threaten you, I just want you to review. Tell me your likes or dislikes, I want to hear them.

Now that this message is over with I just wanna say.............

NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

I DO NOT OWN NAURTO. IT ALL BELONGS TO MASASHI KISHIMOTO.


Well, this was very strange. 'In my entire life.....err well I think I have never seen eyes this color. I mean really......her eyes were practically white! Ughhh I can't even recognize them! My life suuuuuuuuuuuucks.....' She was started to think she was a weirdo. At least her eyes looked blue, sorta. 'I just think of these as clues, right. Just clues.......' She stopped her train of thought once she found yet another fantastic clue.

Well wasn't this just a good surprise. She had a tattoo. Really, of all the strange things about her the kamis just had to add a tattoo. What in the hell possessed her to get her a tattoo. Well at least it wasn't a creepy one. It looked well.....ok as far as tattoos go. It's just another piece of the puzzle I guess. It looked exactly like the crescent moon on her kimono except more elaborate and had more delicate designs. Stupid creepy moon. Maybe she was apart of a cult of moon worshipers. Maybe she was an alien from the moon. Maybe she died her hair white, got drunk, woke up with a hangover, and was an escapee who got admitted to a mental health institution for short term memory loss or a rehab for drinking. The list goes on and on and on....

Something wasn't right.

She lost her train of thought.......

She felt like she was being watched.

She looked around, she saw no one. The situation felt familiar and her instincts told her she was in trouble. She held her ground, her heart quickened to the point where it was pounding in her ears. Her breath came out in short quick pants.

That's when the first appeared.

A man dressed in thin dark clothes stepped forward from the shadows, his gaze met hers. His eyes were dark, they were like obsidian pools. They just stared at her, watching her every move.....

Studing her.

This was bad. Wait rephrase that. She was in deep shit. What was she suppose to do?

Fight.

Fight. Where did that come from? It felt strange, but it felt right. She would fight! But did she know how.......

" This almost doesn't feel fair. I mean we have to fight a girl? Hey sweet heart! What's a pretty girl like you doing her all by yourself ? "said another. He was lean and definitely male. He had light brown eyes and red-brown hair. He crack a smile torward her, but it didn't feel too sincere because his eyes were busy looking at her body.

Yep. She wanted to kill him right now.

" If you don't look up, you'll have to adjust to life as a blind asshole." Kazumi hissed.

A kunai knife whizzed passed her, cutting her cheek. The blood slid down, crimson drops fell on the ground.

The next of them stepped out.

" If you make any sudden moves, I will kill you." He said. This one had dark brown eyes, darkness covering any emotion. He had a muscular build and black hair. He looked ready to kill.

" Really Masaru, you have to be so violent? She doesn't have any weapons." said the next. He had blue hair with blonde streaks in it, his eyes were a bright blue.

Blue eyes...

Her insides were twisting. Her mind was telling to her to flee, but her instinct was telling her to fight.

" I only do what is necessary, Daichi."

" Be nice Masaru, I like them feisty. Now you've got her all scared." said the one with reddish hair.

"Kyo, you have no ideawhat she's capable of. You should be on guard, not flirting with the enemy!" said the next to appear. He had blue-green hair and light green eyes.

Light green eyes......

"How could she be the enemy! She is probably some poor scared girl who just got lost, right sweet heart?" With that he started to walk toward her.

Obsidian meet Ice.

The first ninja was directly in between her and the red haired one that was called 'Kyo'.

"This one is special." he said.

Suddenly his eyes his eyes turned crimson and then......

The world disappeared.

They were in a whole different world. It was black and red and it was so hard to describe. What was this place? She was about to take a step forward until....

"You can't move, I am in control here not you." he said. He looked like a twisted dark angel, still and emotionless.

Those eyes.....

She tried to talk, but couldn't. She had not control of her own body.

" You are not a tailed beast container yet you contain power that I have never seen any mere human possess. What are you?" His voice was a cold monotone.

" I don't know what your talking about! What power! I don-"

" I do not play games girl."

He came quick, aiming the tip of a katana to her chest. He looked strait into her eyes.

" Fell the pain of your consequences."

He thrust the katana strait into her chest.

Her heat was screaming in pain, but she tried to do the same. She couldn't. He wouldn't let her.

Her released his hold on the katana and took out a knife pressing it against her throat.

" Tell me."

It wasn't a question. It was a command.

No one controlled her. No one will control her, not him. Not anyone. She looked in his eyes with defiance and bitter coldness.

" I control you." He said.

He looked her in the eyes, they were.......

They were caught in each other's glances, they stayed still.

The world shattered, they fell into darkness.


Dark eyes that turn crimson............revealing nothing.............but darkness.........


Outside the illusion, they fell strait to the ground.

Masaru ran toward Makoto, he kneeled next to him.

Makoto was still awake, he was just stunned a little.

'How? How could this be? She is ........she is..........she is......'

"Makoto-sama! Are you alright?!"

'I have to show the Daimyo this girl. She isn't suppose to exist.....'

" Masaru and I must take this girl to the Daimyo. The rest of you continue the mission."

They all stared a him with surprise faces.

" Why must you take the girl to see the Daimyo of all people!" whined Kyo.

" She is special. " answered Makoto.

" How special ? asked Naoki.

" Very. She may be great of use."

" Yeah, great use alright...." mumbled the red haired pervert.

" Kyo, shut up. " said Masaru.

" Special, mmmmmm......" said Daichi.

Makoto walked up and picked up the girl.

' How is it you live when no one knows of the power you contain? Most would have killed or used you if they saw what you keep hidden in your eyes...'

Makoto ran back into the direction of their home : Kaminari no Kuni (The Land Of Lightning)

Masaru follow quickly from behind while the rest took off. They were intent on finding out more about wakes makes this girl soimportant and specialthat the Daimyo must see her. They wanted to finish their mission as soon as possible and return home.

" I apologize Makoto-sama, but I fail to see what of use this girl is. What does she have that makes her what you call 'special' ?

" She contains something no man has ever thought to be possible. A gift we could use to our advantage. A power Konoha will regret they ever encountered." he said, passion filling his words.

" If what you say is true, why did she not use it when we appeared. The power you say she has could have easily defeated us." countered Masaru.

' Masaru, you think of every little thing. What would I do without you ? '

" I haven't thought of that Masaru. But since you brought it up, there are many possibilities and no answers."

"Then we shall have to wait until she wakes up to find out." replied Masaru.

" That seems to be the only option. Until she awakes." said Makoto.


It only took only two days to get to their final destination.

It was an easy feat for skilled ninja. They entered a small cave, and disappeared seamlessly into its dark depths.

When they were out of sight the cave vanished and turned into a solid wall of earth.

They were intent on showing the discovery, nestled in Makoto's arms. She still hadn't woke up, but it was only a matter of time.


The Daimyo was in his gardens taking a peaceful stroll hoping it would get rid of the headache that his advisers had caused.

There was a matter they had been meaning to discuss for awhile that the Daimyo was not very fond of.

-------------Flashback-------------------

3 hours earlier

One by one his advisers came into his office, this meant bad news. He figured something like a death of someone important or a planned failed.

" Daimyo, there is something we must discuss you. It is of great importance." Ughhh....here it comes.

" To secure the lands in your rule.......be believe you should have a......heir."

" Yes to secure my lands I must...." I have to...to..to

I stood up from my chair and gave them a glare.

" We worry if you die, who will be the next to rule?"said another.

" So you are already waiting for me to say my prayers and die. It shows how loyal my men are or should I say rats."

" But milord we th-"

I left before they had a chance to say another word.

I must say I have a very good taste in vermin.

Damn weasels. [A/N : OMG! Itachi's here! Where?!?! hehe XD]

-----------End Fashback-------------

When would his advisers learn. He liked being alone, it was the way he lived. He wasn't gay or anything he just like being alone. He trusted a select few, beside them there was no one he could trust.

Having a child would imply he would have a family, the baby and his or her mother. The mother let alone would just be some whore who wan't his money and the kid would be some spoiled brat waiting until he died so he take over his lands.

He didn't need that.

He didn't want that.


In the mirror of your eyes,

reflecting what is deep inside,

showing only what you want to be seen,

hiding things you keep away,

locked afar within your heart,

sometimes makes you stay apart,

some things we do out of fear,

some things we do because we must,

may hurt the ones we feel we trust,

If I show you what's been locked away,

promise me your here to stay.


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