Updated: 17. January 2018 (29. June 2018)
Here is the longer chapter which the 4. chapter started, just without the lyrics.
I got 53 views from 19 visitors in a day (the first day). Thank you very much. I also thank the 18 followers and 16 'favouriters'.
To 'grimmswan''s review: Here's the continue/next chapter.
I'm sorry for the long wait in the story. Without a lot tata here is chapter five.
Previously
Just as Rosalie gets back from putting the phial in its place, the game continues. "So captain truth or dare?" After smelling his last dare there isn't a reason to be scared about asking this man.
The addressed raises one eyebrow "Dare."
"Since Nick is wearing dance clothing, how about: I dare you to sing a hole song!"
'He wants me to sing a song.' It rings in his mind.
The Ice-Biber looks confused, disturbed and scaried nervously between them, like a tennis match.
The one dared to sing, the police captain, the Zauberbiest, the Royal in Portland, the bastard prince smirks and opens his mouth to answer...
... "With pleasure! What? Did you think I wouldn't do it." Sean Renard adds, seeing their perplexed faces. Nick recovers first "I guess it just never crossed our minds."
The captain gives a small, soft smile and starts in a deep memorable voice.
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Donnez-moi une suite au Ritz, je n'en veux pas...
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...Bienvenue dans ma réalité
(The Song is 'je veux' from ZAZ.)
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Silence! He has them bound in his spell.
He has them hanging on every note and every syllable. Alluring. Nick is engrossed by his voice.
'I can't think I sung that song. Sign. At least nobody did understand it.'
Unbeknown to the prince, his detective did understand most of the lyrics.
Nick, looking at this lovable man, felt his inner pain and saw in contrary to the others Sean's real self. Sean, who just wanted to be unconditionally loved without the intrigues and hidden agendas. But he has lost the hope of ever getting it. It pains Nick. If he just could tell him...
"Wow" Monroe voices. "That was ..." He isn't the only one speechless, Bud is frozen in place with bulging eyes and open mouth. A nice change to the expected mockery.
"It was wonderful. Thank you. What was the song about?" "A wish."
"You should sing more often."
"I would like that very much. Sean!" Renards head snaps around to Nick so fast, it's a wonder, that he doesn't hurt himself. What he sees in Nicks eyes, takes his breath away: warmth, want, a feeling of coming home. Nick is welcoming him with open arms. Sean closes his eyes, gives a serene carefree smile and leans back. "Perhaps I will."
Nick smiles softly and feels a bit disappointed not being able to enjoy this sight a little longer. Lest anyone else could disturb him , he takes it upon himself.
"Sean?"
"Mmmh?"
"Its your turn."
Sean Renard opens his eyes blinking. Closes them again, signs long and longingly, sits up and opens his eyes. He looks around frowning. It would be to tempting to choose Nick. Rosalie and the Ice-Biber didn't have their turn yet. 'Better not the nervous one.'
"Rosalie. Truth or dare?"
~Grimm~
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~Grimm~
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"I think I will take the safe route. Truth."
"How did you and Nick become friends?"
Rosalie smiles, even trough she fells a little pain at the memory. " This shop originally belonged to my brother Freddie. I came to Portland to sort out his affairs. I was planning on a short stay, but than Nick and Monroe happened. For a moment I thought he killed my brother, after having found out he's a Grimm. Never would I thought how the following days went.
He brought me to the shop. And I saw, sniff, I saw the blood on the floor. I never thought, I would survive, meeting a Grimm, and to meet one which was compassionate about the death of a Wesen. He didn't even really punish him, when my brother sold Kehr... I mean I had no idea he would... I.. Sign. Nick promised to find the murderer. A Grimm promised to follow the law for a Wesen. It was so surreal."
I want to thank my followers, favouriters and reviewers. I decided to thank everyone. This way I won't forget anyone since the last time. I wrote a little extra to the ones I think are new.
Thank you,
DanceOfTheCrystalRose1993,Eremon, Helensdragon, Killua1fan4life, LadyAliera, Lady Aleroen, Maddy1012, Murderbynuns, WaterSpryte10, aboutnici, emmanu78, eveningfaerie, kristahol, K9grmingTwihard, the midnight stalker, grimmswan, Karree Elaine, a Guest,(21.1.2018)
buecherwurm91( Deine Fav Liste hatte ein paar interessante Geschichten.),
Rainha dos Ladroes (Interesting name),
Fire Hound 365 (Is it a reference to the hounds in Supernatural?),
Winged-Ashes (Interesting choice in Fav stories.'When Worlds Collide', I know of a Naruto x Stargate SG1 crossover with the same title.) and
MessinRound (The Blubad and the Grimm: The story brought me an idea for a story prompt. What would happen if Nick got rescued by his Captain instead of Juliette when the Ogre attacked and had to reveal himself.).
If I misfiled someone, I'm sorry.
Until now this story had got 1.888 views.
With this chapter the 5.000 words mark got crossed! I hope more people are going to read it now. The story got better after the third chapter. Pity, if some stopped reading before it but it isn't one of my best works or my usually quality work.
Thanks Eremon. I decided to start again and actually started writing again after reading your review.
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