Notice to people: FINALLY I got a review. IT IS A FLAME FROM A MESSED UP RUSSIAN COWARD!
He is a coward because he was anonymous.
And he is a dumbass as well. Here is what he wrote:
From: anonymous comrade ()
Stop.
Writing.
Read a good STORY first.
This is not a good STORY.
It isn't even A STORY.
This is you playing like you are playing dolls.
...sorry, ACTION FIGURES~~~
Yeah, drop the sortas, maybe and even writing things that are in (Parenthesis)
like you are explaining some sort of inside joke.
Also, If you need to point which PoV you are using, obviously you are doing it
wrong.
Again, READ A GOOD STORY FIRST. Preferrably, NOT FROM THIS FANDOM..
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First off, I won't stop writing. You can't get better without practice, dipshit. (I will swear a lot for no apparent reason in this notice.)
Second, how does reading other stories make one a better writer? Oh, if I was STEALING their ideas, yes, it would work very well. BUT MY STORY IS NOT STOLEN! And believe me, I have probably read quite a bit more than you, 'comrade'. More varied as well.
Second, I explained why I have trouble writing characters. ADHD, partial Asberger's, and Depression screwin with my mind. My mind does not work like a normal persons. I literally process information in a different manner. Most people process things one at a time, like a dripping faucet. People with ADHD, Autism, Asberger's, etc, deal with it ALL AT ONCE, like a flood. We suffer from information overload.
Third, OF COURSE I'm FREAKING SCREWING WITH THE CHARACTERS! THIS IS A CRACK FANFIC, DUMBASS!
I am literal, and brutally honest. I convey my uncertainty on purpose. What's the matter? Are you frightened because you might have to deal with hints of my emotions? Suck it up, you don't even know my name.
There is no wrong way to write a story. It all depends on the kind of story one wants to write.
And by the way, dumbass…you just insulted every writer on fanfiction. Many of the writers here are quite good, good enough to make money off of writing if they tried. (Ignoring the idiot publishing companies) If the stories here are so bad, then why are YOU here?
*Sigh* I really pity people like you… You sound so childish, trying to insinuate I like dolls, then trying to predict I will get defensive about it… I'm not Kankuro with his puppets and face-paint. You remind me of the "troll" on =3, the YouTube show. I know I'm not supposed to look down on people, but it's really hard when you insist on crawling around in the mud.
So, yeb vos, or however your say it, pizda. Next time you try a flame, use something better than a match.
I WILL WELCOME ANY REVIEW, FLAME OR NOT! And, if I can, I will respond to it publicly.