So I don't know how great this story is but I got some more reviews, but not as much as I wanted. I want to make a shout out to 2 people.

One,jojoandkristinaRbamfZ, because she has reviewed every chapter! (see it pays off to review)

Two again my Bffl Stolen Emotions, for being my Bffl and my beta reader!

Disclaimer: Guess what? I'm not James Patterson


"IGGY! STEP AWAY FROM MY SISTER NOW!"

"Max, please don't be mad," I never felt so scared in my whole life. But I never really faced a problem like this with Max.

"Iggy I'm not mad, I'm furious. Come into the other room NOW!" I have reason to not listen to her, she is Max. She is kind, strong and doesn't like when you mess with her or anyone she knows. Since I'm the guy in this case I get killed, great, thanks America. (What I'm saying there that in other countries the girls get blamed, rude!) "Ok I'll give you nine words to explain yourself."

"I'm not Fang, I can't do that,"

"Two words left,"

"Max!"

"One,"

"Ugh,"

"Ok I learned nothing. Here is 10 more."

"Ok, I love Ella. We are going out. We kissed," I hide my face ready for her rock hard fist to hit me.

"Ok," she breathes, "Don't hide, it shows weakness. Also I get the love thing and I guess the dating thing, but," she breathes again to try to calm down. "Why the HELL WOULD YOU KISS HER! You know she is my sister and you are like my brother and I do not what to see you guys get hurt. Get what I'm putting down!"

"Um yes and no. First of all, I kissed her so don't be mad at her. I would have ended it there but then we kissed again. Second, how are we supposed to not hurt each other, if we may break up?"

"You plan on dumping her!"

"No way, like I said I love her."

ELLA POV

Max and Iggy have been yelling in there for a while. Ouch, a hard arm grabs me and pulls me in. I try to stand up, but then I fall down on a pencil. I pick it up just in case anyone else gets hurt. "Fang, what the hell?"

"Sit down now! We need to talk about you and Iggy."

"Gosh so much for the relationship being a secret."

"Okay, now even though he is my age, Iggy is a little brother to me. I don't want him to get hurt."

"HE IS THE ONE THAT KISSED ME OKAY?"

"No you kissed him after, I know things."

"Well, sorry for liking a guy,"

"Are you sorry?"

"What? We are not breaking up, ok. I don't plan on it. Stop bugging me or I'll bug you about Max."

"What?"

"Don't act like it's not true, I can't here you guys kissing at night. I don't yell at you guys and hurt your arm! Leave me alone!" (a/n: I didn't want to make Ella sound bitchy but I think it worked)

"Ok, but stay safe, both of you." I nod to agree. All I want is a boyfriend and I get hurt for it. Right now I just want to see Iggy. I look out the kitchen window, near the sink. It is hard to look out, because mom but a lot of crap on it. He is just sitting there, looking totally cute. I run to the door, stopping to breathe right before I get there. "Hey, was Max bad? I'll yell at her later."

"I'll yell at Fang for you." I nod knowing that he found out. "Here is the plan, we are going back to the place tonight. Bring, a few snacks, a blanket and you know pjs."

"First I think I'll change before I get there, just in case,"

"You still don't trust me? Oh well come out once Max is in Fangs room, I'll get Max to let me sleep out here."

"Ok got it, see you cutie,"

"I was hoping for baby,"

"And I was hoping for a sweeter, boyfriend,"

"I guess we both lose, see ya," I left knowing he wasn't mad about what I just said. I hope that this night doesn't go wrong. I have an odd feeling it will.


That was Ella's epic forshadowing, lol. I really like that I got 2 more reviews, you know I would like more, but that is ok. Now there is over 5 reviews! If I get 10 I will write a one long chapter or 2 chapters in one story! (That is my great prize, sorry I can't send you iPods or something).

Question: If you were any famous person who would you be and what would you do?

Me: I would be… ok I gots nothing. Idk maybe Goku (lol) I'm addicted to that show, Stolen Emotions knows that. (Remember to send the message) If I was Goku I would save the world, I guess?