so here's part 4 hope you like it and as I have said before what we writers want is to know what you readers thing good or bad cos it helps us tp wtite better so leave a review.
Ichigo and Rukia were out killing a particularly annoying hollow. It was fast and could hide its spirit pressure. Ichigo squinted through the trees of the forest, trying to catch a glimpse or a shimmer of the leaves moving as the hollow hid from them; but nothing, he saw and felt nothing. Rukia came up next to him with her Zanpakuto raised.
"Anything?" she asked. She moved so that they were back to back.
"No," he hissed. Suddenly a tree came swinging at them from the right. They jumped out of the way skidding on the soft forest floor. "This is crazy!" Ichigo growled letting loose a getsuga tenshou where the tree had swung from, but he didn't hit anything.
"Stay calm, fool," Rukia scolded him, but her momentary lapse in focus gave the hollow a window to strike. She was sent flying, crashing through the trees. She lost sight of Ichigo as she smashed into the last tree. She rolled over the ground then came to a stop as a boulder got in the way.
"Rukia!" Ichigo yelled giving the hollow yet another opening, sending him flying just like Rukia had.
Rukia was getting to her feet when Ichigo came sailing past her head and smashed into the boulder behind her.
"Ichigo!" she dashed to his side, grabbing him by the shoulder. He sprang back up. "I see that you're alright," she sighed.
"Yeah," Ichigo looked wildly round them looking for anything. "Damn," he cursed. "Looks like I have no choice. Ban-" He was slammed from the side before he could finish.
"Ichigo! Damn it S-" she was hit just like Ichigo. The hollow kept pounding her into the ground. Ichigo saw Rukia getting beaten and reached for his sword but it was so far away from him. Damn, he wouldn't make it in time. Damn. Damn!
The hollow was about to use a cero. Rukia wasn't moving anymore. Suddenly, something came flying at the hollow from the sky and knocked it far away from Rukia. The cero was released into the sky was the hollow went tumbling into the forest.
"AAAAAHHHHH- OOPH- AHHHHH," Ichigo heard someone else's voice. He narrowed his eyes and saw a figure starting to stand up in the dust cloud. "Ow, that hurt." He didn't recognise the voice. The dust cleared and he saw a shihakusho. Soon a head come into view, orange shoulder length hair with three small plats decorated with beads. The soul reaper bent down and grabbed the hilt of Zangetsu. Ichigo tensed.
The hollow came back, fully visible now. It was standing above the new comer and drew back a fist.
"Watch out!" he yelled trying to worn the soul reaper.
"Wow, you're a fast one aren't you," Ichigo heard them say and he watched with wide eyes as they pulled Zangestu from the ground and cleaved off the arm swinging at them. "Here!" they shouted flinging Zangetsu at him. Ichigo scrambled back and his sword landed point first between his legs. He gulped.
Ok so I had a lot of fun writing this one! and I can't wait to get the next one up. Leave a review tell me what you think x