Hi everyone thanks for the reviews great to see, here is the next chapter I hope you like it, next chapter we will finally find out about Mia and the is she isn't she pregnant ;-) its written ready to post tomorrow sometime.
Elizabeth opens the car door and drags me out this is it this is where I either save Mia, 'lil blip' and myself or I completely mess it up and make the situation worse 'keep calm Grey you can do this' is all I can chant in my head while my subconscious is tutting furiously tapping her foot meh ill deal with her later maybe put her on eBay and get a new subconscious 'you wouldn't!'
We walk into an abandoned building and I notice Elizabeth has the bag of money on her 'thank god' making our way through the door I notice is not just run down but literally falling apart the walls are crumbling the staircase has missing steps there's damp patches everywhere and the only light in the building is the flickering of candles burning. I look around ears pinged hoping to hear Mia or Jack but nothing, Elizabeth puts the bag down then pushes me through another door and it's an empty room nothing but a mattress on the floor again damp all over the walls, I turn to face Elizabeth who lets out a giggle before backhanding me causing me to fall to the floor before I have a chance to get up she has locked me in here in darkness. I have nothing to do but sit and wait I know this isn't going to be pretty I look down to my tummy and start rubbing it thinking about lil blip seems to calm me which is strange considering the circumstances this could cause me to lose my unborn child I shudder at the thought no we will be ok ill make sure of it, I feel round making sure I still have the gun yes I do good.
I stand up holding the gun in my hand pointing it towards the door, soon as they open it I'll shoot all the times my dad took me shooting never in my life did I think I'd be using a gun on someone. Suddenly I can here shouting and I recognise them as Jack and Elizabeth. "SHIT THAT BITCH TRICKED US, THAT FUCKER AND HIS SECURITY WILL BE HERE ANY SECOND I THOUGHT YOU SAID YOU CHECKED THE BAG" with that I hear something which sounds like he slapped her "I I did, I'm I'm sorry please don't hurt me I done what you asked"
I hear the key turn in the lock, my heart is beating so fast I think it might actually escape my chest dig itself a tunnel and run. Hand raised gun pointing to the door I'm ready as the door opens
Before I have a chance to do anything, jack is standing there with an unconscious Mia using her as a shield 'did he know I was armed? But how? Really Grey your asking yourself this now… you know he coming over to you right? Snap out of it now Grey'.
"Think I'll take that bitch" he hisses at me while snatching the gun out of my hand and throwing Mia on the mattress
"you know you really are the gullible little prick tease I thought you was, did you really think once you came here with the money I was going to just wave you off back to your husband to live happily ever after? That would be too easy now wouldn't it I want you to suffer I want that asshole you call a husband to suffer once I'm finished with you he won't want you, you will be so messed up no one will ever look at you again" he looks so smug eyes full of revenge and hatred.
"Well if that's the case you shouldn't have asked for the money" I throw at him he looks amused yet concerned by this statement
"And why is that?" he asks watching me closely
"When I was at the bank getting you the money you demanded, they had to verify it with Christian to which he asked to speak to me" I pause 'keep going Grey you're doing really well'
" I told him I was leaving him and he believed me, so you see your plan whatever it is wont work because he doesn't want anything more to do with me and thinks I'm the gold digging whore you claim I am" there said it face complete impassive at least I hope it was.
"is that so, well in that case I see no reason why I shouldn't do as I see fit with you hope you like it rough whore because I'm going to fuck you in every way I want to and believe me I'll enjoy every second of it" what? What have I done this can't happen please god no
"Don't worry I have something to do first then I'll be back oh you may want to check on this one she seems a little sleepy don't you think" he sniggers as he leaves and locks the room.
I rush over to Mia checking her for a pulse; yes she has one that's one good thing. I try waking her but its no use she is out cold. I need to stay calm but it's difficult I have a hundred emotions running through me I look down to my tummy knowing 'lil blip' is the cause of most I can't help but smile even in this scenario I'm locked in a dark damp room my sister in law is unconscious and 'lil blip' is playing with my emotions he or she will defiantly take after Christian. Then it dawns on me Jack knows about the phone yet he hasn't moved us. Why hasn't he though? I mean for what he has planned for me you think he would have dragged us into the car and put his foot down.
I hear brakes screeching car doors slamming and Christian yes I hear my fifty he is here to save us I knew he wouldn't give up on me… on us I think as I rub my tummy. I hear Jack run to the door and unlock it.
"Well looks like we have guests lets go and welcome them in shall we" hey says calmly as he grabs me and drags me back to room I first walked into. Cowering in the corner is Elizabeth I notice her face is starting to bruise and she has a split lip, she looks at me and then back to the ground. Suddenly I'm flung to the ground and kicked several time all I can do is curl into a ball to protect 'blip' I feel a sharp kick to my sides then another to my head. I get Jacks plan now he wants me to look battered before Christian finally comes to this house out of the many he must be checking looking for me. I feel another kick again in my ribs before he bends down pulls me up by my hair and slapping me again blowing punches on me.
"Stop stop please" I beg but he doesn't he just smirks
"I'm pregnant please stop please" tears falling my pleading for it to end
"You're pregnant? Well I'll be doing that unborn bastard a favour by killing it" and he continues his assault on me
Throwing me back to the ground I wince in pain it's too much I can't take any more, this makes the 'red room if pain' look painless. Jack stops mid kick to the sounds of rushing people outside, quickly pulling me up holding the gun which I brought into this crazy situation to my head and waits. Before I have a chance to take in what was happening the door is kicked open and there's Taylor and Sawyer and stood behind them is Christian my poor fifty he looks so hurt confused worried and angry, I can't bear to look at him no more its killing me seeing him look like that because if me it's all my doing.
"You know you could have knocked I would have answered" Hyde said laughing
I vaguely see Taylor and Sawyer step closer, not before I'm dragged back a couple of steps. Taylor looks Pissed real Pissed and Sawyer he can't bear to look at me. We know why of course I briefly wonder how much begging I'll have to do for him to forgive me for locking him on the balcony and giving him the slip.
"Ah not so fast, don't want pretty little Mrs Grey to look like a bowling ball do we?" 'Huh bowling ball? I don't get it'
"I've had enough of this fucking around "Christian shuts as he pushes past both Taylor and Sawyer
"You got 3 seconds to let go of my Wife or I will fucking kill you with my bare hands!" he hisses my god I do love angry Grey especially when it's not aimed at me.
"I don't think you're in quite the position to be issuing me with threats do you? I mean look around here I'm the one holding your wife at gun point" and I feel him push it against my temple
"What do you want Hyde?"
"Why Mr Grey haven't you figured it out yet, I want everything you have your money your wife your ivory tower you hide in I want everything. But right now your stopping me from doing so so move out the fucking way!" Hyde hisses but Christian does move not even a flinch
"I see you want me to play games do you baby bird well let's play, move or I shoot prick tease here" he says while moving the gun to my back pushing it hard against me. And still Christian doesn't move "damn it Mr Control Freak you clearly can't control this move please god just move" my subconscious screams –whens a good time to tell her he can't hear her? Although I'm thinking the exact same thing.
"Very well" and with that he pulls the trigger I feel like my world is ending my poor fifty looks shocked tears escaping him. I hear another gun shot and I'm falling to the floor along with a now very dead Jack Hyde. A bullet to the head I'm guessing that was Taylor and another to the chest. I look at his face and realise the whole 'look like a bowling ball' comment now.
"Ana! Oh my god my Ana, my baby, I love you baby you will be ok stay with me my sweet Ana" Christian cries as he holds me
"Save Mia" is all I can say before I'm faced with complete darkness.