I love the review I got and a thousand apologizes for all the grammer and spelling mistakes *bows head*.
-Warning: spelling and grammar errors ahead-
From: Ubermarine
So she's a biological sister of luffy?
From: Yoshisaki Asuka
I like it please don't delete it :) And Law seems a little OOC, but that's okay since there is an OC and it probably just shows how different he is around her. :)
From: Yoshisaki Asuka
Okay I'm a little confused about the names. In the first chapter Luffy called his sister Saki. But in the second chapter she's Raven. The third chapter I'm pretty sure her name was just an alias, Jasmine. Oh and you have a few grammar mistake, but other than that you're doing GREAT! Sorry I rambled on :p
Ubermarine and Yoshisaki Asuka to answer your questions read this chapter and you will see.
Enjoy :)
Raven's POV (?)
"Hello?"
"Hello, Jasmine."
Everyone looked at me for a moment and that was when I started to laugh. "So, how did you know it was me and not Cypress or Raven?"
"Easy, your voice."
"Bravo Kidd. Bravo."
After a good five minutes of talking Kidd said something that caught my attention. "I will find you and even if I have to I will use force to bring you and your two friends back to my crew."
*clank*
After that everyone looked at me. "Okay, the reason I took Raven's form was because she is on this island but I don't know where. I hope she is alright. When we left and ran from Kidd she took the most damage than me and Cypress so hopefully she well be alright."
Law's POV
When the whole alliance was talked out and the plan was said I took Raccoon-ya with me to the lab to get more info on the drug. When I dropped him off and left with Monet that was when I found it hard to walk and breathe. I fell on the ground and that was when Vegro came into the hall.
"What the hell are you doing here?! Vegro?!"
"That's Vegro-san to you brat," he said and hit me with the bamboo stick. I was knocked out.
When I woke up I found Smo-ya, the girl marine, Luffy-ya, Ronbin-ya, and the cyborg in the cage with me.
"Just an FYI Law, Vegro has your heart," Ceaser said and Vegro squished it. He squished it again and that was when Jasmine came in and kicked it out of him hand.
"Aaahhh," I screamed and then when I was able to control my breathing my heart was up at the ceiling. Out of the blue a large artic wolf came and was running up the wall and grabbed my heart in a gentle way. It landed on the floor and glared at Ceaser, Monet, Vegro and Jasmine and came toward the cage. It walked right through and looked at me. I looked back into its eyes and saw her, Raven. I said nothing but left her to do whatever she was hoping to do.
She moved one paw up and pulled my coat down till it showed the empty space and she slipped it back into me. After that she laid her head on my lap and fell asleep.
"Who the hell is that?!" Ceaser yelled.
"I have no idea but whoever it was just put Law's heart back in him," Monet said.
"Her name is Raven," I said cuz' she was allowing me to tell them.
"That's impossible because she isn't a wolf!" Jasmine snapped at him. And with that Raven woke up and broke the bars in front of us. The sea prism stone was removed and Luffy-ya jumps on her and so do everyone else. I jumped on her and she ran out the door and ran towards a wall and ran right through it. She ran toward a snow bank and that was when it led to an underground tunnel. We hid there for a moment and that was when she transformed into her human form.
She wore black shorts with a green tank and a black coat with no sleeves on it. She collapsed on the floor and that was when Luffy-ya caught her and lifted his hand and saw blood. "Raven?"
I ran toward her and place my hand on her cheek. She opened her eyes and looked around at us. "Thank god. No one got hurt."
Luffy-ya hugged her and she sighed in relief and hugged back. "I'm sorry Lu if I scared you. I promise I won't leave you."
Luffy's POV
After I released her form the hug she was already asleep. I smiled and placed her on my lap. "So Straw Hat…who exactly is she?" Smokey asked with curiosity.
"She's my sister."
"Adopted? Biological?"
"Biological. She's my twin sister and we were separated at birth. I was sad and never knew why till one day grandpa brought her home. Ace, Sabo and I got to know her, and of course, Ace and I always had an argument about who was the best brother to her and she always picked all of us."
"Yep, it was the only way I could not get you two to fight so I decide to pick the both of you," opens her eyes, "I'm sorry about Ace."
"Its okay, but I do have one question."
"What is it?"
"Why were we separated at birth? Where did you go?"
Raven sat up and turned so that she looked at all of us. "Did you ever hear about the tales of the island for thoughs who have the spirit of an animal inside them?" We all shake our head yes. "I was born with the spirit of the artic wolf. I was given the mark when I was born and ever since I have been working in my powers and controlling it and using the magic too. For the wolf I am strong, smart, and I can strategize."
"So that is why you were gone."
"But what others don't understand is that the wolf represents many things. I do have my own pack but they live of in Dressrosa."
"Oh sis," I said pulling out the picture form my pocket, "Why did I find this in the ocean?"
"I sent it in the ocean only cuz' I knew that you would come to this island. And plus, one of the wolves abilities is that I could see very far off and plus when I ran from Kidd I saw your ship fly out of the ocean and sail here."
"Why did you run away from Kidd?" Luffy asked.
"Yea, Jasmine talked with him through a transponder snail. Why?" Law asks.
"SHE DID WHAT?! Did she tell him where we are?!"
Raven's POV
When I heard what Law said I jumped up and just when I was out of the hiding spot that was when guns started to off. I ran back to the hideout and that was when I transform into the artic wolf. Law was on first then Luffy, Smoker and the marine lady. I ran out and went straight for the lab and that was when I noticed SMILEY. After I dropped them off I ran toward it and saw more of Luffy's crew. I stopped in front of them and they jumped on. I ran to the lab as the door closed I ran right through it and scared everyone and I wiped out Ceaser's men. I sat in a sitting position and Luffy ran up and gave me a hug. I walked away and went to go look for Jasmine.
I ran to the room and that was when I saw her. I ran to her and began to growl at her. I pin her to the ground and stare at her.
"I didn't tell Kidd where we are if that is what you are wondering."
I let her go and then ran off to the S.A.D factory. With that I saw Law and I was at his side. I went into my human form and stared at the tanks. Law moves to me and wrapped his arm around my shoulders. I leaned on him and that was when an idea popped into my head.
"Law, are you teaming up with my brother to take Kaido down?"
"That's the plan. Why?"
"No reason. But it does explain Vegro," I moved till I stood in front of him and place my hand on his heart. "Mes."
I took the heart out and knew right away that it wasn't Law's.
"So the both of you bit the hand that feeds you."
"Law and I looked and saw Vegro at the door. "Nice job switching the hearts. So I take it this is Monet's heart?"
"I guess that is why Joker made you his favorite."
Well that's all for now and I bet you all did not see that coming. *Scratches back of head* Well leave a review and the next chapter well be up soon.