1PSYCH!
Author's Note:
Yeah there's no chapter four yet, sorry if I got your hopes up. Actually this is about the way I set up my chapters, especially the dialogue. I'm just paranoid that it's a little hard to read, not intellectually but visually. I'm not sure if I like the flow of the dialogue or if its even easy to follow with the constant breaks for descriptions. I guess I'm just asking what you think. Let me know you guys because I'm writing this for all of you. I only have to write it but you are the ones who actually read this story.
Also any other feedback that you guys want to give, please do so.
Please le me know & remember reviews make me smile )