Okay everybody. this is wher ethe real story begins! In this chapter the story will get a form, and the red thread will be more visible. So please keep reading!

And sorry for the late update >..

Disclaimer:
I linn, does not own any of the naruto characters or the naruto series. But however, I do own the universe that I'm about to create!

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Deidara.. next to a black and red bike..

I had to fight not to say something sarcasticm so I just nodded and got on behind him. As I held around his waste, I noticed that he was suprisingly thin. Mabye this was why he worse such baggy clothes?

"Deidara express at your service, yeah.. Where are we going, miss?" He spoke in a 'pretending-to-be-formal' tone.

"Well.. err.. You just bike to that ramen store thing, and I'll tell you from there" I explained. I didn't really remember any of the street names, but I was pretty sure I knew the way from the place I met fishcake boy.
Now, dei-chan turned out to be a skilled biker. He managed to get us to the ramen store, without any problems.
"now what, yeah?" He asked, using his wet sleeve to dry his forehead..

"uhm.. Just go down the way in front of us, and to the.. left, I think.. "

Dei-chan nodded and went after my directions. it didn't take him long to get to my house. "that'll be about 15 bucks, miss" Deidara grinned as he got of the bike, and pretended to open an invisible door.

I just giggled and kissed him on the cheek. He stood still for a moment.
"that will do, yeah"

And with that he biked off, waving at me.

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Dedaras point of view:

She kissed me on the cheek... She's incrediby cute, yeah.. too bad that.. SECRET SPOILER

I can't help but to feel attracted to her.. But if we could hav ea future.. it's a shame that we're supposed to be SECRET SPOILER
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As I biked away, the rain fell heavier on me. I concstantly had to dry the rain away from my seeing eye. It made my hair stick to the side of my face, wich i didn't show.
Damn, did I hate him for doing this to me!

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Sakuras point of viw.

As I reached the front door, I noticed a piece of paper lying by my feets. Thanks to the edge of the roof , it was completly dry.
I picked it up, and noticed that there actually was two notes. I picked both up, and tried to open the door.
Suprisingly it was locked. getting out my keys, I un locked it and walked into our new house.

It wasn't all that big.. But it doesn't need to be. 3 people doesn't need too much space. I live with my mother and one of my two older twin brother. The other one moved in with his girlfriend last year. I feel sorry for Nori, the one left..

I kicked off my shoes, hung up my coat and thorwed my backpack towards the stairs. then I got into the living room and sat down on the couch to read the notes.

the fist one said:

"Hello dear. I had to stay late for work.. again. It was an emegency. Please don't stay up and wait, honew. There's omey on the refrigirator so you guys can call for pizza or something if you want.
I love you both
mom."

I shaked my head, and put the note on the table in front of me. I knew very well that mom didn't hav eto stay late for work.
staying late for job was her normal excuse when she had gotten herself a new boyfriend. If she decided to go for him, she'd tell us about him. But that rearely happened before the 5th date or so.

She's been like that for as long as I can remember. I don't really mind tho.. She's got good taste, so she always gets herself nice boyfriends.
My dad left us when I was 2. the first five years, me and my brothers spent some time with him for the first five years, but then we started to move around for some reason. And i lost all contact with him. But according to my mom, I have a half sister.. not that I care.. I have my two brothers and my soon to be sister in law pluss my mother, and that's just the perfect size of a family.

I looked down at the remaning note. it had a light green pastell colour to it..
I opened it up and started to read read.
it said:
"TO MY YOUTHFULL CHERRYBLOSSOM OG SPRING"
'how does he know where I live..?'
"I wanted to ask you to go to the youthfull fireworkfestival this weekend. it will be a youthfull experience for sure! I promise you!
Answer at school ,please.
- Rock lee insert a little drawing of a rock with eyebrows"

why was it that he acted like this..? did he always freak newbies out like this?

I shivered for a second, and then I got over it...

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ten minutes later I was in the kitchen, making myself something to eat. now, it's not a secret that I can't cook. But I decided to save the money mom had left us, and just eat something simple! After all, I was saving up some money to buy myself a laptop.
'don't want cereal, breads to boring.. I'll just make myself some ramen..'
And as thought so done.. I boiled water (and burned myself), opened the instant ramen boslike thing (and burned myself again), got scared from burning myself and ended up throwing the pot on the floor. I furned my feet.. Had to dry it up, had to find ice for my feet, forgot to turn of the owen, the instant ramen cup burned, the fire alarm went off.. I throwed the ice for my feet at the cup, turned off the oven, managed to turn of the fire alarm and decided to eat the cereal after all..

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After eating the cereal I went up to lay down and just think.. you know, clear my head..
and that was when inner Sakura decided to turn up and change my life..

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Deidaras point of view

"Mom, I'll go home now.. I'm finished packing out everything now" I shouted, as I throwed the last ball of tape in the garbadgecan.
"Yeah, sure honey. I'll come home in an hour or so" mom replied from inside the store.

You see, my mom owns this little store, wich sells just about everything. And I help her out, since it's hard to get workers around here.
Originally, I was supposed to get into the art academy, but then he ruined my life, by taking all the money my grandma had saved up for me and destroying what's the most precious to an artist..

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Okay people, it's time for a "CHAPTER IN A CHAPTER"

Deidaras story

Deidaras life haven't been a walk in the sunshine, or a bed of clouds.. When he was eight his parents decided to split up. It was expected, though. since deidaras dad was sort of a controll freak, it was understandable that his mom couldn't handle it.

and being the controll freak, he was he also kept the kids. And it worked out.

Deidara grew up, standing in the shadow of his older brother Ren. He was a genious at boxing, and he had actually made a sports scolarship because of it. and that's why Deidaras grandmother gave all her money to him, for school. since his brother allready had a sure future.
and that's also a reason for why deidara and rens father loved Ren so much. He was proud of his son, when he got the scolarship. and he couldn't stop bragging about it. As a matter of fact, they even throwed a party just for him.

And in all this deidara was forgotten. It wasn't like he minded it.. He had always felt like he was more of a mammas boy then daddys boy. If it had been up to him. he'd stayed with his mom..

But of course something went horibly wrong.. Deidara and his older brother, are boys.. And as most boys, they loved doing things they weren't alowed to do. like playing with dynamites..
They used to hide in the woods, and blow up old car parts or stuff they found lying around.
Then one day when Deidara had turned 17, they found a barrel. Wich they decided to blow up. What they didn't know was the content of the barrel. But they sis like they usually did.

And as they covered their ears Deidara shut his eyes. And because of that. he never saw what happened.
Ren noticed something was wrong, and as the protecting bog brother, he throwed himself over Deidara.
Deidara noticed something falling over him, and he looked up to se his brother gasp in pain.
his whole body had deep wounds and his skin was burned, so that you almost could see the flesh.

Somehow, Deidara managed to get his brother home.and as they entered the garden, their father came running out.
"What happened?" he shouted.
Deidara shaked, as he layed his brother down on the soft grass. He wasn't councious, but his breath was steady. but even tho, he had lost a lot of blood, and he needed medical care.
"WHAT HAPPENED?" deidaras father shouted again, this time he was shaking deidara.
He couldn't answer.. He just cried.
"DEIDARA, what happened to yout brother?" He smacked his blond son and started into his blue clear eyes.
"I will ask you again.. what happened?"
Deidara didn't answer. He got down on all four and puked.
And just as he fell down, an ambulance came.
"what happened? I saw deidara came dragging on ren, so I called the amulance" The old neigbouhoos shouted, as he ran towars the scenario.

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Ren had gone to the hospital, and deidara had comed down so much that he managed to tell his dad what happened. and the reaction was beyond what anyone could've expected.

When he heard from the hospital that ren would surive, but that his boxin career was broken. And that it was most likely that he couldn't keep up with boxing at all, he turned to deidara in anger.
It happened to be so that bosing was the thing that was most precious to ren. And their father too.

"you have ruined your brothers future!"
"i..i"
His father, shaking in anger.
Deidara slowly backing up against the wall.
His father coming closer, streching his hand out.
"If Rens loosing his mos precious thing, then so are you"
And with that Deidaras own father scrached deidaras one so that it got ripped up. Deidara would never bee able so see with it again.
"and if you tell anyone.. " his father began.
but he didn't even need to finish the sentence. Because that's when deidara called an amuilance for himself, and moved to his mother.

the year after Deidara had big problems getting used to having one eye. So he had to stay a year behind. He lived at his mothers house, helping her in the store. And when the first school day came, he knew that things would change.

Okay, deidaras story is pretty hollywood.. but so let it be! I couldn't come up with something else xD

Now, a lot of magical like things are going to appear in this story during the next chapter.

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