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Shadowclan ran from the camp, Lightpaw smiled. She had won, now no one could hurt her family. She felt un-stopable.

Lightpaw!" said Firestar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"

"Okay!" Said Lightpaw happily. "But can we go hunting after, i wanna catch a squirrel" "Well, okay we can go hunting." said Firestar. "But I want to see what you know about fighting."

"Alright" Lightpaw mewed excitedly They went to the forest together and the other cats where either being patched up by Jayfeather or going on patrols. "Now Lightpaw" said Firestar once they got to the training hollow. "We'll start with how to dodge."

"Cmon thats to easy!" yelled Lightpaw. She felt ready for anything and she knew that something like that would get boring quickly.

"Dodging certain attacks can be harder than you think lightpaw" mewled Firestar, she knew he was right so she decided not to argue.

"Yes" Yowled Lightpaw as she jumped in the air not giving Firestar time to land a hit. She hit his side he didn't look suprised when she hit him just smiled, "That was to soft of a hit to do any damage" he purred at her, "But regardless of that your doing awesome." "Really?" Lightpaw said while her adrenaline rushed. She didn't think she was doing that good, was she really special like the Prophecy said?

"Yes Lightpaw." mewed Firestar. "I couldn't even get away in fast enough, now back to our training"

"Alright!" purred Lightpaw. She was jumping and sliding away for attacks like a pro in no time. "The last person I saw dodge like that was Brambleclaw, when he was Bramblepaw" Firestar said with a purr of amusement. "So, I'm like Brambleclaw?" she mew with uncertainty, "Not in a bad way though" he mew quickly. "I didn't think you meant it in a bad way" she mewed looking at him. "We should get back to training if we want to get to Hunt before sundown" He mewed look better.

"Sure, what are we doing now." she said she felt even more powerful than before, They trained for awhile on simple swipes. Lightpaw managed to(barely) beat Firestar 8 times, she thought he was letting her win for awhile than began not to care. After a while she was little tired.

"Firestar, can we hunt now." Lightpaw said trying to sound dignified. "I am kinda hungry." he mewed before going off with Lightpaw in tow.

"The main part of hunting is speed." Firestar said as they were walking, Lightpaw had been having so much fun but now she wanted to hunt. So they went hunting, Lightpaw messed up quite a few times but Firestar said it was okay since it was only her first time. When the came back the with prey, they where carrying 3 mice(Lightpaws catches) and a few birds(Firestars catch).

Later that night Lightpaw looked up at the stars. She and Firestar acomplished so much in a short time. They had brought back enough food for the the queens and elder plus more.

Looking up at the stars she turned to her best friend, Jasminepaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."

"Definitely." Purred Jasminepaw. "I mean we'll rule this clan, with one of us as leader and the other as deputy, one day well have too!"

"Ya." Said Lightpaw purred while smiling she loved Jasmineaw, they were best friends. She looked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head about her unknown fate.

That was really fun to write, the end was awesome to :3

-KALYPSO OUT!