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To Abigail: Jake left for Romania in the episode where he and Miley kissed. I think it was called People who Use People. Okay, so I looked it up lol.
Okay, so this chapter pretty much just picks up where the previous left off. I hope the story is so far enjoyable and liked by all. My favorite scenes from the last chapter were with Lily and Jackson (love them together, but we'll see what the story brings), and with Nikki and Oliver. I will leave it up to you to figure out which N/O scene I am talking about. lol.
In your review, be more specific about what was good and not good, if possible, so I can make the story more enjoyable for everybody. In addition, make sure to mention you favorite pairings, so I can see if they can be incorporated. It's not all going to be how it seems now when the story ends.
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Chapter Four…"The Concert"
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Nikki's POV
In the morning, all of us girls woke up early to pull a little prank on the guys. Yes, guys because we will be pranking Jackson too. How could we not?
Lucky for us, Jackson must have come downstairs in the middle of the night, since we woke up to find him asleep on the couch in the living room, which makes the prank better and easier.
I, with Lily's help dragged Oliver (he is such a sound sleeper) over to Jackson. Then, all of us pulled Jackson on the floor next to him. We made it so that they had their arms wrapped around one another, and Lily put lipstick on them both. I grabbed the camera and took like twenty pictures. But, here came the good part.
"Oh, Jackson, Oh Oliver." I whispered in their respective ears.
"Oh Nikki." They both relied and wrapped their arms tighter. HA!
"I loooove you, Jackson…Oliver."
"Me too." And just as they were about to kiss each other, I took pictures, while Miley and Lily poured a bucket of water on each of them!
"AHHHH!"
"What's wrong guys?" We 'innocently' asked.
"What's wrong!? You poured water on us!!"
"That's not all." I told them, showing them the pictures that I had already emailed myself, Lily, and Miley in case they erased them.
"OH MY GOD!! THAT WAS YOU, NOT A DREAM!!??!!"
"Oh, so you guys dream about kissing me lately?"
"Oh, um no, but uh you know." They both stammered.
"Well, I am dating you, so that's my excuse."
"Fine but what about you, oh brother of mine, do you maybe like Nikki?"
"WHAT! I mean uh no well yeah, but not like like. I just uh um gottagobye."
"That was classic." "Booyah!"
After we ate Mr. Stewart's pancakes for breakfast, all four of us headed to the beach, while Jackson went off to work. We talked about a lot of different things, and Oliver and I kissed a few times, and Jackson even joined us for a little bit on his break. At four, we went back to Miley's house to get ready for the concert.
I was wearing a cute black mini skirt and a bright turquoise halter top, complete with matching cowgirl boots, and my hair straightened and half-pulled back.
Miley had on her usual Hannah attire. She was wearing skinny jeans tucked into cowgirl boots that were fancier than mine, but not too fancy, and a hot pink sparkly top with a half-light pink-sweatshirt over it. Obviously, she was wearing her wig. We decided that I didn't need too, since I hardly ever wore my hair like this to school.
"Lola" was in her normal 'get-up' of a wild print wig and crazy fashion. We even brought Oliver along, since Lily slipped to him about Jake coming and he wanted to see, rather than hear what happened. We decided that he would dress as Lola's brother, so he too wore crazy fashion and a bright wig, and we named him Larry, since it was the first "L" name we could come up with.
We got out of the limo and immediately the photographers started bombarding us with questions and flashes, asking who both Oliver and I were. I was allowed to answer, by Miley's dad, so I told them a short version of my story and said that Oliver's name was Larry and he was Lola's brother.
Soon after, we hurried inside, changed into the first outfits for the show, and Miley and I went on stage. We preformed I got Nerve, Nobody's Perfect, This is the Life, and Who Said. Then, Miley sang I Miss You, which everyone (well, Lily, Oliver, and I) could tell she was singing for Jake. Wouldn't she be surprised to see him here tonight?
Since all she needed was herself, a guitar, and a microphone for that song, I wasn't needed on stage, so I ran backstage to see if there was a Jake update. Lily, I mean Lola, told me that Jake had been sitting in the front row the whole time, so I peaked behind the curtain and saw that he was, indeed. OH NO! What if Miley saw him? Well, she couldn't have, since I didn't, because there was a glare from the spotlight over the front of the audience.
"Lily! What are we going to do?"
"What do you mean? It's not like it matters if he sees her as Hannah."
"Yeah, but he will be looking for Miley and she's not here."
"So, he'll figure that the place is too big and she had bad seats or something."
"No Lily, you don't understand. He told me that he would be able to find her because he 'has his ways'. He will do something drastic and she won't be able to go because she is Hannah and needs to continue the concert as Hannah, so she can't show up as Miley and it's all my fault!"
"Whoa, first of all calm down, and second of all, Miley will never know that you told Jake, so she will just figure that he came to see Hannah to get advice to see Miley or something and it will all work out."
"You're just saying that." I really hope she's right though. Uh, oh, here they both come.
"Hey Hannah, great show. This is so much fun I can't believe it is intermission already. I am having the best time!"
"Me too, I am really glad you get to perform with me. Hey, who's that guy Lily is talking to?"
"Uh I'm not sure, but don't you have to change for the next songs. I already did, as you can probably tell, so why don't you go do that now, so that you will be ready when the break is over." I said that really fast, trying to get her away from Jake. But it was too late, as I soon learned when Lily walked over with him, with her "sorry" look to me. I glared at her and she shrugged. Then, Miley turned around.
"AHH! OH MY GAWD JAKE WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!" And then, she did the worst possible thing – she kissed him.
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Sorry for the long wait and the short chapter, but I wanted to leave it like that, so I will update as soon as I can, but I am going on vacation Sunday and I still need to pack. I want to get a chapter out before then, since Achey Jakey Heart will be on on Sunday, but we'll see. Remember to REVIEW! if you do, I will try extra hard to update before I leave. Otherwise, you will have to wait. Thanks again to my reviewers! Hope more of you like it than review because otherwise I guess the story stinks. okay, BYE…REVIEW!!!!!!
