Well this is chapter four of my fan-fiction. I think I've been doing good, but leave comments so I can see if I am or not, you know?
Well here's chapter four!
Kyoshi continued exploring the village hidden in the clouds. It seemed pretty cool; the markets all had neat stuff, better than the stuff in Konoha. Kyoshi then came across an odd pathway, it was pretty messy, and it was dark-ish, Kyoshi saw a house a few feet from the path. Kyoshi let the curiosity get the best of him and he walked to it, but then sensed a trap go off by his foot. Darts shot out from a random direction Kyoshi saw them with peripheral vision, and jumped back in time. Kyoshi looked around waiting for anything else to come back, he then continued walking again but at a steadier pace. After a few minutes walking in the path he was up to the house but before he could even get towards the door he felt a presence behind him, he felt the blade of a sword just barely on his neck.
"Trespasser." A voice said it seemed demanding and low like, but also young at the same time, maybe like an 8 year old.
"Speak outsider, what is your name?" The voice said again, Kyoshi didn't want to give vital information to a stranger, and that person knew that after a few minutes.
Kyoshi spun around having the strangers hand twisted making the blade drop from his hands. He then brought the person down but was immediately kicked in the stomach and flung to the other side of the person. Kyoshi immediately got up, his fist concealed by his ribs and his hand out in front of him, looking at the man. The man…well kid, was dark skinned and had dreadlocks, he also had short like sunglasses, and had white robes with a black undershirt. He wore a white lightning village headband, and black ninja sandals. He had two sword holsters strapped to his back, and two strapped to his belt, one of his swords was already flung beside him. Kyoshi looked at the mans feet, when sparring with Jourin, Kyoshi learned that you could vaguely tell where the person is going by the way they move there feet. It seemed he was moving to the right, so right when the kid made a move to the right, Kyoshi shifted to the left.
"Wrong!" the person said and quickly drifting towards Kyoshi at fast speed, and slamming him in the gut, it made Kyoshi cough up spit, and slammed him into a tree trunk. He was then flung to the ground and had a sword to his neck.
"Now I ask you again, what is your name." the kid said, Kyoshi didn't really have a choice in this one.
"Kyoshi, Uchiha…I have come to this village with my sensei, Jourin. He is training with me, I mean you..no..harm" Kyoshi said as the kid let him get up, they then stood diagonally from each other, the wind blowing just a bit to make a small noise.
"The name is Kidiri, everyone else calls me Killer-Bee." He said and put his hand out, Kyoshi smiled and shook his hand, it seemed he made his first friend.
They started walking around the lightning village, they talked about the village, well Kidiri talked about it, and Kyoshi just listened and learned. They talked for so long the sun started to set. Kyoshi thought Jourin must be worried and all, and he needed to get back to his training.
"Well I got to go, Jourin sensei must be worried of me being late, I might miss dinner" Kyoshi said, they both sort of laughed then said there goodbyes and went there different ways.
Kyoshi arrived in the small dojo, he saw Jourin sitting in the middle of the living room, sipping his tea with his eyes closed. He looked a bit serious, and tired at the same time, Kyoshi approached Jourin, and when he got close enough, out of no where Jourin put his bokken to Kyoshi's neck.
"You were gone too long, we must make up for the lost time, you do want to get strong right, well don't loose interest and remember that you still have work to do." Jourin said, and Kyoshi let out a secret sigh, and grabbed his bokken.
For three hours they sparred with there bokken, and there sparring session was longer than usual, it lasted three hours exactly. Kyoshi knelt down being tired, but there then was round two, and round three. They were sparring until daylight stroke, and Kyoshi was exhausted.
"Hmm, its morning, well go up and fetch the water for breakfast Kyoshi." Jourin said with a look that made Kyoshi not want to complain and just, do it.
Kyoshi did it , and now was completely exhausted, he had nothing left in him, and the day just began. Jourin noticed this and gave him breakfast and some herbal tea, which should wake him up. Kyoshi seemed a bit more aware but was still exhausted they tried doing some advance techniques, but Kyoshi could barely stay in a stance.
"Tell you what Kyoshi, you go to bed, I'll wake you up in a few hours, I got some stuff to do anyway" Jourin said and smiled then walked off.
Kyoshi was grateful for this and ran off to his room, it was smaller than his old one in the other dojo. Yet it had a whole lot more scroll, and there was another sliding door with a good view of another clearing behind the dojo. Kyoshi got into some comfty pajama rags and went to sleep.
One Day Later.
Kyoshi woke up, he had slept for a day, he must have been tired. He saw Jourin, and they both started warming up and doing there daily exercises, Jourin didn't wake him up this time, Kyoshi just sort of did it himself.
"This will be the last time you will train alone Kyoshi." Jourin said looking at him.
"What do you mean?" Kyoshi asked looking at his sensei utterly confused, was he going to leave him in the forest and let him survive on his own? Kyoshi didn't like the thought of that.
"I enrolled you in this village's ninja academy, we'll be here for awhile, but each day you come home, I want you to do your exercises for not only your body, but your brain. I will teach you more mathematics and stuff you need to know, the lightning village's academy is a bit more tougher than what you would experience in Konoha. So do your best, and don't screw up." Jourin said and Kyoshi nodded.
The training day was a bit easy going for Kyoshi, they focused on chakra control like they have been doing before they attempted a jutsu, and Kyoshi had been getting pretty good at this. They also focused on physical sparring, you know, without swords or anything. Kyoshi was always brought down to the ground in a matter of minutes, this is something he needed work on, the little fight with Killer-Bee was a bit of a hint for that. They did all these conditioning exercises that were really hard, it wore him out and was unexpected. It then became night fall, Jourin let him sleep early since he had to go to the ninja academy tomorrow.
Kyoshi got up and got his uniform on, Jourin had a little lunch for him and all, it reminded Kyoshi of how a mother or father would do, and he liked that idea. Jourin being his father, it would be pretty cool.
"Bye Jourin-sensei!" Kyoshi said as he waved off and headed for the big like building that was the lightning village ninja academy.