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Now I know I said if I got more reviews, I would update faster. However, life always seems to intervene. Within the past three months, I've managed to get a job at a spa, and moved up to the management position, which includes working long hours six-days per week... The hours have been very physically, mentally, and spiritually draining.
Just between us, I do have the time to do a little writing when it's slow at work. It's really the only time I can write without feeling exhausted. Thus, the reason why it has taken me this long to update.
Thanks to everyone who reviewed the last chapter. Your reviews have been very encouraging to keep me going.
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Chapter 4
Resting lightly against the passenger door, Pan could feel her head begin to slump forward just enough to startle her awake. She raises a hand to cover her mouth in time for a yawn to escape from her.
Master Senshi glances over to the girl for a moment and slowly shakes his head disbelief. 'I bet this girl would be able to sleep a week straight if she allowed herself to do so.'He thought. With a slight chuckle escaping from him, he remembers how it took his wife an hour to wake her up in the first place.
"Oh no… Sorry I fell asleep…" She said, as she rubbed the sleep from her eyes.
"Don't worry about it. I'm sure you need all the sleep you can get."
Pan nods slightly. "I just don't want to miss anything…"
"You haven't missed anything yet. However, take a look into the distance."
She blinks slightly and glances ahead to acknowledge grouping of tall buildings. "Is that it?!"
"It sure is. We should be there in about ten minutes."
"I can't wait!" She said excitedly.
Master Senshi smirks at her excitement. "Well, before I take you over to Capsule Corporation, I have to do a few errands for the dojo, and the missus before I get side tracked. While I am doing that, you can spend some time looking around at some of the nearby shops."
She nods slightly. "All right, sounds like fun."
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Sipping on a fresh cup of coffee, Bulma let out a content sigh as she sits down at the table. She glances over to her son, who seems to be lost in thought. "What is going on in that head of yours, Trunks?"
"It's nothing to worry about, Mom." Trunks said, not wanting to make her worry.
Bulma raises a brow, knowing her son better than that. "Really? It doesn't seem like it. You've been bothered about something since last night when you suddenly rushed off. Just tell me what's going on."
"I took off because I felt an unusual ki spike."
"I guess you didn't find out who's ki it belongs to?"
"Unfortunately not. It only lasted a short while before dropping too low to sense."
"Do you think-"
"I don't think so. I was sensing fear and distress from it..."
"So whoever it is, was in some sort of danger then. Is this what seems to be eating at you?" Bulma questions as she resumes sipping on her coffee.
"That, and curiosity of who it might be that would have that amount of ki in this time."
"You do have a point there, son." She states as curiosity rises within her. "Well, don't try too hard deciphering this, it'll may cloud your judgment. Why don't you go for a walk and get some air?"
Trunks nods to his mother. He pauses for a moment before rising to his feet suddenly as he could feel an above-normal ki within the city. "Actually, that sounds like a good idea."
Bulma looks at him curiously from his sudden movement then noticed the look on his face, showing that something is close. "Enjoy your walk, and behave yourself. You don't need to give this mystery person a heart attack." She said with a smile.
"All right, I'll be back soon."
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Spinning around once, Pan glances up in amazement at the tall, futuristic, and oddly-shaped structures surrounding her. She just couldn't believe the size of them as she wonders how high up do they pierce the sky.
'This looks so much different than the towns. Towns look very simple, but now it feels like I stepped into a complex and chaotic world.'She thought as she watches people tightly squeezing past one another.
She shakes her head slightly. 'Why am I just standing here, starring? I should be looking around before meeting back up.'
Beginning to walk around, Pan glancing through shop windows to find something that just might interest her.
About twenty minutes later, as Pan walks out of a shop, she could hear shrilling sounds of screams and gunfire could be heard coming from around the corner. Curious as to what might be going on, Pan heads in that direction.
Seconds after, Pan quickly cups her hands over her ears as sirens echoes all around. Down the street she watches several cars with flashing lights flying down the streets in the direction she is heading.
'What on Earth is going on?'She wonders as she rounds the corner.
Pan notices a two story build is being barricaded by a group of people in uniform and a growing crowd of spectators. She makes her way over to the crowd to find out what exactly is going on.
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Staring down at the sidewalk, Trunks is once again lost in thought as he walks towards the unusual ki. 'Whoever I sensed last night is close by... What would be the best confront them without scaring them?'He has been pondering since he left the house.
As the scent of gun powder hit his nose, along with the sound of a couple of shots, he has a good idea to where it is coming from. However, to his surprise, it's in the same direction of this mystery person. Not wanting to waste anymore time , he rushes off.
Arriving at the scene, Trunks let out a small sigh. By the look of it, it seems to be just a bank heist, and the police are trying to deal with it. 'I would help out. However, I have a more important matter... '' His eyes trail off towards the spectators as he begins heading towards the crowd. His gut feeling is telling him that who he is looking for is there.
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After a short while longer of observing the event, Pan glimpses at the watch on her wrist, which Master Senshi allowed her to borrow to keep track of time. Her eyes grow as she realizes the time. 'Shoot! I need to get back to the car! I should have been there five minutes ago! He's probably wondering where I am...'She quickly turns around and begins squeezing through the crowd.
With the unfamiliar crowd pressing in around her, Pan starts to feel the unusual sensation of panic. The teeming mass of humanity that she is wholly unconditioned for making breathing difficult and vertigo was rising. She closes her eyes for just long enough to feel herself walking into a solid mass, causing her to stumble back and lose her balance. Preparing for a fall, she clinches her eyes shut tightly and takes a deep breath.
Instead of feeling anything or anyone beneath her, there is nothing except a firm masculine hand grasping her wrist pulling her upright. Opening her eyes, she meets a pair of cerulean eyes looking intently at her, causing her cheeks to redden.
'Her ki wavered a bit... It's definitely her that I've been sensing... But how..?' He ponders while studying the raven-haired girl. 'She looks rather innocent... Somehow oddly familiar...'
Noticing a few lavender strands gently swaying in front of the blue eyes, Pan glances up slightly, momentarily looking in awe at the man's soft lavender hair. Feeling a little more pressure on her wrist, She blinks for a moment before raising a brow. "Can you please let go?"
Hearing her request, draws him out of his thoughts as he releases her wrist. He runs his hand in his hair with an apologetic look. "I'm sorry. Are you all right?" He asks.
"I'm fine, thank you." She said.
"That's good. Um, do you have a minute?"
Suddenly, the time strikes her memory. She shakes her head. "Oh no, sorry, I gotta get going! I'm running late." She states as she quickly maneuvers around him and heads around the corner.
He turns, watching the girl run off. 'Yeah, there's no way she's human. I wonder where she could possibly be heading? I'd better follow.'
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Pulling up to the curb, Master Senshi parks the car and turns it off. "Here we are, Miss Pan."
Pan glances out her window to the gigantic yellow dome-shaped building before getting out of the car. 'Capsule Corps. eh? So this is it.'
"You seem nervous." Master Senshi said as he gets out and heads to the trunk to grab her backpack.
"I am…" She said, looking to him for a moment.
"Don't be, I'm sure everything will be fine."
"What a surprise to see you here." Comes a familiar masculine voice.
Blinking for a moment, Pan remembers where she has heard that voice before. She turns around meeting the same blue eyes as she did a little while ago. "It's you again. Sorry about earlier, I didn't have the time to talk."
"It's all right, now that I see you were on your way here."
"How'd you-"
"You two have already met?" Master Senshi raised a brow to Pan.
"For a minute… I was in a rush, and I accidentally bumped into him earlier." She said, as she rubs the back of her head sheepishly.
Trunks' eyes grew slightly at her action as he recalls seeing that exact expression and action in the past. Seeing this, begin to make him wonder, 'No way…it isn't possible. She couldn't be… Gohan couldn't have…'
"You should be a little more careful, Miss Pan."
"I know, but I was a little dizzy at the moment."
He shakes his head slightly, snapping from his thoughts. "It's Pan, right?"
Hearing her name coming from the other male, she redirects her attention to him. "Correct."
"Your father's name wouldn't be Gohan, would it?" He questions curiously.
She looks thunderstruck at him before nodding. "Yes. How do you know? Are you?"
"Trunks Brief. Gohan was my best friend, and my mentor." He states, emotions stirring as he remembers finding Gohan lying lifeless.
Pan tilts her head curiously, watching the painful emotions reflecting in Trunks' eyes. She was about to say something, until she feels a hand on her shoulder. Glancing over her shoulder, she notices Master Senshi shake his head slightly.
"It's time for me to get back to the dojo, Miss Pan. I'm sure you're in good hands from here out."
She turns around to face him for a moment and bows slightly. "Thank you for the help. I appreciate it."
"You're welcome. Get some well-deserved rest, and don't be shy to come visit us sometime."
"Of course." She said with a smile as she takes her backpack from him.
"Take care." Master Senshi said, heading back into the car.
Trunks walks up behind her. "You better come inside. I'll carry your bag." He said, receiving a nod from her and being handed the bag.
Turning slightly, she watches him lead the way before following. "So how did you know?"
"Know what?"
"Where I was and where I was heading." She questioned curiously.
"I sensed your unusual ki."
"Ki? What's that?"
At that last question, Trunks stopped and turned, looking completely flabbergasted at the girl. "You don't know?" He asked only to see her shake her head. This begins to make him wonder if she ever knew much about her father.
"Should I know?"
"What do you know about your father?"
"That he's kind, one of the strongest fighters, fought against the Androids, and capable of flying."
"So you don't really know much more about him?"
"No... However, that's the reason why I'm here and to find out about my heritage."
"I see... There is a lot for you to learn."
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Entering the living room, Pan glances around curiously and notices pictures up on the walls.
"I'm going to go get my mother, so wait in here, but feel free to look around." Trunks said, as he placed the backpack down next to the couch.
"All right." She said, drifting over to a large-group picture.
Trunks knew exactly where his mother would be and quickly made his way to her lab.
Hearing the door open from behind, Bulma didn't bother looking away from the computer. "Welcome back, Trunks. How did it go?"
"Mother, did you know anything about Gohan having a daughter?" He questioned seriously.
At the question, she suddenly turns around in her chair to look at her son. "What?! Heaven's no!"
"The ki I have been sensing belongs to a girl named Pan. Apparently, she knows enough to identify Gohan, but she has no knowledge of her heritage."
"But he couldn't have."
"Yet, she's here. She does that nervous-sheepish Son's trait. It's unmistakable."
"How old is she?"
"I didn't ask, but she looks to be about fourteen or fifteen."
"Oh my...Then that means Gohan must have been close to that age..." Bulma was shocked, she cannot believe that Gohan would do that at such a young age. 'What on Earth was going through that Saiyan's mind?'
"She he came here for answers."
"I'm not very surprised about that. If I was her, I would have too. However, I'm beginning to wonder how she knew who to find?"
"I'm not too sure."
Bulma gets up from her chair and begins walking towards the door. "Well now, I want to meet her."
"She's waiting in the living room."
"Good, good."
Meanwhile, Pan focused on one picture in particular. It was of a one-armed man with short black hair and a muscular build wearing a blue shirt with an orange outfit. Some reason she feels drawn to the picture, uncertain why. It takes her a moment to remember the words Tabatha described her father. 'Tall...Black hair and black eyes... Godlike body? She must have meant muscular by that.' She couldn't help but to lightly giggle and rub the back of her head.
"That was a picture of Gohan a little over seven years ago." Came a feminine voice.
Pan quickly puts the picture down and turns around to meet a blue-haired woman. "What happened to his arm..?"
"He lost it in battle." Trunks states bluntly.
Bulma leans in a bit to study the raven-haired girl for a moment, noting that she has seen similar facial features long ago. "So you're Pan. You do look quite a bit like Chi-Chi when she was younger."
"As in my Grandma?" She asked with a raised brow.
"If you really are Gohan's daughter, then yes."
Reaching into her pocket, Pan pulls out the folded letter that she has kept close. "Maybe this would help." She said, passing it to Bulma.
"Hm, what's this?" Bulma questioned, taking the paper and opening it to read.
With the silence, Pan begins to feel a bit nervous. She glances over to Trunks, who seems to be waiting on what his mother has to say.
"So this explains how you knew who to look for. Gohan had everything planned out for better or for worse. He definitely was a smart boy. I will give him that. I assume you know who I am then?"
"Yeah, you're Bulma."
"I sure am."
"Anyway, I just found out about that letter a few days ago."
"Hm, you look a bit flushed. Have you been drinking enough water?" Bulma asked only to see the girl shake her head. "Trunks, why don't you get her some water."
"Sure thing." He said, heading to the kitchen.
"I can't believe that Gohan would keep such a secret from us, especially poor Chi-Chi... She has lost just about everything precious to her... Though, Gohan's right about how she would have reacted."
"She's all right though?" Pan asked curiously with a bit of worry.
"Yes, even though it's been awhile since the last time I talked with her. However, I bet she'll be happy to know she has you now. I should give her a call right and have her come over."
Pan's eyes grow slightly with excitement. "Really?! Right now?!"
Bulma nods slightly. "Yes. However, it will take her quite some time to get here. Mount Paozu is a long distance from here. I'll go call her right now. It'll only take a moment." Bulma said, walking off to get the phone.
Walking back into the room, Trunks holds out a glass of water for Pan. "Here, drink up."
"Thank you." She said taking the glass.
"So, I'm curious, where have you been hidding... I mean living all this time?"
"On a farm, close to two-hundred miles away."
'That's not too far away... Why did I never notice?'Trunks thought for a moment. "How did you manage to get here?"
"I traveled by foot most of the way, until last night." She said as she sits down onto the couch.
"The town you were in last night, something happened to you. What was it?" He questioned, watching her look at him with the 'how did you know' look. "I felt your ki skyrocket in a sort of distress call. It's difficult for me not to notice."
"I was attacked by a couple of guys..." She states as she glances down uncomfortably for a moment. "If I wasn't exhausted and in pain from traveling, I wouldn't have been caught..."
'Dammit! I should have got there faster...'
Glancing up, she noticed the serious and worried look upon his face. "But it's all right. I didn't get hurt. Though, I sort of spaced out until one of them was on the ground and in tears..." She said, trying to lighten the mood.
"No it's not. You could have been hurt badly. They could have been seriously hurt as well, even if they deserve it." He states firmly as a thought echoes in his mind. 'She doesn't know any better. She doesn't know how to control herself. She doesn't know what she is.'
She seem taken back a little before nodding. "Okay."
Trunks let out a small sigh. "I'm not trying to lecture you, if that's what you are thinking. It's just that you can be dangerous if and when you do happen to blackout. I can teach you to control that and among many other things, which would be beneficial to you."
"What do you mean I can be dangerous? How?"
"You're part Saiyan. Saiyans were a warrior race from another planet, who would conquer other planets with brute strength. Eventually, a tyrant wiped out the vast majority of the Saiyan race, except for a small number. Your grandfather and my father were among the very few." He explained as he could tell what he was saying is sinking into her. "If it seems obscure or too much information, just say so."
She shakes her head slightly. "No. It's a little weird, but rather interesting. Almost every night, I prefer staring at the stars, wondering what's out there."
"That's because of your Saiyan blood. It craves for adventure into the unknown." Bulma states getting the feel of nostalgia come over her as she enters the room . "Your Grandpa Goku always went looking for adventures every possible chance. I went on some adventures with him when I was young. How I miss those days."
Pan couldn't help but to smile as she turns to look at the blue-haired woman. "So is my grandma coming?"
"Of course! I didn't say anything about you. We should keep you a surprise for now. She's also bringing her dad along."
"I have a great grandpa?!"
"Yes you do. I noticed Gohan didn't mention anything about him in that letter, but he's quite a jolly guy now. The first time I met him, he was intimidating and almost scared the bunny outfit off of me."
Trunks suddenly looks down and covers his face, feeling embarrassed at how his mother had to word that. "...I did not need that mental image, Mother..."
Pan glances over at him and giggles slightly at his reaction, sheepishly rubbing her head.
"Well I'm sorry, but it's Oolong's fault." Bulma states, unable to hold back a smile and glances over to the raven-haired girl. "Ah there's that look. You're right Trunks, she definitely has that trait."
"How long will it take for them to get here?"
"Where they are coming from is clear across the continent. It's going to take them a good portion of the day at the least. However, because of the distance, they will be staying for a few days. I figure it would be good for you two to spend some quality time together."
"I would like that! Thank you, Bulma!"
"You're welcome, Pan." She says with a smile. With an idea popping into her head, she glances over to her son. "Trunks, can you show her to one of the spare rooms? I would be I need to get back into the lab."
"Yeah, not a problem."
"After that, maybe you can give her a little lesson and show her a few things outside."
"I was already planning on doing that."
"Have fun you two." She said as she started heading back to her lab.
Pan glances over to the lavender-haired man. "Show me what?"
"You'll see. It'll be fun for you."
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Shortly after, the pair of demi-saiyans make their way out into the backyard, a little way from the building.
Coming to a stop, Trunks turns around and glances at the girl before him. "Before I show you anything, I need to give you a quick lesson of what ki is. Hopefully, you will be open-minded about it."
"Believe me, I am open-minded."
"Good, I'll make this quick. Ki is the life-force energy which every living thing possesses. It's everywhere you turn, and can be felt by one's subconscious mind, much like sensing a change in weather before you can see it change. Being able to feel ki, subtle or not, is something everyone is sensitive to. However, the majority of humans have forgotten how to notice and interpret what they are feeling. They have the habit of rationalizing things they cannot see and understand. For us, we are much more inclined to trusting our instincts than they are." He pauses for a moment, watching her. " Is this making any sense, Pan?"
"It does. I was actually sensing a bad vibe last night, and the gut feeling was too strong to ignore."
"Then you're on the right track. You just need to hone in on that instinct, but don't worry about focusing on that right now. There's plenty of time for that later."
She nods slightly. "So what are you going to show me?"
"Well here's one." He says, holding his hand out towards her as a bright yellow sphere forms in his palm.
Her eyes grew slightly as she leans forward, staring at the light and feeling the warmth radiating from it. "Oh wow, that's amazing."
"You get astonished easily, don't you?"
"You have no idea... I've been living on a farm for fifteen years, never seeing the outside world until two days ago. Being able to witness things first hand is much more stunning than looking at outdated pictures. Even seeing something like this is unbelievable." She said, glancing up.
He chuckles lightly as a smile tugs at the corner of his lip. "I guess you do have a valid point there. I guess you haven't accidentally tapped into any of your abilities yet, otherwise you would be able to do some of the things I can." He says, letting the ki dissipate from his palm.
She raises a brow curiously to him. "I'm capable of doing it too?"
"With your Saiyan blood and proper training, you can very easily. However, Martial Artists are capable of tapping into the same power, but they would require a greater amount of training."
"Well what's next?" She questions.
"It's a surprise so close your eyes."
"Um, all right..." She closes her eyes and lightly rubs the back of her head, curious of what it might be.
"Do you trust me?"
"...Yes." She answers, suddenly being swept up by a pair of muscular arms.
"Whatever you do, do not open your eyes until I say, all right? I'll make it quick." Feeling her nod, he shoots quickly up into the air.
From the sudden and unexpected movement, a silent gasp escapes from her. Feeling her stomach sink, she instinctively buries her face into his chest and clings onto his black shirt for dear life. Over the sound of the air pressure roaring by, she can hear a chuckle rumbling in his chest, making her cheeks redden slightly in embarrassment. 'It's not funny...!'
Reaching well above the city, Trunks slows his pace before coming to a halt. He glances down at the girl in his arms, gently shaking her. "You can relax now, Pan. It's not like I'm going to drop you."
Taking a moment to calm down enough, she glances up at him with her brows furrowed slightly. "A warning would have been nice."
Mildly amused at the look upon her face, he smirks slightly. "My apologies. Why don't you take a look around? I'm sure you would like the sight."
She blinks curiously at him for a moment, letting her facial features soften. Glancing away, she gasps at the stunning sight of being up in the vast blue sky. Letting her eyes fall below, a feeling of nervousness fills her as she realizes how high above the city they are. "I can...see the entire... city and more..." She said, with nervousness evident in her voice.
"Mhm. It's really something, don't you think?"
"It is... It's more than I've dreamed it would be." She says, glancing back to him. "Why didn't you tell me you could fly?"
"I thought I would surprise you rather than just tell you."
She smiles softly. "Thank you. I love the view."
"Anytime."
"You're going to teach me what you know, right?" She questions with a raised brow.
"If that's what you want, I have no problem with that. However, it's important for you to learn self-control and self-defense before anything else. Don't need you to get attacked again or you to break someone's bones."
"I understand..." She said, quickly covering up a yawn.
"Maybe we should get back so you can get some rest. I'm sure walking so many miles in a matter of a couple of days, have caused you quite an exertion." He mentions, letting his form drift slowly back towards the ground.
"That sounds like a good idea. I'm still very exhausted. I could definitely use the rest."
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All right! We are at the end of another chapter. I know, it's a shame that's where it is ending for now. I was originally going to make this chapter a short one, but with the amount of time it took me to put it up, I figured I would making it longer. Just about thirteen pages long on MS-Word.
I hope you all enjoyed reading this latest chapter.
Now for the last chapter review comments:
Reply to SweetenedSky: You made a great guess as to who it was talking in her dream. I figure if it is possible for those in the Other World to contact the living in the mainstream universe, it's likely for it to happen in any universe, conscious or not. As for your question, the Androids were destroyed a little over three years prior to the story.
Reply to Leelo Forever: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. When I first started working on this story, I had a specific view on how I wanted to describe and pace it rather than making it feel rushed, unplanned, and messy. A main objective is to add in that "Dragon Ball-esque" feeling due to the environment Pan has been raised in, making it her adventure of discovery. I'm glad you caught the puns. I actually did not come up with Cravat and Ascot. However, my boyfriend did. I do have plans for the brothers and Master Senshi somewhere down the road.
All right, I think that's all I have to say for now. I will be getting on the ball to writing the next chapter very soon. I might just start it tomorrow. So until next time, click that review button below and leave me one.