Wow. This is RIGHT after the last chapter was published, just I have some time on my hands. KK, no reviews yet, 'cause I published just a minute ago, but want to get this out of my system. So this will be about juicy words (or descriptive, say what you want) that will tell your reader more information, and be really fancy and impressive ;D

So for the sections:

(Biography of your character can be used on any of these)

RANGED ACTION

There are TONS of words and phrases for this, so heres some of the best:

Phrase: Like maple from a leaf. Often found in Dahiliastarr's stories, described to a cold/cruel voice.

Words/: any kind of emotion in eyes are great for showing (NOT TELLING) your reader how the character feels.

Word: Bloodlust. Used in battle or Dark forest meetings. Shows.. Lust to draw blood. Also used in Ambition or sometimes Depression.

Word: Mewl, Squeal, Squeak. Great for describing tones of kits. (USED IN ALL SECTIONS)

Word: Growl, Snarl,wail, cry, hiss, mew, meow, purr. Great for describing tones of all cats (USED IN ALL SECTIONS).

AMBITION

Word: Bloodlust. Used in battle of Dark Forest meetings. Also used in ranged action and deppression.

Phrase: Hunger/thirst for power. Used to describe the needy feeling an ambitious cat will feel.

Word: Treachory. Love this word! Used to say the destructiveness of one.

DEPRESSION

Word: Greif/mourning. Showing they are sad for a loss.

Word: Bloodlust. Can be used to show the cause of depression.

Word: Cry, wail, sob. Awesome for showing greif.

ROMANCE:

Um.. This is hard.

Word: Purr. SHows happiness.

Word: Growl, snarl, or hiss. Describes feeling for betrayal.

Phrase: Bursting with happiness/glee. Showing how gleeful or happy the character is.

HUMOR

There is no spefic words for this. They could ALL go here.

That is all the sections. Cool. So, um.. Tips?

Tip: make sure to add thought and feelings, not just actions.

Tip: To make your readers feel happy and apreciated, make an author't note at the beggining of the chapter! Give thanks to reviews, and maybe challenges and/or questions of the days.

Tip: try to reply to reviews, if not in PMs, in the chapters!

I don't have any more tips! *wail!* Well, more when I have them.

HEYHEYHEYHEY! Do you want me to reply to reviews, or in the chapters? Tell me who wants a reply, and who doesn't want me too. Next up: Gramer rules.