I went back and changed the old chapters because I had a new idea. There's not a big change but if you go back and check it out you'll see. I don't want to say it in case there are new readers
K, Read on!
Demigod~
Chapter 4: In Which Justin Becomes a Demigod/Ninja
None of them saw it coming. One moment the bus was cutting sleekly through the night, the next moment, it was flipping on its side.
A wave a fear seized the three teenagers.
The sound of screeching metal ripped through the air, sending chills down their backs. Whoever their attackers were didn't even go for the element of surprise.
"Justin Bieber, Son of Ate, show yourself!" icy voices hissed, swirling through the bus. The sentence echoed and pounded in their heads.
"Uh, no thanks." Justin muttered, backing up in his seat. A cold, thick white fog descended inside the bus, and the other passenger's screams kicked up a notch. There was no telling what they were seeing.
Annabeth stood up, her knife drawn. Percy stood too, uncapping Riptide simultaneously. The two teens planted themselves side by side in front of Justin, waiting for their enemies to appear. Justin felt a sinking feeling in his stomach. Shame.
"You show yourself." Percy spat back into the impenetrable haze.
The fog rippled, and a tendril touched the floor. It quivered, then moved toward Justin's seat. Percy stepped in front of it. Again, the echoing voices spoke "Move aside, Son of Poseidon. This does not concern you."
"Like heck it doesn't." He slashed at the mist with Riptide and a ricocheting scream tore through the air. The wisp of white that had been seeking Justin disappeared in a puff. The fog that was lifted off of the group began to swirl and bubble.
"Show yourself or face the consequences!" Aren't I already facing the consequences? Justin thought. He froze, afraid to stand up, and afraid not to.
Apparently there was a time limit to the decision, because all of a sudden Annabeth was seized by the fog. It grabbed her at the waist and sucked her into it, her bronze knife clattered to the ground.
"PUT HER DOWN!" The battle cry that tore out of Percy chilled Justin to his bones, and set off a chain of screams in the mortal passengers.
Percy drew his sword.
"Don't!" Justin cried, before he realized what he was doing. "You might hit her!"
All at once, as if it was planned, the fog descended on Justin. Annabeth fell to the ground, her arm bent awkwardly. Percy raced to her side and grabbed her unconscious form. One moment he was shaking her shoulders in panic, the next his neck was snapping around and his cheek stinging from her slap.
"Are you okay?" he asked.
She shot him a look and pushed him away, grabbing her fallen knife."Stop worrying, I'm fine. We have to save Justin!"
He came back to his senses and jumped up with her, but when they turned to look at Justin's seat, excepting to see a wall of the cold fog, Riptide clattered to the floor.
Justin was standing tall in the cloud of fog, and they watched as it seemed to melt, and then disappeared. Golden light poured from his skin, the tips of his hair, and shined from his eyes. In his hands were two flaming Celestial bronze swords that dripped with wisps of dead, grey fog.
Annabeth and Percy stared.
Justin started, as if shaken from a trance. Around them the passengers screamed and panicked. He looked up from where the fog had melted, and the light faded from his eyes, leaving fear behind in them. He looked at his new friends.
"What happened?" he whispered.
Then he collapsed.
