Oh, I also have these up over on my deviantART, which goes by the same username (RzSumisu) and I am working on drawing some illustrations for this story. If I do any good ones, i'll give a link!
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Chapter Four: The Commander's Undoing
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The ginger found himself very irritable as he headed back to the hotel. He wasn't entirely sure why he should feel this way, but he did. One thing that was unnerving him had been the man out front of the bar. G.T. Blitz. The man surely hadn't seemed friendly and Erol was almost positive he had seen something that he really should not have.
The blue flames? But what did they mean?
Of course, the man from inside the bar was on his mind too. Razer. Just thinking about the man made Erol shiver and then he mentally cursed at himself. As far as he knew, he had never really been attracted to men. Once or twice sure. But he had never once considered himself gay. The commander was just one of those people that didn't care what people thought. So if he wanted to expirement with someone he thought to be attractive, he didn't think there was anything wrong with it. This man though, Razer had seemed to spike some sort of sexual fustration in Erol and they had only been around eachother for a half hour at most!
Reaching the hotel, Erol headed up to his room. The commander was not happy from this turn of events in the least. The other KG members could tell this of course and stayed out of Erol's way as he headed through the musky halls of the old hotel.
As he reached his room, he slammed the door shut behind him and flopped onto the bed. This hotel was not pleasant. He hated to stay someplace that didn't have his own scent. It was dusty and musky. Sighing, Erol sat back up only with a groan to find that he had actually become aroused from very unwelcome thoughts of a certain veteran racer while walking back.
Erol had indeed found something that was worth his time.
Razer might have very well been the commanders undoing also.
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In the hall, a couple of the KG clustered together to talk. It must have been close to midnight but they were on something close to a vacation. And heck its not like any of them planned to get up bright and early in the morning anyway.
"Oh, did you see the commander? He looked angrrrry~!" One of them pointed out, drawing out the word angry. Sure enough they all agreed. Then one by one they all headed to bed but even in the end a couple of them lingered in the hallway. "You know, I hear there are supposed to be some races soon. Nothing serious, but yeah. Races. Maybe we should go see them. Heck, they can't be much different than the speeder races back home." The other KG he was talking to seemed to agree as he nodded his head.
"If only we could get Erol to race. He always wins back home, so we would have something of an ace in the hole, don't you agree?" The other chuckled. The first KG seemed wary of this statement. "I wouldn't use out commander as bargaining chip. If he found out about something like that we would all be shipped off into the desert to be picked off by those damn marauders. Or worse. We could be put into that dark warrior program I have heard rumors about."
At mention of the dark warrior program, the second shivered. "Yeah, I guess your right. The commander isn't someone you want to mess around with."
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Slighty disgruntled, Razer stepped into his rather expensive apartment. This certainly had not been how he had wanted to end the day. That commander, Erol had filled his thoughts all evening. He found that thinking of the commander squirming underneath him and moaning loudly rather enjoyable.
Too bad Mizo had to go and ruin his mood.
After Erol had left, Razer hadn't a reason to linger around the bar anymore so he had decided to leave. Unfortunatly he was met by Mizo whom had told him he would be racing the next morning. With the type of grace only he posessed, Razer let his coat drop from is shoulders to his elbows before he took it off and set it on the end of his bed. A cold shower, thats what he needed. Both to forget about Mizo and to releave the sexual tension he had gained while in the bar.
As he stripped off his clothing and stepped under the cold water, Razer could not help but wonder if the commander had caught all of his hints and such. The thought of Erol at wherever he was doing the same thing as he found himself doing at the moment made a smirk slide onto his face. Amusing.
Somebody who was indeed worth his time.
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I don't think this chapter was very long. I suppose its a chapter alot like chapter two, a sort of filler. And then we had Razer and Erol's dirty thoughts about eachother. I found it interesting to add the part with the couple of KG members in the hallway. I am now pondering on if I should make the racing part of the plot (I would love too!) or to leave it at that. The main idea was to give another instance to show how the KG feared Erol, and also the last line is to show some forboding if anyone caught that.
Hopefully next time I shall have some smut. :D Who should be dominant, Razer or Erol? You shall have to wait and find out!