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Chapter 4:

They hit the net and immediately start laughing. It's then I know that the jumper was a girl. I offer my hand to her. "What's your name?" I ask.

"McKenzie," she says, tucking her long brown hair behind her ears. She's pretty, I think. A proud Erudite. It's funny how you can tell so much about a person from little things, like their posture or the way they carry themselves.

"Make the announcement, Four," I say. I smile, thinking of my own initiation.

I see a smile creep up onto his face too. "First jumper - McKenzie!" he yells up above.

We all yell and welcome McKenzie into her new home. I can tell she will be good during initiation - she has a good build and looks determined.

The next person to fall is a Candor boy named Andrew. He looks nervous. I fear for him, though I know I shouldn't. I shouldn't get attached to my initiates, especially the first day. They may not make it long.

After everyone has jumped, Four and I introduce ourselves.

"My name is Four, and this is Six," he says, gesturing to me. "Before any of you Candor smart mouths laugh or ask a question, yes our names are numbers. Get over it."

I have to stifle a laugh.

"Four and I will be training the transfers. Dauntless born, you're with Uriah, who is late." Uriah chooses that minute to walk in, with Marlene on his arm. They are both laughing, which causes me to chuckle. Marlene kisses Uriah on the cheek and leaves. Four scowls at his lateness.

"Sorry about that, guys," Uriah says with a smile. His smile fades when he sees Four. "I was busy."

After Uriah and the Dauntless borns leave, Four and I address the group again.

"I usually work in the tattoo parlor, and Four works in the control room, but for the next two months we will be your instructors. I may be small, but mark my words: I can kick your ass," I say with a smirk. Someone laughs.

"You?" a Candor smart mouth asks. Elissa is her name, I think.

I shrug. "I mean, there must be a reason I ranked first, right?" Four smirks.

"Speaking of rankings, you will be ranked. There are three stages of initiation. The first stage is learning to defend yourself, and fight. Four people will be cut after stage one."

When he says this, there is a big unison gasp. Someone spits out, "What?!"

I take over. "Only the top 10 initiates will be made into members. Four will be cut after stage one, like Four said. The remaining six will be cut after the final stage." I pause for a moment to let that sink in. "Every morning, you report to the training center at 8 AM sharp. Do not be late. You will train until 6 PM, but there will be a lunch break for you. You are not allowed to leave the compound without an official Dauntless member with you. Don't break any of these rules, and you will be happy here. Your rooms are down that corridor, and I wish you good luck. Lunch is in exactly one hour."

The initiates leave and go to their rooms. "How did I do?" I ask Tobias.

He smiles. "Perfect," he reassures me.

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Also: I'm really proud of myself for getting this up today, because there's only 10 mins left of the day hahah. I'm off to bed. Love you all :)