A Banished Goddess and a Rebellious Prince

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto nor Sakura nor Sasuke

Main: sasuxsaku

Minor: naruxhina, shikaxino, nejixten

Note: I might change the rating to T next time

Sorry if my writing is confusing in any way. It may be too short or not descriptive enough.

But I've redone all the chapters so far so you might want to read from the start. It shoulf be at least slightly better than before

Soz also cause I had writers block, especially for the first part.

Thank you to all the reviewers; anime59, KurenariBara-chan, Sam-AKA-SakuxSasuLover, LadyMartel4000, xxxVanstarxxx, x.X.294x.X.x.X.x., chocyjod, BlueSword23, -xEMOtIoNaLLyCOnSTipaTEDx-, sakurasapprentice7

Hope you like it! Hopefully there's more sasusaku in this chapter than the last ones.

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Last chapter:

Sasuke was flabbergasted, the maiden he was looking for was had just opened the door with his friend and the person his friend everyone thought was courting.

What had they been doing?!

"Sasuke! You missed training..." Naruto trailed off and started to laugh nervously after receiving one of Sasuke's deadly glares.

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"So where have you been?" Sasuke directed every single one of his glares at Naruto.

"Getting Sakura proper dresses and gowns unlike you, leaving her here by herself to freeze," Naruto loved to make Sasuke angry. It was only occasional when Sasuke actually did get angry and Naruto wasn't going to pass this rare chance.

Sasuke simply glared at Naruto again.

Hinata just smiled and looked away. She had been through so many of these arguments and knew not to interrupt.

If only she had told Sakura this.

"Both of you are so thick-skulled, stop fighting like young children." Sakura interrupted. Both Naruto and Sasuke turned to look at her, Sasuke giving her his death glare instead.

"This was your fault in the first place, if you hadn't left..."

"Then I would have died of the cold,"

"Don't interrupt me." No lady had ever treated him like this and Naruto knew this too for he was on the verge of bursting out in laughter.

"All high and mighty are you now? Should I call you King Sasuke now?" Sasuke cringed when she said the word 'king'. Sakura hadn't actually any idea what she was doing, it was just something natural.

"I might of died of starvation too." She added.

"Hn," Sasuke attempted to be his usual cold-hearted self but after talk of him being king was terrible.

It felt as though his slowly returning happiness and curiosity was lost all over again.

He couldn't stand it.

He thought she'd be different, but he didn't understand that Sakura actually had no idea who he really was.

"S-Sakura, I-I think it's t-time to p-prepare you for the b-b-ball," Hinata ended their short argument.

Sakura returned Sasuke's glare and left with Hinata. Naruto and Sasuke finally started their training.

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Sakura stepped down from the marble steps into the candlelit hall; almost every eye was on the young rosette. Hinata had chosen the purple gown that had a darker purple robe over the top with shining golden ribbon tied around her waist.

Sakura walked through the crowd, the purple gown swished around her legs as she looked for her saviour unwary of another pair of eyes that watched her every move.

Instead she found her oldest friend Ino.

"Madame Ino?"

But what if Ino didn't recognise her? Although they had been great friends for decades for Sakura was older than she looked and acted being a goddess and all. But it had also been years since the two had seen eachother, so she must act like she was unwary of the heavens until Ino knew it was her.

Ino was wearing a deep blue gown that became darker the lower it was with white gloves and a small silver tiara.

Ino spun around and seeing a Sakura she was extremely confused.

"Sak– Mistress Sakura?" Ino remembering she was in the mortal world.

"May I talk privately with you?" She needed to know about what had happened without the suitors that surrounded her.

"Of course," Ino took her to the closest balcony where two huge maroon curtains were draped on each side which Ino pulled across to cover them.

"What has happened, Ino? Why did you leave?"

"What about yourself? Why are you here? Sakura, you should know you're still the only one that I cannot read,"

Sakura smiled at the last thing Ino had said. Ino, who could read minds of mortals, gods and goddesses, she was most likely sick of what they thought about her. Them unwary of her mind reading skills while Sakura herself had yet to reveal her own.

"Banished." Was all Sakura needed to say and Ino understood instantly, knowing what might of happened. Sakura would still be the happy, kind-hearted goddess she knew but was somewhat impulsive. Ino, herself needed to stop her several times from speaking up but without her she must of finally spoke up.

"I was sick of the heavens and their regulations, it is happier in the mortal world more than the heavens will ever be. I am greatly respected here also unlike the heavens where they thought of me as useless,"

"I agree somewhat, I was saved by another, were you?"

"Indeed, Shikamaru the son of the duke from the Nara lands. As of you?" Shikamaru was another she could read but not properly, the thoughts passed her mind too quickly.

"Sasuke Uchiha but I do not know if he is a duke of such,"

"Sakura do you not know that Lord Sasuke is..." Ino stopped as she heard a ruffling noise from the curtains. She pulled the curtains apart quickly only to find Shikamaru avoiding one of his insane suitors.

Ino knew that the insane suitor was Karin who was after Sasuke but anyone close enough to the prince would do. Little did they know Karin heard everything and would try to reveal the two for what they really were.

Ino gave Shikamaru an unhappy look and they left to dance.

Sasuke saw the young breath-taking maiden coming from the balcony; she was always able to make his heart beat somewhat faster and he had already forgotten about what had happened previously.

She looked around still unable to find him. Sasuke tapped her on her shoulder, making her spin around and the purple gown swirl around her legs once again.

"Shall we dance?" He reached out his hand, only able to speak to her coldly.

She took in a breath but didn't release. Her mind went blank; she had never in her whole entire life felt mesmerised before about a mortal or god for that matter. His onyx eyes stared into her green eyes for a while, neither making a move.

She finally released her breath and took in another to speak.

"Indeed," She matched his coldness trying not to fall for his mesmerising looks.

She took his hand and he led her to the centre of the hall to dance.

The evil pair of eyes watched her every move waiting for her to falter even slightly.

But Sakura danced perfectly. Having used to be a goddess she was trained to be perfect in everything. In the past many were banished for acting the slightest like a mortal, she was just another.

Slipping over was a mortal act and doing so the others would accuse you of having done it on purpose.

Many jealous duchesses and their maids were watching, they all glared at Sakura.

Karin was now determined to reveal Sakura to Sasuke, completely forgetting about Ino.

Sasuke led Sakura toward a different balcony than the one she was with Ino before.

They stood there leaning on the balcony and looking at the kingdom together.

There was a beautiful view of the whole kingdom; she hadn't payed attention to the view in the other balcony for all the questions and a confusing reunion.

The sun had set hours ago but tonight there was a full moon lighting up the sky like a small candle light.

She was mesmerised by the moon this time similar to the many times she was back in the heavens, on the clouds watching the mortal world, the lovely sun setting and rising each day and her favourite, the moon which would give the world a nice shine.

Sasuke stood and waited while the rosette gazed up at the sky.

He took a few steps and stood next to her making her realise that he was still there.

She looked up at him with her big sad and mesmerising eyes.

He smirked, leaned down but stopped as soon as he caught sight of the others.

"We need to talk," He whispered into her ear instead, wary of the others. "Privately," He added when he caught a glimpse of Karin.

Ino, Hinata, Naruto and Shikamaru were watching. Ino smiled wishing that her saviour would be attacted to herself like that. Hinata smiled too and blushed when she looked at Naruto.

Karin was also watching, upset and wanting to hurt Sakura more and more. She had been chasing after Sasuke for years and years but yet some other who isn't even a duchess steals him away, it's some lowly peasant girl who. Even though she was originally a goddess she is now a banished lowly maiden.

The pair of evil eyes were still watching, now knowing Sasuke's weakness and planning his family's downfall. A plan that was sure to succeed unlike the last plan he had carried out over a century ago.

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What are the evil creep's plans? What will Karin do from jealousy? When will Tenten, Neji and others come in?

Also I changed the plot a bit, I think it'll be better this way.

I'm not actually sure myself, but I will next time I update! XD

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