Hello Eveyone, this is my first Fanfic!
Declaimer: I don't own warriors, but I do own the cats in the story I'm writing! (So don't copy my cat names! Thank you!)
If I accidentally used a cat name from your book, I'm sorry because I don't try to steal any names!
Chapter 1
Snowkit happily tumbled outside. "It's me everywhere!" She meowed as she rolled in the snow. Her brother, Blizzardkit was enjoying the snow too.
"I'm everywhere too!" He meowed laughing. Their mother, Sunstream watched them carefully, remembering the time a fox broke into cap.
Their clan, StoneClan, was devastated when they all found out, the foxed killed kits.
Snowkit stopped tumbling for a moment, looking at her surroundings. StoneClan was surrounded with large boulders and bramble bushes. The grass was covered with the white snow that hadn't stopped falling yet.
"Come on Snowkit!" Blizzardkit meowed jumping on her playfully. She nipped his ear and went back into the nursery.
"Go back outside and play with Blizzardkit," Sunstream gently meowed, licking Snowkit's ears. " Today will be your last day as a kit." Snowkit almost forgot and she ran outside again.
(if any of you know the apprentice ceremony words, send it to me along with the warrior ceremony words…thx-I forgot!)
"Snowkit will now be known as Snowpaw and her mentor will be Moonheart. Moonheart, teach this apprentice everything I taught you," Birchstar announced. Moonheart's eyes were full of happiness as she touched noses with Snowpaw.
"Blizzardkit will now be known as Blizzardpaw and his mentor will be Thundertail. Thundertail, teach this apprentice well." Thundertail happily touched noses with his new apprentice.
Birchstar jumped off the tall log and went to his den, the deputy, Ravenclaw, following.
Blizzardpaw tried keeping eye contact with Snowpaw, but her eyes were staring at Swiftpaw. Swiftpaw was a handsome dark ginger tom with amazing yellow eyes, and Snowpaw stared at him in awe.
All the cats began to disperse, and Blizzardpaw walked with Swiftpaw to the apprentices den, he new at that moment, they would be good friends.
What did you think, please R&R and I'll write my second chapter!
Declaimer: If I owned warriors, I'd be able to fly with no strings, but do you think any of that would happen?
Since chapter 1 was so short, chapter 2 will be long! Hurray!
Declaimer: If I owned warriors, I'd be able to fly with no strings, but do you think any of that would happen?
Since chapter 1 was so short, chapter 2 will be longer! Hurray!
Chapter 2
"Hey Snowpaw, come on! It's time for your first lesson!" Moonheart prodded Snowpaw's side. Snowpaw's eyes flung open instantly.
"What!" She meowed loudly. "Oh, sorry. I'm coming."
"Wake Blizzardpaw too!" Thundertail told her. She nodded as she walked over to her brother.
"Blizzardpaw!" She hissed in his ear.
"Ok. Ok," He meowed, blinking the sleep from his eyes and quickly stretched.
"Today, we'll go over the borders. But first, name all four clans…..Snowpaw," Moonheart meowed.
"TreeClan, StoneClan, NightClan, and OceanClan,"She meowed quickly. She felt the energy quickly rising inside her. Moonheart and Thundertail lead the two young apprentices out into the snowy forest.
It took awhile, but they finally reached TreeClan border. An odd but pleasant smell reached Snowpaw's scent glands. "Is this TreeClan scent?" Blizzardpaw questioned.
"This is the border between our clan and OceanClan. Enjoy this smell, because DarkClan's smell is much worse," Thundertail responded. The apprentices nodded as the walked on.
It seemed like forever, but the four cats reached DarkClan's border. "Yuck!" Snowpaw and Blizzardpaw hissed together.
"Let's keep going, we have a long way before we reach TreeClan's border," Moonheart huffed. The cats kept going, walking slowly they finally reached TreeClan. "Finally, and just in time, the sun is starting to go down."
"TreeClan's scent is very strange," Blizzardpaw commented. Snowpaw nodded in agreement.
"Tomorrow, we'll start hunting," Thundertail meowed to the apprentices. When they finally reached camp, Swiftpaw bounded towards them.
"Hey Blizzardpaw, Snowpaw," He meowed happily. Snowpaw looked at her paws. It was the first time Swiftpaw said hi to her and she felt a new light glowing inside her.
"Hi Swiftpaw," Snowpaw meowed. She realized how hungry she was and just as she was about to grab a rabbit, a cat stopped her.
"Want to share that rabbit I caught?" Swiftpaw suggested. Snowpaw's heart did a back flip as they shared the rabbit. Every once and a while, she noticed Swiftpaw looking up at her. When they finished, Snowpaw looked right into his amazing eyes.
"So," He began. "How was your first lesson?"
"Very tiring!" She meowed at once. She took one last look into Swiftpaw's eyes before she spoke again. "I'm going to go rest, I'll see you later."
"Alright, bye," He said, padding into the forest.
( Swiftpaw's POV)
The forest's trees were covered in snow, and the last of the suns rays made the overall effect look beautiful. Just like Snowpaw he thought. He remembered her glossy white fur and frosty blue eyes. Even if the rabbit didn't taste good, he was too distracted by her to care.
But what about Skypaw? He questioned himself. "Ouch!" He hissed after he bumped into a tree. A squirrel nearby ran away. Now I'm scaring away all the prey! Pull yourself together Swiftpaw!
"Hi Swiftpaw," He turned around to see Snowpaw's sister, Skypaw padding towards him. He looked into her soft yellow eyes and then inspected her silky white fur. Just like her sister, except for her eyes, he thought to himself. "Do you want to hunt together?"
"Sure," He meowed, their pelts brushed together and she licked his ears. At that moment, Swiftpaw felt torn between Skypaw and Snowpaw.
So, that's my second chappy, what do you think?? R&R please!!!
Ok, I understand people like long chapters, so I promise this chapter will be really long!
Declaimer: I shall never own Warriors
Chapter 3
"Snowpaw, that's not the crouch position. This is," Moonheart told her apprentice showing her the right way to do a crouch position. Snowpaw tried to copy her, but flopped over.
Moonheart sighed." I'm never going to do it right!" Snowpaw exclaimed. Moonheart licked Snowpaw's ear.
"You'll get it," She meowed, showing her again. Snowpaw copied her, focusing very hard to finally get it right. "Well done!" Moonheart meowed. Snowpaw's eyes glowed as she tried it again. "Now, let's try it on prey!"
The two cats walked through snow, sniffing the air for any signs for prey. "A mouse!"
Snow whispered, dropping into the crouch position. She slowly stalked her prey and killed it with " the bite".
"Well done," Moonheart exclaimed." Let's head back to camp. Give that to the elders." The two cats padded back to camp to hear Ravenclaw finish his orders.
"Let's use this snow while its here," He finished.
"Hey Snowpaw! I'm becoming a warrior today with my sister Flowerpaw!" Swiftpaw cheerfully meowed to her.
"That's great!" Snowpaw meowed, rubbing her head against his flank. "So, do you want to go hunt with me?"
"Sure," He simply replied as the two cats padded out of camp.
(Skypaw's POV)
Skypaw stormed over to Blizzardpaw, her younger brother. "What's wrong?" He questioned her, gulping the last bit of his vole. She looked up at him, a tear ran down her cheek and she looked at her paws.
"Nothing," She meowed, trying not to show her anger and sorrow. Her younger sister was stealing her tom. But I love him she thought, I would die for him.
She padded over to Swiftpaw's sister, who looked nothing like him. She was a Tortishell and white she-cat with soft amber eyes. "Hey Skypaw," Flowerpaw meowed at her appearance.
"Hi Flowerpaw," Skypaw murmured. "Do you want to go hunting?"
"I'm sorry, I have to go get more moss for the elders and later, I have to help Silverheart with collecting herbs," Flowerpaw responded, putting the squirrel back into her mouth. Skypaw watched Flowerpaw leave with a sorrowful look in her eyes.
I got to find a way to get Swiftpaw to love me, without Snowpaw in the way! She thought running into the forest.
(Snowpaw's POV again!)
Snowpaw and Swiftpaw took a short break by the great oaks to groom each other and to talk for awhile. "I can't wait until new-leaf, the snow is making me shiver," Snowpaw commented as she continued to groom Swiftpaw.
"Everyone wants it to be new-leaf," Swiftpaw meowed gently. "I wish we could just stay here, but my warrior ceremony is soon, lets head back," Swiftpaw stopped licking Snowpaw and stood up.
They walked back to camp, their pelts brushing together. Oh, how I love him Snowpaw thought to herself.
When they finally entered camp, Birchstar leaped onto the tall log, yowling his usual summoning of the clan. Swiftpaw padded over by the tall log with Flowerpaw at his side.
"These two apprentices have worked hard, and I commend them as a warrior in return. Swiftpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect and defend the clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Swiftpaw will now be known as Swiftheart." Birchstar rested his head on Swiftheart's shoulder, and In return, Swiftheart licked Birchstar's shoulder respectfully.
Birchstar lifted his head, looking at Flowerpaw. "Flowerpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect and defend the clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the powers of Starclan, I give you your warrior name. Flowerpaw will now be known as Flowerfern." Birchstar repeated the ritual.
"Flowerfern! Swiftheart! Flowerfern! Swiftheart!" The clan chanted their names.
"They shall sit in vigil tonight," Birchstar leaped off the tall log, entering his den.
"I'm so happy for you," Snowpaw was the first cat to congratulate Swiftheart. He licked her ears.
"Congratulations Swiftheart!" Skypaw meowed. Swiftheart's eyes were gleaming as he rested his tail on Skypaw's shoulder. Snowpaw let out a faint hiss.
(Swiftheart's POV)
All the cats were gone and asleep. Swiftheart stared into his sister's soft gaze. Her tail started twitching happily. You always make me want to laugh, Flowerfern, he thought.
He looked up at the sky, light grey clouds hid the moon. The sky was still a dark purple, Oh StarClan, I couldn't ask for a better night to sit in vigil, He thanked silently.
(After Swiftheart and Flowerfern's vigil—I'm lazy)
Swiftheart decided to go to sleep, he felt really tired after his long vigil. He curled up in a moss bed, and fell fast asleep.
Chapter 4
The forest was still and quiet, the trees spread up against the pale blue sky, casting a shadow on the silver grass. Silver grass?! Swiftheart thought. Just then, a snowy cat came into view. She was lying on her side, breathing heavily.
Her neck was torn open. Blood poured out rapidly. A large golden tom stood over her, while another, almost identical, white cat was hissing at him. A dark ginger tom ran over, and lay beside her. They were both having a quiet talk, before she twitched, and went limp. The tom began to wail in agony, and then, everything disappeared.
"The day will come. The choice you will make will determine the death of a snowy cat," A voice whispered in Swiftheart's ear. When he turned to look at the cat, no one was there.
"Swiftheart!" A voice hissed at him. "Wake up! You've slept till noon!" Swiftheart immediately awoke, and saw Skypaw next to him.
"I have?" he meowed. Skypaw nodded.
"And today is Snowpaw's, Blizzardpaw's, and my ceremony. Come on." Swiftheart followed Skypaw out of the warriors den, and sat with the gathered cats. Skypaw joined Snowpaw and Blizzardpaw.
"These apprentices have trained hard, and in return, I commend them as a full warrior of StoneClan. Skypaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code, and to protect and defend the clan, even at the cost of your life?" Birchstar began.
"I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Skypaw will now be known as Skycloud." Birchstar rested his head on her shoulder. Skycloud respectfully licked his shoulder. "Snowpaw. Do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend the clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do." Snowpaw happily meowed.
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Snowpaw will now be known as Snowstorm." Birchstar repeated the ritual, then turned to Blizzardpaw." Blizzardpaw. Do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend the clan even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Blizzardpaw will now be known as Blizzardpelt. May StarClan watch over these new warriors of StoneClan." As the ritual repeated, the clan chanted their names.
Snowstorm waited for Swiftheart to congratulate her first, but he didn't. Swiftheart was with Skycloud, licking her ears. When he saw Snowstorm, he ran over to her. Congratulations Snowstorm!" He meowed. She turned away.
(after the vigil-the; next day)
"Okay, I'm sorry. Do you want to go hunting with Skycloud and i?" Swiftheart meowed.
"You have to choose Swiftheart. Do you love me? Or my sister?" She said, walking away from him. Oh Swiftheart! Please love me. Snowstorm thought as she left to hunt. She was glad she didn't hunt with them. "Please love me back!" She murmured softly.
That was chapter 4! What did you think?? R&R please!