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I woke up to stabbing pain once again at my side then a low, proud voice " well now that i have had the chance to finish her off, it would be great plessure to finish her life aswell."

the 'leaders' hard, cold laugh sent shivers through me, I felt another two sharp stabbing pains in my chest and thigh and everything went cold and black.

I once again woke up on the hard,cold and wet concrete but something was different, I could here a low humming of a car engine quite distant at first but it was coming closer,

I heard footsteps, they were fast as if running and they were running away, away from me, finally the men had gone and I was alive but bearly.

I tried to move my arms but I didn't have enough energy move them, I was so weak, so I tried opening my eyes but when I did every thing was blurry so i managed to blink a few times

which did help a little bit, I was still so weak then I remebered the sound of the car engine and as i listened in I could here the humming getting louder and more promanent.

The engine stopped suddenly and all hope drained out of my body the car was so close so i decided it was time to shout for help, I mustered up all the energy I could and screamed

but it only came out as a mear raspy whisper.

I was concidering to just give up and let the darkness surround me forever when I heard the car engine start up again and I saw a car fly round the corner, I knew that car from some

where it ... it was was that stupid shiny volvo with its tupidly handsome own ... no keep my head together, its that stupid owner the gorgeously handsome

Mr. ' I don't think we should be friends' Edward Cullen, he got out of his car and started looking around for something but i didn't care what so I tried shouting again

"help me please, I'm over here, help me please I'm scared, please I'mgoing to die." I cried out sobbing another whisper. As soon as I had shouted his head shot around and he looked

straight into my eyes and in an instant he was over by my side horror and anger written all over his face, then the strangest sound ripped through his chest, he growled loud and fierce

then he looked into my eyes again "It's okay Bella, everything is going to be okay I will save you you won't die I promise nthing will ever happen to you ever again." he sounded so

sorrowful likehe was about to burst into tears.

He took his long, light gray pea coat off and draped it around my naked, blood soaked body, he picked me up and so lightly and carried me to the car, he put me in he passengers seat

and in a second he was around the other side of the car and in the drivers seat, he slowly and lightly picked me up and put me on his knee I looked into his coal black eyes

"I am so sorry edward i have blood on your coat." I sobbed into his chest, he chuckled but I didn't know what could be funny at this moment in time

"so let me get this straight your not worried about the state you are in but the fact i will have to wash my coat." he gave me a skepticle look and chuckled again which made me cry even

more and harder which made me flinch because of the pain and the blackness began to fight to make me sleep again.

"Edward pease may I go to sleep I can't bare the pain anymore, please let me sleep." he looked at me with worry etched onto his face

"No, Isabella do not go to sleep we will be home in a minute and the pain will be over do not worry my father will sort everthing ut I promise, my Isabella, my poor Isabella."

He stroked my cheeck to reassure me and as the darkness took over I whispered "Its okay Edward, Iknow what you are, please save me." And with that another deadly silence and

pitch black.

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