Parings for my next fic (one shots)
Naruto parings
1. NarutoXKoyuki
2. NarutoXShion
3. NarutoXFuuka
4. NarutoXIsaribi
5. NarutoXKurenai
6. NarutoXYakumo
7. NarutoXSasame
8. NarutoXRin
9. NarutoXYugao
10. NarutoXYugito
11. NarutoXHokuto
12. NarutoXToki
13. NarutoXHaruna
14. NarutoXHinata (i did say collection so i would still add it even if it's over used)
15. NarutoXSakura (I would only add possible pairings so it means only pairings that would be able to be related to the original series)
16. NarutoXFemKyuubi
17. NarutoXTenTen
18. NarutoXAnko
19. NarutoXKonan (i would have to research on this, i don't know who she is... personality/relation/past all i know is what she looks like, Kekke Genkai, and that she is in Akatsuki)
20. NarutoXTayuya
21. NarutoXKin
22. NarutoXAyame
23. NarutoXShizune
24. NarutoXFemHaku
25. NarutoX "..."
Sasuke Parings
1. SasukeXHinata
2. SasukeXSakura
3. SasukeXKarin
4. SasukeXIno
5. SasukeXTayuya
6. SasukeXKin
7. SasukeXTemari
8. SasukeXTenten
9. SasukeX "..."
Shikamaru Pairings
1. ShikamaruXIno
2. ShikamaruXTemari
3. ShikamaruXKin
4. ShikamaruXTayuya
5. ShikamaruX "..."
Gaara Pairings
1. GaaraXMasami
2. GaaraXHanabi
3. GaaraXHinata
4. GaaraX "..."
Itachi Pairings
1. ItachiXHanabi
2. ItachiXKonan
3. ItachiXSakura
4. ItachiXIno
5. ItachiXTenTen
6. ItachiXMikoto (I don't know i when i read about itachi, i keep seeing this)
7. ItachiXRin
8. ItachiX "..."
Neji Parings
1. NejiXTenTen
2. NejiXSakura
3. NejiXIno
4. NejiXHinata
5. NejiXHanabi
6. NejiX "..."
(Kiba is just not so popular, Shino does not talk much, Lee only has one possible pairing, Chogi has only one possible pairing)
Review Comments
CH1:
1. This is for the Ch2 as well. I fixed the titles now. Thanks for the review, fixed, pointers and whatsoever
2. Sorry about the first chapter, i guess i replaced it with the wrong file. XD, really sorry.
CH2:
1. It's going to slow down, i didn't realize it but i didn't have any idea's that time since it was not my idea of starting this. It's going to get a lot slower after a while.
2. Actually, Shunshin is a basic chuunin jutsu so it's still appropriate for this. It is only said that it needs mid to high chuunin to weild properly. Kucheyose, Rasengan and Hiraishin will actually be the only jutsu's used most and is the only thing that can link the before and after events, I only added Rinnengan so he would be able to weild hiraishin and rasengan at full extent.
3. Though, come to think of it. It's too early to reveal it so i replaced some from those areas
CH3:
1. I kinda thought about wanting to make the pairings rare and unique since the other pairings are too used up
2. This would most probably a harem
3. I will also use this as a story to choose the pairings for my one shot collection fics (my next one which is still pending)… I'm currently collecting pairings from reviews so please be sure to review with the pairings of your choice no matter if the chance of it being add up to the story are slim to none.
4. I won't put Hinata, maybe i can pair her up with itachi since as far as i know, naruto fanfics pairings are almost completely composed if this... it's just too over used... it's my name before but i got tired of it.
5. possible pairings now are (koyuki, shion - i just like it since its the latest, yugao - since its rare, Fuuka - she's just hot, Rin)
6. I won't add tsunade since she's just too old, maybe about 4 to 5 times older than him
7. I guess i'll have to limit the other pairings by 5, unless i'll have to turn him into a womanizer if he's not already one.
8. Shion and Koyuki would most likely be a long distance relationship.
9. Final pairings (NarutoXFemKyuu, NarutoXShionXKoyuki, NarutoXFuukaXSasameXYugaoXYuugitoXTayuya)
10. Paring extension if you would make him a REAL HUGE womanizer but i would not want to add more since i think those are already enough. Maybe a one side relationship would work (RinXNaruto, IsaribiXNaruto, YakumoXNaruto, HarunaXNaruto, HokutoXNaruto - i like the idea for a possible filler like Challenger requested)
11. Minor pairings (ItachiXHinata, ShikamaruXTemari, possible KakashiXShizune, . No need for the others since they rarely come up in the show and its hard to think of a way to put them up)
CH4:
1. Please post real reviews that i could understand. OK/NICE or anything too short wont work since i really take up notes for my next fic.
2. pairings are ifficial (please see numbers 9 to 11 of CH3 just above this one for the info)
3. I know very well what is the Rinnengan. It's true that it isn't expressed as 5 tamoes nor does it allow the user to control the 5 elements. Pein's Rinnengan allows him to have 6 bodies/Paths, each one with its own special abilities: Defence, Attack, and mastery in all other special ablities/fields. thus Pein always thinks of himself as a God. That's the power of Fanfiction.
CH5:
1. I was actually wondering how i would plot the harem so i would just cut it to a smaller pairing. (NaruXKyuuXYuugiXNii)
2. I'm fixing the grammar every week, i got the last part like this since i mixed it CH5 and CH6. (dont count on the review comment chapter as a chapter)
3. The bell thing, I just decided to add something stupid and different so i just added that small bit. Well, that and i wanted the chapter to focus more on Sasuke, Sakura and Sai. There will be another chapter like this in future chapters.
CH6:
1. Constructive would be nice but i didn't mean it that way
2. I'm going to update soon but it would take a lot longer since i got myself another hobby and i will need to study since i got a lot of low marks not that it's my fault since i really think this year's teachers are really stupid compared to last year's. (LOL... XD... secret... not that you could do anything or know anything about it... XD...)
3. i won't be able to do anything until October 2 (the last entrance exam in college that i would take) so the next update would be on October 18 or 19.
CH7:
1. For those who liked this chapter.. i guess you like mushy scenes even though this one isnt romantic.
2. For those who hated the chapter.. i can say i think this is useless as well.
CH8:
1.
AN (P.S) this would be edited every update
* I've always been honest and i fulfilled my promises (at least all involving this site) but im not really in the mood to compose right now since nothing seems to be coming in my head so I'm gonna take a short break, probably until January or March.
*I said last time that i estimated that i would be done and uploaded the chapter within 2 weeks and the deadline should have been today (DEC 1, 2008) but this time i didn't make any promises so don't hold any grudges.
*I'm not writing, that doesnt mean i'm not going to log-in every now and then so please review so i can get some idea's or at least motivate me some more.
Thank you to my friends who have helped me in the corrections in the previous chapters. You know who you are.
Probable changed in chapters 1 and 2 since my editors said there were still a lot of errors even after the two corrections i made previously.
Due to some negative comments of the reviews. i will put both stories on hiatus, i will focus on fixing the errors and improve my writing.
Again I'm really sorry, but this is only because my friends quit as my beta so as of now, i'm doing this alone. TRUST me when i say that im no good. Im just the holder of the account.
i've been checking up on recent reviews and 2 of which caught my attention. Most of which are pairings BUT it may seem like i could improvise from the earlier suggestions to compose a new story.
I've taken the liberty to recheck my grammar and there ARE a LOT of fragments in need of revising.
As I said earlier, i would continue the story during the summer but as of now I would be involving myself on my other hobbies.
I don't promise anything other than updating the story. I already have the story written and I don't want my efforts put into waste. It was a lot easier to write the story that to encode it so i'll update the story WHEN im not lazy. ^_^
1. I have made some corrections, Mainly the translations. HOWEVER, i had to reformat my computer so i lost all my backup files.
1.1. There is a high possibility that story components are incomplete.
1.2. Based on experience. You really can't fully trust technology. Though not obvious at first sight but after constant rechecks and comparisons. There is the possibility that information copied is inaccurate.
2. First 4 chapters are under reconstruction.
2.1. A portion of the story will be reedited. After skimming through the story, I found some parts to be (just hard to explain... I'll just say its not good)
3. Next chapter will be up soon.