Chapter 4
This chapter was terrible, I kept switching POVs like every 3 sentences like the last chapter. I had tons of homework so this was kind of rushed and I was not able to put in most of the ideas I had in mind, they will for sure be in the next one and I will feature a Valentine's Day event, it will be minor though. Again, Elize did not help me, she always promises that she will but now she's getting very lazy and she had almost no homework.
Utau's POV
I couldn't believe it. How could my sister do this to me? Tears rushed down my cheeks, as I ran, I ran and ran as fast as I could. I didn't even know where I was going. I don't know what happened, but after running constantly for hours, I collapsed while resting at a park bench.
Amu's POV
I found Utau on a park bench, she looked so dehydrated and dead. I screamed as loud as I could, the sight of her was so gross and horrifying. I quickly checked for a heartbeat. There wasn't one, wait no there was a very light and faint one.
Jude's POV (Yes he was the mysterious POV last chapter)
Once I heard Amu scream I elbowed the two men somewhere near the stomach and ran as fast as I could towards the sound. But, the two men were persistent in taking me, I struggled and did everything I could, to get out of the grasp of these strange men. But it was futile.
Amu's POV
I reached into my back pocket to grab my cell phone, but instead I felt nothing but air. I must've left it in the PE locker room. I ran back as quick as possible to get it while searching for free public phones, after all I was broke. On my way back, I bumped into Kukai. I asked him for his cell phone immediately. I dialed 911 so fast my fingers could've fell off it I repeated the process over and over again. As the line rang I ran back to Utau.
*RING RING*
"Hello, what is your emergency?"
"Please help my friend, she *pant* collapsed and has a very faint *gasp* heartbeat." said Amu gasping hard for air.
"Ok, where are you located?"
"The park near the Plaza hotel," replied Amu in a very frantic voice.
"It will take about 5-10 minutes for an ambulance to arrive. During this time, make sure your friend keeps breathing."
"Ok, thanks."
As Kukai finally caught up to me, I could already hear the distant sounds of the ambulance.
"What the hell is happening?" asked Kukai.
"I'll explain on the way," I replied while getting on the ambulance with Utau on a stretcher.
"Ok? What happened to Utau?"
Kukai's POV
I bumped into a very frantic Amu, when she suddenly asked for my cell phone. I agreed and lent her it. She quickly ran back in the direction she came from. I followed her but could not keep up with her pace. I arrived several minutes later to see Utau on a park bench dead, maybe she was alive? I was so worried, since we used to love each other in 7th grade then I broke up with her, because I just didn't feel the love anymore.
Jude's POV
I was barely conscious, I could hear an ambulance passing by the car I was taken in. I used up all my last energy to sit up and look. A flash of pink went by, could it be, Amu? I struggled to get my hands untied but it was no use. Damn it, why a time like this?
Utau's POV
I could still slightly hear Kukai's voice and Amu but why would he be here? I could not forget him not matter what he said. You could brainwash me, and he would still be there; lingering at the brink of my mind, taunting as ever. He was playing with my heart, even though he was gone. My empty, stone-cold chamber of feelings was robbed away from me by him. N one else could replace it. It was gone, just like that leaving me with an empty shell that barely beat to keep me alive inside. The empty shell was a possessed camera linked to my brain which kept replaying the unwanted past. Nothing could make me forget the pain and hatred he painted into the storybook that was my life. I awoke in sweat and tears.
Ok so I had another story on this account I took an excerpt and inserted it in this story/chapter because I had been wanting to delete the story but I wanted to use some of the words. So yeah, thanks for reading.
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