WOW I really need a hobby, already on the 4th chapter and still this story hasn't toke a bomb.
Disclaimer; really? You think I own Tak? Nope I don't!
Tak; own me? What?
Me; nothing Tak, shut up and get ready
Tak; ready for what?Me; you'll see!
Tak; oh no!
The big day had finally come and everyone was excited. But according to tradition, nobody could see Jeera until she made her entrance at the party. Only Cleya was allowed to see her, but only to help her get ready. The day went by fast and before you knew it, it was time. And it could have been a great debate to discover who was more nervous, Jeera or Tak. As they both had something important to do.
"You look beautiful Jeera!" said Cleya, Combing her hair back. " That old guyto never looked better on anyone!"
(Btw, a guyto is like a really fancy robe or dress, the ruyfio is a sacred orb. Just so you know.) It was long and light purple and with her hair back nicely, her face seemed to glow. So Cleya was right, she did look beautiful.
"I don't know, I'm a little nervous. What if something goes wrong?"
"Nothing will go wrong as long as I'm here, stop worrying!" this didn't really convince Jeera; she just gave Cleya a rather unimpressed look.
"Really? Well I if I'm right didn't you, on Zaria's birthday-?"
"I didn't know it was alive, let alone attracted to feathers!"
"And the mangoes?"
"It was the monkey's fault!"
"Sure, it was." She remarked sarcastically. "Well at least I can't mess up as badly as that!"
"Yeah. And now, the finishing touch." Said Cleya, placing the necklace Tak made around Jeera's neck." It really does look nice, and if I'm not mistaken doesn't it resemble a heart?"
"No Cleya .I told you, we're just friends."
"Now." To this jeera gave her a nasty glare. "Alright, got it."
Then they heard Zaria coming down the hall; she came to the doorway and stood there.
"Ready yet? Everyone's waiting." Said Zaria, jeera noticed that she had a smug grin on her face.
"What's up with you?' she asked.
"Nothing. Yet. Hurry up." Then she left, leaving Jeera wondering if she knew something she didn't.
"Oh! It's time! Let's go! Let's go!" Cleya seemed more excited than Jeera.
Jeera walked out and stood in the doorway of her hut, looking at the many decorations and everyone there gathered for her. She looked to her sides and saw Tak and Cleya, Cleya holding the ruyfio, Tak also dressed up in a new cloak holding his staff. He also noticed how nice Jeera looked, and suddenly found himself staring and noticing the necklace around her neck.
They both knew what they had to do, and so the ceremony began.
Tak toke his staff and starting a fire not noticing the worried looks on everyone in the tribe. Into that he sprinkled the leaves and recited the spell Jilbolba had taught him earlier.
"Ser ned toi fa me fa dewto Fo a holtiy!" as soon as he finished, the fire rose and changed colors for a brief moment, the spell had been successful. Everyone applauded and Tak was relieved. Now it was Jeera's turn. She took the ruyfio orb from her cousin, and held it above her head. Said the same spell Tak had said in reverse, and threw in into the fire. The fire went out for a moment, but then relit twice as bright in a flash and everyone cheered. The ceremony was successful.
"My pupununu people," proclaimed the chief " I present to you my daughter Jeera, now in full power to make her own choices, and take on responsibility. My daughter has successfully become a casdarata!"
"Big deal" said Zaria
but everyone disagreed with Zaria. There
was more clapping and cheering, and then Keeko began the music and
the dancing began. Everyone came to Jeera to congratulate her, a few
jujus too. Then there were presents in need of opening, a mirror from
Lok (but he called it a loan), an impressive headpiece from her
father; Zaria said her present was her presence (one gift Jeera
wishes she could return). And then there were the jujus gifts. From
physic juju there was a mind-reading glass, love juju gave her a
potion with which to see somebody's heart desire, pugnacious gave
her magical boxing gloves that caused amnesia, and party juju
promised to make it the best party ever, and killjoy juju promised to
end it when it got out of hand. It promised to be an awesome party.
"C'mon, jeera dance with someone!" said Cleya "it's your party and it's almost over. Have a little fun!"
"I know, but-."
"But what?"
"With who?"
"Tak!" she wasn't only suggesting him, but he was also waling that way.
"What?" he asked.
"Dance with Jeera!" said Cleya, pushing Jeera toward him.
"Um.Sure." he said awkwardly. For a minute, neither one did anything because a rather slow song was playing. Cleya saw this and walked over to Keeko.
'Keeko?" she said, but he couldn't hear her."Keeko? KEEKO!!" That got his attention, and hurt his ears.
"Ow, man! Not cool! Wha-" then he looked up and saw it was Cleya. "Oh.Uh, hey? What's up?
"Keeko play a faster song"
"No can do, been practicing this one for weeks man.er, girl. Wanna show it off, ya know?"
"Please? For me?" she said batting her eyelashes sweetly.
"Fine." so he did. Then Tak and Jeera started dancing a little bit, and that was good enough for Cleya.
"Thanks Keeko!" said Cleya giving him a hug. That caught him a little off guard.
"N-no problem."
The party was going well, and nothing could ruin it. Well, almost nothing. Cleya went to see how her uncle was doing, and saw that he was busy talking to Jilbolba. She was about to leave when the chief spotted her.
"Cleya! My niece, what brings you here?"
"Oh, nothing. I was just coming to thank you for letting me stay here."
'OH, YOU ARE QUITE WELCOME!" he said a little to loudly. " I believe you know Jilbolba, our shaman?"
"Yea, how are you?" she asked politely
"Fine, fine"
"Jilbolba and I were just discussing a most wonderful matter." Said the chief. " Would you like to be let in on the little secret? I wasn't planning on telling the tribe for awhile as to not take away from Jeera's big day."
"Okay. What is it?"
"Well, it is rather big as both the chief and I have come to our decisions at the same time," said Jilbolba. "Promise not to tell?"
"I promise." She said.
A while later the party was over.
"JEERA! JEERA!" Cleya was screaming at the top of her lungs looking for Jeera. When she finally found her with Tak, Cleya was out of breath. Jeera could tell whatever it was, it was important.
"What?" she asked
"I…news.big.have…need tell." She said, panting then looked up and saw Tak. "Hi, Tak."
"The news?" Jeera demanded impatiently "what is it?"
"You both better sit down, it's kind of shocking and effects both of you."
So they did, but it could never take away the shock from what they were about to hear.
There it is then. Hope you liked it and review. PLEASE REVIEW NOW!! If you do I will, give you a cookie! Reviews will make this story not totally completely suck, so get to it!!