Hi there all you beautiful people! Dragongirl4, here dropping in with another update. I'm so glade that so many like this story. Thank you very much to everyone for the wonderful reviews. I feel so loved!
And to CloudySkies86, thank you for being my 10th reviewer, you might be my best friend but I still wanna hurt you for the 9th review, just remember revenge comes when you least expect it. But you still reviewed twice in a row so I guess I'll give you a cookie. Oh yes and thank you so much for all your help on this, I really apriciate it, and I couldn't have done it with out you. Thankies!!!Oh yes, don't go outside or the clowns will rape you.:)
Ok anyways on with the story, and again thank you to everyone.
Disclaimer: I still don't own Saiyuki, though I wish I owened Hakkai, Oh well a person can dream. Right? I Do own Takara though and would apriciate you asking before you use her. Kay?
Chapter 4: A Shopping Disaster
Several Hours, Fights, Beatings, and Thearts Later
We find our weary travelers checking into a hotel in the middle of a bustling city.
" So you have nothing else?" Hakkai asked hopefully giving the young hostess behind the register one of his famous smiles. " I'm sorry sir, but all we have left are two singles, if you like we could set up some cots for you." She said blushing at his charming smile.Hakkai sighed disapointedley. " Alright, we'll need three cots, please." he said handing her "Sanzo's" credit card. "Very well, your rooms are 15,and 17. They'll be ready in a few minutes, if you like the kitchen/restaurant is straight through those doors." she said pointing to two double doors, and handing him two room keys. " Thank you, ma'am" Hakkai said smiling at her as he walked back out the front doors,towards the jeep. He smiled as he aproached, mostly because Goku and Gojyo were currntley killing each other, while Sanzo was doing his best to control his temper (and failing badly). Takara on the other hand was curled up asleep in the front seat.
" Well this is pleasent, I leave you for five minutes, and what do you do? Try to kill one another." Hakkai stated mock parntal scloding in his voice. Both Gojyo and Goku stopped momentaraly to look at him. "Yes, Mother." Gojyo muttered. Hakkai mearly chuckled as Sanzo suddenly stood and climbed rather ungracefully out of the jeep. " Did you get the rooms?" he asked giving Hakkai a "it had better be far away from them look." "Ahhh, well you see their sorta booked, except for two singles." Hakkai said laughing nervously scratching the back of his head. Sanzo sighed irratably as an anger cross apeared. Gojyo smiled happily. " Yah hear that monkey? Your gonna get it tonight." Gojyo said poking Goku in the head. " Shut up, water sprite, your the one who's gonna get it." Goku said pushing Gojyo's hand away. " Oh really? Yah wanna try it now?" Gojyo asked mock anger in his voice. "Yeah let's go." Goku said raising his fists.
" Your both gonig to get it if you don't shut the Hell up!" Sanzo growled his head lowered as a very large anger cross appeared. Hakkai on the other hand stood behind Sanzo a goofy smile on his face. Both Gojyo and Goku stopped at hearing the threat in Sanzo's voice. " Mmmmm... Wha?" Takara asked sitting up and streching. " Morning sunshine." Gojyo said leaning between the seats and smiling sudductivly.
Wham Gojyo's face is now seen with large fan imprent on it, as Takara saftley stoes her fan. " Don't ever call me Sunshine." She said giving him a death glare.
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Takara growled irratably as she turned in the mirror to get a better look at the rip in her skirt. " Damned, preverted, Water Sprite." she muttered as she turned from the mirror to retreave the saftey-pin laying on the small hotel table. She sighed as she pinned the top pieces of matrial together. Only to discover that the matrial puckered in the middle giving her skirt a rear-view hole. ( Oh well.) she thought as she sighed. " Maybe I'll go check out some of the shopping around here." Said abcently as she dug around her pack for her wallet. " It couldn't hurt." She stated looking once more in the mirror at her holey skirt. Before heading out of the room.
Takara blinked surprised when she turned around from locking her door only to colide with someone's solid chest. " I'm so sorry," she apologigesied from where she was now sitting on the floor. " It's alright Takara, I should've told you I was here." Hakkai said smiling as he exteneded his hand to help her up. " Oh Hakkai, it's you." She said relieved that she hadn't just run some innocent person over. " Yep, anyway I was comming to see if you'd like to accompany me to the shopping distreict? I thought you might need to." he said as he helped her up and motioning to her pinned together skirt. " Oh, um, Yeah that's where I was heading." She said placing her hand over the hole and blushing. Hakkai smiled warmly as he began to walk towards the stairs. " Hey what about the others?" she called trying to catch up.
" Well Gojyo and Goku are asleep, and Sanzo is reading his paper and enjoying the peace. Besides they arn't really the shopping type. Gojyo goes more or less to pick up liqoure, and wemon, Goku goes to bye junk food, and Sanzo just doesn't shop." he explained as he and Takara made their way down the crowded street. " Oh," she said looking around at the shops. " And as long as I bye Sanzo some ciggerettes he's happy." Hakkai said smiling, he blinked when he noticed Takara was no longer beside him. He gulped when he saw her retreating form entering a large female clothing store. " Oh dear," He mumbled as he followed.
Hakkai's eyes grew wide as he entered the store. Never once, not even with Kanan had he ever sat foot in a women's clothing store. ( Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear,...) was what was running through his mind as he cautiously made his way through the ailses of clothing. " There you are, I thought you'd been abducted or something." Came Takara's voice as she aproached him. " Come on." she said motioning for him to follow her. " So do you think I should risk getting another skirt? I mean with Gojyo around, and all." she asked blinking when she got no reply. " Hakkai?" she asked turning around and slapping a hand to her forehead at what she saw.
Hakkai was standing near a rack of swim suits, his hands hopelessly tangled in the strings of a lavender bikini top. He turned holding up his hands to Takara a pitiful confused look on his face. " I can't figure it out." He whined pittifully as Takara walked over and sighed. " Here," she said reaching over and pulling on one of the strings, thus untangling the top and freeing his hands. " Oh, heh, why didn't I think of that?" he questioned lauhging nervously as he scratched the back of his head. Takara mearly groaned as she placed her head in her hands. (Of all the men in the world. I had to have a crush on this one.) She thouht sarcastically. " Yeah, know what? I have an idea, come here." she said reaching over and grabbing his collar and leading him over next to the dressing rooms to several padded chairs. " Here you set here, and I'll be back in a minute." She said pushing him down into one of the seats. She turned and began to walk away when a sudden thought came to her mind. She turned around just in time to see Hakkai poking a nearby manikane. " Ok, just don't touch anything." she said walking over and grabbing his arm. " Ok?" she asked as an irratated sweet drop appeared." Alright," Hakkai answered giving her a small smile.
--3 Hours Later---
Hakkai sat sprawled out in his seat. Legs streached out and his head leaned back in bordem. " Ok, I'm all done!" Takara said happilly as she walked up infront of him. Hakkai was on his feet in an instant. He smiled happilly at the thought of leaving, but it quickly faded when he noticed that Takara had no bags with her. " Where are your bags?" he asked. " Oh I decided that I'd look somewhere else." she said giving a nervous laugh as Hakkai gave her the closest thing to a death glare that he could give.
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Back at the hotel Gojyo was leant against the wall snoring softly. He gave a soft grunt as he began to wake up, streching he reached up with one hand and rubbed his face, stopping when he noticed both his hand and face were sticky. Blinking in surprise he looked down at his hand to find it covered in white foam. " What the Hell?" he asked holding his hand up to his nose and sniffing. Goku let out a loud laugh as he watched Gojyo his head still down. " You Little bastard!" Gojyo roared as he lounged at Goku who was to busy laughing at Gojyo's shaving cream covered face. Nearby Sanzo who'd been sleeping peacfully, was now lying wide awake twitching in anger a large anger cross on his forehead. " Both of you Knock it off!" he roared setting up in bed. His threat falling on deaf ears. Sanzo growled in irratation at being egnored, his anger cross growing larger by the minute.
Hakkai and Takara were just returning, bags in tow. They both jumped out of the way as the door to they guy's room suddenly flung open, Goku and Gojyo layed sprawled out on the floor. " This is all your fault, Yah damned monkey." Gojyo yelled as he untangled himself from Goku's legs. " Go to Hell, Water Sprite." Goku yelled shoving Gojyo off. " I said Shut the hell up." Sanzo yelled emerging into the hall way, shooting point blank at Gojyo and Goku. Who both stood dodging the bullets. "Damn whats your problem?" Goku mumbled as he dodged a bullet. " My problem is you two!" Sanzo grumbled deciding it best not to waist anymore bullets on the idiots.
Both Hakkai and Takara stood nearby both frozen in place, as they watched the spectical. " Where have you two been?" Sanzo asked recovering from his little out burst. "Getting supplies." Hakkai answered simply, as he removed a pack of ciggerettes from his pocket and tossing them to Sanzo. Hakkai was surprised when a sudden white blur went by his head, a sudden yelp from Takara made them all look at her in time to see Hakuryu bitting Takara's arm. " Get off me, dammit." She cried as she tried to shoo away the dragon. " It looks like someone's jealous." Gojyo Commented as Hakkai smiled embarassdly as a sweet drop appeared.
Well that's it for Chapter 4. I Know I didn't get to cover everthig that was in the preview I'm sorry, but it will be in the next chapter. I just thought that this stood better on it's own, so please don't be angery.
Oh yes I forgot to add it in but Takara did bye a new outfitt, while Hakkai was bying the supplies. So from now on she wears baggy dark almost black Turqouise cargo pants, a no sleeved purple shirt that buttons on the side, a leather tube top that shows at the top of her bust and leather arm gloves that attaches to her middle fingurs on both sides. She also has a brown excessories belt that hangs off one side. She now wears her hair in a long waist length braid.
Ok now that I put that in I hope you enjoy this chapter, as much as I did typing it the Shopping scene was so much fun. Anyways Please read and review.
Preview to Next Episode:
Hey Goku here! You don't want to miss the next exciting episode of Saiyuki. We come across another town infeastd with demons. What that? Alright we're finally going to get to see Takara's powers. Cool. You definatly don't want to miss the next Episode of Saiyuki: Takara's Incredible Dancing Flames. Hope to see you then.
Well until next time. Happy Trails.
DragonGirl4
And to CloudySkies86, thank you for being my 10th reviewer, you might be my best friend but I still wanna hurt you for the 9th review, just remember revenge comes when you least expect it. But you still reviewed twice in a row so I guess I'll give you a cookie. Oh yes and thank you so much for all your help on this, I really apriciate it, and I couldn't have done it with out you. Thankies!!!Oh yes, don't go outside or the clowns will rape you.:)
Ok anyways on with the story, and again thank you to everyone.
Disclaimer: I still don't own Saiyuki, though I wish I owened Hakkai, Oh well a person can dream. Right? I Do own Takara though and would apriciate you asking before you use her. Kay?
Chapter 4: A Shopping Disaster
Several Hours, Fights, Beatings, and Thearts Later
We find our weary travelers checking into a hotel in the middle of a bustling city.
" So you have nothing else?" Hakkai asked hopefully giving the young hostess behind the register one of his famous smiles. " I'm sorry sir, but all we have left are two singles, if you like we could set up some cots for you." She said blushing at his charming smile.Hakkai sighed disapointedley. " Alright, we'll need three cots, please." he said handing her "Sanzo's" credit card. "Very well, your rooms are 15,and 17. They'll be ready in a few minutes, if you like the kitchen/restaurant is straight through those doors." she said pointing to two double doors, and handing him two room keys. " Thank you, ma'am" Hakkai said smiling at her as he walked back out the front doors,towards the jeep. He smiled as he aproached, mostly because Goku and Gojyo were currntley killing each other, while Sanzo was doing his best to control his temper (and failing badly). Takara on the other hand was curled up asleep in the front seat.
" Well this is pleasent, I leave you for five minutes, and what do you do? Try to kill one another." Hakkai stated mock parntal scloding in his voice. Both Gojyo and Goku stopped momentaraly to look at him. "Yes, Mother." Gojyo muttered. Hakkai mearly chuckled as Sanzo suddenly stood and climbed rather ungracefully out of the jeep. " Did you get the rooms?" he asked giving Hakkai a "it had better be far away from them look." "Ahhh, well you see their sorta booked, except for two singles." Hakkai said laughing nervously scratching the back of his head. Sanzo sighed irratably as an anger cross apeared. Gojyo smiled happily. " Yah hear that monkey? Your gonna get it tonight." Gojyo said poking Goku in the head. " Shut up, water sprite, your the one who's gonna get it." Goku said pushing Gojyo's hand away. " Oh really? Yah wanna try it now?" Gojyo asked mock anger in his voice. "Yeah let's go." Goku said raising his fists.
" Your both gonig to get it if you don't shut the Hell up!" Sanzo growled his head lowered as a very large anger cross appeared. Hakkai on the other hand stood behind Sanzo a goofy smile on his face. Both Gojyo and Goku stopped at hearing the threat in Sanzo's voice. " Mmmmm... Wha?" Takara asked sitting up and streching. " Morning sunshine." Gojyo said leaning between the seats and smiling sudductivly.
Wham Gojyo's face is now seen with large fan imprent on it, as Takara saftley stoes her fan. " Don't ever call me Sunshine." She said giving him a death glare.
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Takara growled irratably as she turned in the mirror to get a better look at the rip in her skirt. " Damned, preverted, Water Sprite." she muttered as she turned from the mirror to retreave the saftey-pin laying on the small hotel table. She sighed as she pinned the top pieces of matrial together. Only to discover that the matrial puckered in the middle giving her skirt a rear-view hole. ( Oh well.) she thought as she sighed. " Maybe I'll go check out some of the shopping around here." Said abcently as she dug around her pack for her wallet. " It couldn't hurt." She stated looking once more in the mirror at her holey skirt. Before heading out of the room.
Takara blinked surprised when she turned around from locking her door only to colide with someone's solid chest. " I'm so sorry," she apologigesied from where she was now sitting on the floor. " It's alright Takara, I should've told you I was here." Hakkai said smiling as he exteneded his hand to help her up. " Oh Hakkai, it's you." She said relieved that she hadn't just run some innocent person over. " Yep, anyway I was comming to see if you'd like to accompany me to the shopping distreict? I thought you might need to." he said as he helped her up and motioning to her pinned together skirt. " Oh, um, Yeah that's where I was heading." She said placing her hand over the hole and blushing. Hakkai smiled warmly as he began to walk towards the stairs. " Hey what about the others?" she called trying to catch up.
" Well Gojyo and Goku are asleep, and Sanzo is reading his paper and enjoying the peace. Besides they arn't really the shopping type. Gojyo goes more or less to pick up liqoure, and wemon, Goku goes to bye junk food, and Sanzo just doesn't shop." he explained as he and Takara made their way down the crowded street. " Oh," she said looking around at the shops. " And as long as I bye Sanzo some ciggerettes he's happy." Hakkai said smiling, he blinked when he noticed Takara was no longer beside him. He gulped when he saw her retreating form entering a large female clothing store. " Oh dear," He mumbled as he followed.
Hakkai's eyes grew wide as he entered the store. Never once, not even with Kanan had he ever sat foot in a women's clothing store. ( Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear, Oh dear,...) was what was running through his mind as he cautiously made his way through the ailses of clothing. " There you are, I thought you'd been abducted or something." Came Takara's voice as she aproached him. " Come on." she said motioning for him to follow her. " So do you think I should risk getting another skirt? I mean with Gojyo around, and all." she asked blinking when she got no reply. " Hakkai?" she asked turning around and slapping a hand to her forehead at what she saw.
Hakkai was standing near a rack of swim suits, his hands hopelessly tangled in the strings of a lavender bikini top. He turned holding up his hands to Takara a pitiful confused look on his face. " I can't figure it out." He whined pittifully as Takara walked over and sighed. " Here," she said reaching over and pulling on one of the strings, thus untangling the top and freeing his hands. " Oh, heh, why didn't I think of that?" he questioned lauhging nervously as he scratched the back of his head. Takara mearly groaned as she placed her head in her hands. (Of all the men in the world. I had to have a crush on this one.) She thouht sarcastically. " Yeah, know what? I have an idea, come here." she said reaching over and grabbing his collar and leading him over next to the dressing rooms to several padded chairs. " Here you set here, and I'll be back in a minute." She said pushing him down into one of the seats. She turned and began to walk away when a sudden thought came to her mind. She turned around just in time to see Hakkai poking a nearby manikane. " Ok, just don't touch anything." she said walking over and grabbing his arm. " Ok?" she asked as an irratated sweet drop appeared." Alright," Hakkai answered giving her a small smile.
--3 Hours Later---
Hakkai sat sprawled out in his seat. Legs streached out and his head leaned back in bordem. " Ok, I'm all done!" Takara said happilly as she walked up infront of him. Hakkai was on his feet in an instant. He smiled happilly at the thought of leaving, but it quickly faded when he noticed that Takara had no bags with her. " Where are your bags?" he asked. " Oh I decided that I'd look somewhere else." she said giving a nervous laugh as Hakkai gave her the closest thing to a death glare that he could give.
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Back at the hotel Gojyo was leant against the wall snoring softly. He gave a soft grunt as he began to wake up, streching he reached up with one hand and rubbed his face, stopping when he noticed both his hand and face were sticky. Blinking in surprise he looked down at his hand to find it covered in white foam. " What the Hell?" he asked holding his hand up to his nose and sniffing. Goku let out a loud laugh as he watched Gojyo his head still down. " You Little bastard!" Gojyo roared as he lounged at Goku who was to busy laughing at Gojyo's shaving cream covered face. Nearby Sanzo who'd been sleeping peacfully, was now lying wide awake twitching in anger a large anger cross on his forehead. " Both of you Knock it off!" he roared setting up in bed. His threat falling on deaf ears. Sanzo growled in irratation at being egnored, his anger cross growing larger by the minute.
Hakkai and Takara were just returning, bags in tow. They both jumped out of the way as the door to they guy's room suddenly flung open, Goku and Gojyo layed sprawled out on the floor. " This is all your fault, Yah damned monkey." Gojyo yelled as he untangled himself from Goku's legs. " Go to Hell, Water Sprite." Goku yelled shoving Gojyo off. " I said Shut the hell up." Sanzo yelled emerging into the hall way, shooting point blank at Gojyo and Goku. Who both stood dodging the bullets. "Damn whats your problem?" Goku mumbled as he dodged a bullet. " My problem is you two!" Sanzo grumbled deciding it best not to waist anymore bullets on the idiots.
Both Hakkai and Takara stood nearby both frozen in place, as they watched the spectical. " Where have you two been?" Sanzo asked recovering from his little out burst. "Getting supplies." Hakkai answered simply, as he removed a pack of ciggerettes from his pocket and tossing them to Sanzo. Hakkai was surprised when a sudden white blur went by his head, a sudden yelp from Takara made them all look at her in time to see Hakuryu bitting Takara's arm. " Get off me, dammit." She cried as she tried to shoo away the dragon. " It looks like someone's jealous." Gojyo Commented as Hakkai smiled embarassdly as a sweet drop appeared.
Well that's it for Chapter 4. I Know I didn't get to cover everthig that was in the preview I'm sorry, but it will be in the next chapter. I just thought that this stood better on it's own, so please don't be angery.
Oh yes I forgot to add it in but Takara did bye a new outfitt, while Hakkai was bying the supplies. So from now on she wears baggy dark almost black Turqouise cargo pants, a no sleeved purple shirt that buttons on the side, a leather tube top that shows at the top of her bust and leather arm gloves that attaches to her middle fingurs on both sides. She also has a brown excessories belt that hangs off one side. She now wears her hair in a long waist length braid.
Ok now that I put that in I hope you enjoy this chapter, as much as I did typing it the Shopping scene was so much fun. Anyways Please read and review.
Preview to Next Episode:
Hey Goku here! You don't want to miss the next exciting episode of Saiyuki. We come across another town infeastd with demons. What that? Alright we're finally going to get to see Takara's powers. Cool. You definatly don't want to miss the next Episode of Saiyuki: Takara's Incredible Dancing Flames. Hope to see you then.
Well until next time. Happy Trails.
DragonGirl4