AN: right now i'm working on trying to make my chapters longer and making my spelling better but it's kinda hard without spellcheck. It's not like I have really blatant spelling errors but its just those little errors that make me feel like i'm writing at a 4th grade level lol XD. Also I'm surprised that nobody has asked why Naruto hasn't read his family scrolls yet, oh well he'll be gettin to that soon enough. Anyway i appreciate the reviews so i'll answer the ones that i feel need to be answered.
The DragonBard: that is true but i'm thinking more along the lines of like Izanagi and what not, because you can't use izanagi without the proper doujutsu, i think? I'm going to have our favorite jinchuriki making his own Yin-Yang Jutsu.
MKTerra: i honestly had no idea. I just made that name up because i thought it sounded japanese lol.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
Training Ground 23 was a relatively quiet area. It didn't have many trees, instead settling for many large boulders and a stream that ran directly through the middle of the training ground. This terrain was meant to give Konoha Shinobi more experience in dealing with different countries, though most of them preferred to stick with the norm.
But T.G.23 was about to get a whole lot louder, the reason for this being that Team 7's new sensei had officially claimed it as their own. And that is where we find our young Jinchuuriki now. Jiraiya was standing above his new team on a boulder staring at the rookie genin.
"Alright, now that we have made it here I would like to share with you the two reasons that my sensei asked me to train you." Jiraiya said calmly.
"First, is because of you..." He said while pointing at Naruto. "My apprentice was your father, and he always wanted me to train you, so now's a good enough time to start I guess, as a matter of fact kid I'm your muthafuckin Grandaddy." he said. 'Are you serious? my dad was trained by a Sannin, who is my grandad, who is also about to be my sensei, alot of stuff is happening nowadays huh,' Naruto thought flabbergasted.
"And the second reason, which you guys should find pretty damn amusing. Well lets just say you guys have alot of similarities to the Sannin, and my sensei noticed that... sooo he kinda wants me to make you into the next Sannin. Won't that be fun?" needless to say the team had a range of glorified thoughts of themselves.
'What? Finally, no more being held back, I will be given the oppurtunity to gain enough power to defeat him...' 'Me, as strong as Tsunade-Hime, I can't wait!' 'Wow, this'll be a decent stepping stone to reaching my new dream, becoming the Nidaime Rikudo Sennin...' Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto thought in that order.
"Ahh, but first we will have to have a friendly spar with yours truly to see where your all at." Jiraiya said. "I hope you all came prepared, you may use whatever techniques you want, cause regardless I'm going to smash you's into tomorrow, BEGIN!"
Naruto lifted up his forehead protector that concealed his Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. 'I've been waiting to try this bad boy out.' He looked over to see that Sasuke already had his Sharingan active and Sakura had a few shuriken out ready to let them off at a moment's notice. Jiraiya whistled, "Wow, two Sharingan users, I wonder how I'll be able to handle." Jiraiya said sarcastically.
Sasuke suddenly went through a couple hand seals, "Katon: Goukakyu no Jutsu!" Sasuke let out a massive fireball at the Sannin, who simply jumped behind the boulder he had been standing on for cover. Naruto seeing his chance jumped high into the air until he had Jiraiya in his sights who just waved while fire was cascading from both sides around him.
Naruto went through seals that he had just copied a couple seconds earlier. "Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" Naruto let out a fireball that was three times as large as Sasuke's, this being due to his intense chakra. 'There's no way he could have escaped that one,' he thought as he landed on the ground. Suddenly a pair of hands reached up from the ground and pulled him in while pulling the owner of the hands out.
"I'm a Sannin for Kami's sake, did you honestly expect me to be defeated so easily, this new generation thinks they're hot shit don't they?" Jiraiya said exasperatedly. He then jumped away as six shuriken hit the spot he occupied a moment ago. Sasuke and Sakura landed at his side immediately after and began to pull him out of the ground.
"Sasuke, you're going to have to distract him for awhile while Sakura flanks him from the right and I use that as an oppurtunity to finish the deal, alright?" they both nodded. "Alright... GO!"
Sasuke, not wasting anytime, rushed in quickly throwing a kunai. His sensei saw it coming and sidestepped, but while he was in mid-step another bout of shuriken reached him causing him to manuever awkwardly to avoid them and then Sasuke let off another Jutsu before he could fully regain his balance. "Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu!" Sasuke said blowing a large stream of fire reaching their sensei in two seconds, but one second was all Jiraiya needed to escape appearing beside Sasuke expecting him to try and engage in a taijutsu bout. To his surprise his student jumped away from him.
Naruto stood on top of a particularly tall boulder with his hands crossed, palms facing Jiraiya, creating another Jutsu on the spot, "Chakura Hou!" a thick beam of chakra flew towards Jiraiya and hit dead on creating a large explosion.
Team 7 assembled and stood waiting for the smoke to clear. When it did all they saw was a large puddle of red liquid. "Oh no, Naruto what have you done we killed a Sannin, we're gonna go to jail or worse... get executed, no no no no no, I refuse to be imprisoned for the rest of my-" Sakura was cut off by a loud boisterous laugh. "Hah Hah! What a decent prank, I Kawarimi'd with a red paint can I had hidden, and it worked." The team all let out sighs of relief.
"Well you guys did alright but you still lost in the end." Jiraiya commented.
Naruto piped up, "How did we lose, we can all still fight."
"That's not what these guys have to say." Suddenly three Jiraiyas came from behind them held kunais to their throats. "Don't worry, you guys did fine for a bunch of rookies, make sure you come here tomorrow and prepare for a five and a half month camping trip. That's when the real training begins.
AN: well i think this chapter was pretty fucking fresh we got to see Naruto in action with his Sharingan and we got to see Team 7 fight as an actual team with a strategy that would probably catch a chuunin and maybe even a rookie jounin off guard. This was my first fight scene so i'm not sure if I did good, so tell me if you liked it, hated it and if you did hate it don't be a dick about and tell me how could improve.
TGrizz Out!