A/N: Wow! You guys are even better than my readers for my other story. If any of the people who has been reading Star Troubled from the very beginning are reading this, I'm very sorry. Well, this is the first chapter that I wrote all by myself so review!

MPOV-Mary-Lynette------------------------------------

After I went upstairs I checked out every room then listened in on what everyone was talking about. When I heard them go outside I ran to my room and closed the door.

(A/N: everything in italics is ML speaking for her heart and everything in bold is her brain)

"Ok, everything is going fine, but it's not all good. What do you mean?Well, Max thinks his plan's working, but he also won't let me out of his sight. Also I'm going to have to be all lovey dovey with him so he doesn't suspect anything. That's why I made-out with him. Well, your plan's working the whole time I didn't feel any love for him. Sweet! So, what should we do? First, we need to get out of here, but without Max finding out until we're somewhere miles away. Then we're going to have to find help before he finds us. Well, we need to find out more about where we are and figure out the best place to hide out. That means trying to get that information out of Max or someone else. From what I understood they don't know that Max kidnapped us. We could easily tell them and get them to take us home. Yeah, we could, but what if they don't believe us then what? Don't worry you just keep our cover and I'll think of the plan." I said pacing. I stopped talking when I heard footsteps coming to the door. I quickly ran over to the desk grabbed a piece of paper and began writing.

"Dear Diary you would not believe the day I had! Last night Max kissed me and of course I freaked. So I went to go talk to the girls about it and all of a sudden Ash showed up! After he declared that he was leaving forever I went home and Max showed up and kidnapped me!" I said writing it down listening as the door opened and whoever it was walk in.

"Who you talking to?" Max asked right behind me. I turned around quickly like I was caught by surprise.

"Oh, um, no one I was just writing." I said pretending to be flustered.

"Let me see." He said reaching for the paper but I grabbed his arm stopping him. He snatched his arm away and grabbed the paper.

"No! Please don't read it, it's private!" Max read the fake diary entry and blushed.

"Sorry." He whispered handing me the paper. "So, you wanna come play soccer with us?" Nice switching of topics.

"Um, ok, but I need to tell you now I'm not very good." I got up and followed Max to the field out back.

"Alright to make this easier it's boys against girls and girls get the ball first." Talon said before all the guys huddled together. Autumn, Violet, Sapphire, and I huddled togeher too.

"Alright first things first, what's your best position Mary-Lynette." Sapphire asked.

"Mid-field." I answered.

"Sweet. So, Autumn striker, Mary-Lynette mid-field, Sapphire defense, and I'm goalie." Violet said. We broke apart and got in our positions.

The game started when Autumn passed the ball back to me. I quickly settled the ball and dribbled it up the field. Clay ran up to me but I faked him out and passed it to Autumn. Autumn couldn't settle it and Cliff stole it and I turned around and chased after him. We were running side by side and I kicked the ball from in front of him tripping him. I turned around and dribbled up the field again. Max tried to side tackle me but I kicked the ball in front of me and jumped over his legs. Out of the corners of my eyes I saw Clay and Cliff gaining on me so I passed the ball to Autumn who took a one touch shot at the goal but Talon caught it and booted it to Sapphire. Sapphire dribbled up the field and when I got close enough she passed it to me. I did a two touch pass to Autumn who at the last minute passed back to me and had to side tackle the ball into the goal Talon barely missing it. We played for a hour before we all sat down and rested.

"Does anyone know what the score was?" Max asked breathless.

"Girls 1; Boys 0" Autumn answered automatically.

"I thought you said Mary-Lynette wasn't any good, Max." Talon said.

"That's what she told me." Max looked at me wanting an answer to my lie.

"Well, I wasn't." I said. Everyone looked a me like I was crazy. "It should of only taken me three minutes to trip all of you guys not five. Plus the last time I played was four days ago, I'm out of practice." We all busted out laughing.

"Alright, alright, let's go hunt." Clay said getting up.

APOV-Ash-------------------------------------------------------------

Hours later everyone was ready. Lady Hannah found out that Max lived somewhere in this area. We were going to divide into three groups and at the end of every hour we would tell Lady Hannah and Mark of our progress. Group One left at 6:00, Group Two left at 6:25, and we left at 6:50. Each group had seven trackers and six other people. Thierry was in our group.

At five that afternoon there was still no sign of them. Our group stopped to hunt when one of the trackers picked up Mary-Lynette's scent. At least she's getting blood. We finished hunting then followed the tracker to a two story house out in the middle of the desert.

"Hannah." Thierry said into the walkie-talkie.

"Yes?" She responded.

"We've found it. It's maybe twenty miles south of the city limits."

"Alright."

"So, what do we do now?" I asked.

"We need to wait for everyone." Thierry replied. I looked around the landscape there was nothing around for miles, at anytime they could look out a window and see us.

"I don't think that's smart. Let's just go in and demand Mary-Lynette back." I said.

"No, we wait. It won't take them long." We sat in the shadow of the house where no one inside could see us and waited. Some time later several cars pulled up and we joined everyone. "Here's the plan, Group One you go around the back and guard the door, Group Two you guard the front door, and Group Three will go in." We waited until everyone was in position before I knocked on the door. There was a faint 'coming' and footsteps before the door opened.

"Yes?"

MPOV-Max-----------------------------------------------

After we came back from hunting Mary-Lynette and I curled up on one of the many love-seats and watched 'Never Been Kissed'. Around five there was a knock on the door and Sapphire got up and got it.

"Yes?" I heard her ask.

"Hi, we're here to get Mary-Lynette." A guy said causing Sapphire to gasp. I quickly got up to see who it was when I saw Ash's face plus twelve others.

A/N: Well, I posted this chapter because it was already done and I felt bad. So this will be the last update for a while. I'll update when I get motivated about this story again. This doesn't mean that you shouldn't review because who knows your review might get me motivated again. As you wait you should check out my forums, community and my other story (you can get to all of them through my profile). Again sorry.