Thanks to Kathy, I'm sorry (you didn't sound psycho, it's understandable),
and you can review and email me as much as you want, I enjoy the feedback.
Also thanks to Daintress, I was checking out one of your stories today and it looked pretty good from what I read. I'll be sure to review next chance I get.
Also to VoicezWithin. Thank you so much for the review, and thank you for liking my story!
This story is dedicated to these 3 splendid (I love the thesaurus) readers!
Well here's a longer chapter, like I promised. They are still pretty short, but later chapters are even longer (I'm actually writing the story out on paper) from what I've written so far, (I'm on chapter 10 right now) so don't fear, although you probably haven't. Here you are, the 4th chapter of my story.
Chapter Four: Katie, Open Your Eyes
"Oliver? Oliver!" someone said to him. "What?" he mumbled sleepily. "Get up! You're late! Breakfast is over in 10 minutes. You have to get up. NOW," he heard the voice still badger on. He opened his eyes and tried to focus on the person interrupting his slumber. "Who is it?" he finally asked as the sunlight hit his eyes. "You're not serious, are you? It's Katie," she said. He soon realized that it wasn't sunlight in his eyes, but it was the reflection of the sun off her brilliant golden hair. He smiled lazily. "Morning gorgeous," he said looking at her. She rolled her eyes. "Finally. You're awake, come on," she said, her light voice slightly exasperated from trying to wake him. "Let's go, you need breakfast before class," she said, pulling his muscular arm. "Well, you look yummy, I want you for breakfast," he said pulling her on his lap. "No Oliver," she said attempting to get up. He wouldn't let her. "Katie, give me a chance. I could make you so happy. I'm nothing like that jerk Roger," he said trying to pull her closer. She was putting up a good fight. He felt her body tense up. "No Oliver. I know you slept with Becky last night. Now go get breakfast. I have to go to Potions," she said very quietly and got up. "Now." He nodded and she left the common room.
"Dammit!" he cursed. "Wood, no need to use that strong of language this early, and especially in the presence of these virgin ears," Fred Weasley said sarcastically as he came down the stairs. Oliver looked up angrily, his normally brown eyes black in anger. "I suggest not coming on that strong next time. She seemed rather shocked by what you did, or at least annoyed," he said, "Here, I brought you a piece of toast. At least something before you're late for transfiguration." "Thanks, mate," Oliver said, accepting the toast. But before he took his bite, he remembered whom he had gotten it from. He had had too much experience involving the Weasley's, food, and giant yellow canaries. He looked up at Fred. "Don't worry, I didn't do a thing to it." Oliver smiled and took a bite.
"Now, you get to class. I have to be off now; class starts in, oh dear, 2 minutes. I'm too early. Best be off to cause a bit of trouble," Fred said showing Oliver some fireworks, leaving the common room, and Oliver all by himself. He finished off the toast and headed to his dorm to grab his transfiguration books. He thought about Katie the whole time and what she had said. He felt even dirtier then he had last night when he was actually with Becky. He was really starting to kick himself in the arse for all this stupid shit he had been doing.
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"He did it. Again. He's getting worse too. This morning he pulled me on his lap and told me that he wasn't like Davies and that he could make me happy. Or something like that. Argh! When will he get the hint?!" Katie exclaimed while throwing the ingredients into her cauldron. "Katie maybe you should just," Angelina started before Snape caught Katie for being too aggressive. "Miss Bell! Don't be so aggressive! 5 points from Gryffindor!" the professor said sharply. Katie sneered and stuck out her tongue at Snape's back. "Make that 10 points and detention," he added icily, without even turning around. Katie glared at him for a minute and then went back to work. "Great. Just what I need," she muttered. "Katie just give the guy a chance," Angelina whispered. "No. I don't want him. He's just like Davies; he's just not showing it yet. I know it. All guys are the same in the end," Katie replied and went on with her work, not talking for the rest of the class.
"I can't believe she's still hung up on the Roger thing. I thought she was over that," Angelina told Alicia outside the potions room as they waited for Katie, who had to stay after to arrange her detention. "Well maybe she's over him, she's just not over the impact of what he did. But can you blame her? Can you imagine walking in on your boyfriend of 2 years in bed with another woman? On 3 separate occasions?" Alicia retaliated. "I know. But we have to bring these two together. I know she needs him, even if she won't admit it," Ange said, looking around for Katie. "I know, but Christmas holidays are coming up," Alicia said. "I know, it'll have to wait until after, unless there is some sort of miracle. We just need to talk some sense into," "Oliver?" Katie said from behind the two girls, interrupting their chat about her. "Good, he needs it. He needs to leave me alone." "Yeah, don't worry about it, we'll handle it" Angelina said referring to her and Alicia. "Thanks. You two are awesome. But anyway, I have to go help Snape clean out his stores after dinner after Quidditch tonight! I'll be up till 3! Do you know how hard that is? Especially with Snape?" Katie complained. "Well at least it's only one and not a whole week or something. And plus maybe you can just sleep with him and get out of it. He so wants you. If that were any of us, we would have had detention for a week" Alicia told Katie sarcastically. "Oh shut up. That's is disgusting. Now let's get to Herbology before I puke," Katie said pretending to get sick.
As Oliver walked out to Care of Magical Creatures, he saw Katie walking to herbology with Angelina and Alicia. Her hair was pulled back into a loose plait, and some strands were hanging down. She looked gorgeous. Her eyes were alive as she chatted with the two other girls. He ran over to them.
"Hey girls!" he said cheerfully in his deep Scottish accent, "Remember practice tonight after dinner!" "Thanks Oliver. Don't worry you told us about five hundred times last night," Alicia said sarcastically. "I know, have fun in class girls," he said and smiled at Katie. "Here, I was bored in Transfiguration and I made this for you," he said softly handing her an enchanted origami swan. He set it in her hand and it slowly drifted along her hand, as though it were water. "Thanks," she smiled smugly. He gave a smile to the other girls and ran off towards Hagrid's Hut.
"Katie Bell!" Angelina exclaimed as soon as Oliver was out of hearing range, "How could you NOT want that! He's so sweet! Do you know how hard it is to make one of those things?" "Then you date him if he's so great and sweet and wonderful," Katie said in a huff and stormed into the greenhouse they were working in. "When will she open her eyes, and stop being so blind?" Alicia exclaimed, "I would been in heaven if a guy half as hot as Oliver did something like that for me." "I know. Oliver is perfect for her," Angelina replied, "I just don't know why she just can't forget about Roger and just move on with it."
Katie stepped out of the greenhouse. She had obviously been listening to their conversation. Her eyes were an icy green colour and her face was flushed with anger. "How dare you say that?! You have no idea what the impact of what Roger did to me. You have no idea at all," Katie yelled, "When will you both get it?! I don't feel like putting up with another guy and all the shit he'll bring. I don't want any guy! Especially Oliver. He's exactly like Davies." She stormed back in. Angelina was furious, and Alicia looked scared. "We get it Katie, it's just you that doesn't!" Angelina yelled into her, when really she felt like grabbing the girl, shaking her and yelling at her until it sunk in. Oliver was not Roger.
"Come on Ange," Alicia said shaking, "Let's just go in and cool off. She'll get it, but yelling at her like this won't do a thing." "I know," Angelina said and walked into Herbology. Alicia sat beside Katie, and Angelina was on the other side. None of the girls talked through class. They were all so mad, thinking about how she just didn't get it.
A/N: I know I update a lot. But I've had a lot of time off school, so I've been typing these chapters up like a maniac. I don't think you mind though. My second semester of high school starts soon, so I don't know how often I'll be updating, but I'll definitely be updating, just not as much as I have. But keep reading and reviewing, I love it!!!
Also thanks to Daintress, I was checking out one of your stories today and it looked pretty good from what I read. I'll be sure to review next chance I get.
Also to VoicezWithin. Thank you so much for the review, and thank you for liking my story!
This story is dedicated to these 3 splendid (I love the thesaurus) readers!
Well here's a longer chapter, like I promised. They are still pretty short, but later chapters are even longer (I'm actually writing the story out on paper) from what I've written so far, (I'm on chapter 10 right now) so don't fear, although you probably haven't. Here you are, the 4th chapter of my story.
Chapter Four: Katie, Open Your Eyes
"Oliver? Oliver!" someone said to him. "What?" he mumbled sleepily. "Get up! You're late! Breakfast is over in 10 minutes. You have to get up. NOW," he heard the voice still badger on. He opened his eyes and tried to focus on the person interrupting his slumber. "Who is it?" he finally asked as the sunlight hit his eyes. "You're not serious, are you? It's Katie," she said. He soon realized that it wasn't sunlight in his eyes, but it was the reflection of the sun off her brilliant golden hair. He smiled lazily. "Morning gorgeous," he said looking at her. She rolled her eyes. "Finally. You're awake, come on," she said, her light voice slightly exasperated from trying to wake him. "Let's go, you need breakfast before class," she said, pulling his muscular arm. "Well, you look yummy, I want you for breakfast," he said pulling her on his lap. "No Oliver," she said attempting to get up. He wouldn't let her. "Katie, give me a chance. I could make you so happy. I'm nothing like that jerk Roger," he said trying to pull her closer. She was putting up a good fight. He felt her body tense up. "No Oliver. I know you slept with Becky last night. Now go get breakfast. I have to go to Potions," she said very quietly and got up. "Now." He nodded and she left the common room.
"Dammit!" he cursed. "Wood, no need to use that strong of language this early, and especially in the presence of these virgin ears," Fred Weasley said sarcastically as he came down the stairs. Oliver looked up angrily, his normally brown eyes black in anger. "I suggest not coming on that strong next time. She seemed rather shocked by what you did, or at least annoyed," he said, "Here, I brought you a piece of toast. At least something before you're late for transfiguration." "Thanks, mate," Oliver said, accepting the toast. But before he took his bite, he remembered whom he had gotten it from. He had had too much experience involving the Weasley's, food, and giant yellow canaries. He looked up at Fred. "Don't worry, I didn't do a thing to it." Oliver smiled and took a bite.
"Now, you get to class. I have to be off now; class starts in, oh dear, 2 minutes. I'm too early. Best be off to cause a bit of trouble," Fred said showing Oliver some fireworks, leaving the common room, and Oliver all by himself. He finished off the toast and headed to his dorm to grab his transfiguration books. He thought about Katie the whole time and what she had said. He felt even dirtier then he had last night when he was actually with Becky. He was really starting to kick himself in the arse for all this stupid shit he had been doing.
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"He did it. Again. He's getting worse too. This morning he pulled me on his lap and told me that he wasn't like Davies and that he could make me happy. Or something like that. Argh! When will he get the hint?!" Katie exclaimed while throwing the ingredients into her cauldron. "Katie maybe you should just," Angelina started before Snape caught Katie for being too aggressive. "Miss Bell! Don't be so aggressive! 5 points from Gryffindor!" the professor said sharply. Katie sneered and stuck out her tongue at Snape's back. "Make that 10 points and detention," he added icily, without even turning around. Katie glared at him for a minute and then went back to work. "Great. Just what I need," she muttered. "Katie just give the guy a chance," Angelina whispered. "No. I don't want him. He's just like Davies; he's just not showing it yet. I know it. All guys are the same in the end," Katie replied and went on with her work, not talking for the rest of the class.
"I can't believe she's still hung up on the Roger thing. I thought she was over that," Angelina told Alicia outside the potions room as they waited for Katie, who had to stay after to arrange her detention. "Well maybe she's over him, she's just not over the impact of what he did. But can you blame her? Can you imagine walking in on your boyfriend of 2 years in bed with another woman? On 3 separate occasions?" Alicia retaliated. "I know. But we have to bring these two together. I know she needs him, even if she won't admit it," Ange said, looking around for Katie. "I know, but Christmas holidays are coming up," Alicia said. "I know, it'll have to wait until after, unless there is some sort of miracle. We just need to talk some sense into," "Oliver?" Katie said from behind the two girls, interrupting their chat about her. "Good, he needs it. He needs to leave me alone." "Yeah, don't worry about it, we'll handle it" Angelina said referring to her and Alicia. "Thanks. You two are awesome. But anyway, I have to go help Snape clean out his stores after dinner after Quidditch tonight! I'll be up till 3! Do you know how hard that is? Especially with Snape?" Katie complained. "Well at least it's only one and not a whole week or something. And plus maybe you can just sleep with him and get out of it. He so wants you. If that were any of us, we would have had detention for a week" Alicia told Katie sarcastically. "Oh shut up. That's is disgusting. Now let's get to Herbology before I puke," Katie said pretending to get sick.
As Oliver walked out to Care of Magical Creatures, he saw Katie walking to herbology with Angelina and Alicia. Her hair was pulled back into a loose plait, and some strands were hanging down. She looked gorgeous. Her eyes were alive as she chatted with the two other girls. He ran over to them.
"Hey girls!" he said cheerfully in his deep Scottish accent, "Remember practice tonight after dinner!" "Thanks Oliver. Don't worry you told us about five hundred times last night," Alicia said sarcastically. "I know, have fun in class girls," he said and smiled at Katie. "Here, I was bored in Transfiguration and I made this for you," he said softly handing her an enchanted origami swan. He set it in her hand and it slowly drifted along her hand, as though it were water. "Thanks," she smiled smugly. He gave a smile to the other girls and ran off towards Hagrid's Hut.
"Katie Bell!" Angelina exclaimed as soon as Oliver was out of hearing range, "How could you NOT want that! He's so sweet! Do you know how hard it is to make one of those things?" "Then you date him if he's so great and sweet and wonderful," Katie said in a huff and stormed into the greenhouse they were working in. "When will she open her eyes, and stop being so blind?" Alicia exclaimed, "I would been in heaven if a guy half as hot as Oliver did something like that for me." "I know. Oliver is perfect for her," Angelina replied, "I just don't know why she just can't forget about Roger and just move on with it."
Katie stepped out of the greenhouse. She had obviously been listening to their conversation. Her eyes were an icy green colour and her face was flushed with anger. "How dare you say that?! You have no idea what the impact of what Roger did to me. You have no idea at all," Katie yelled, "When will you both get it?! I don't feel like putting up with another guy and all the shit he'll bring. I don't want any guy! Especially Oliver. He's exactly like Davies." She stormed back in. Angelina was furious, and Alicia looked scared. "We get it Katie, it's just you that doesn't!" Angelina yelled into her, when really she felt like grabbing the girl, shaking her and yelling at her until it sunk in. Oliver was not Roger.
"Come on Ange," Alicia said shaking, "Let's just go in and cool off. She'll get it, but yelling at her like this won't do a thing." "I know," Angelina said and walked into Herbology. Alicia sat beside Katie, and Angelina was on the other side. None of the girls talked through class. They were all so mad, thinking about how she just didn't get it.
A/N: I know I update a lot. But I've had a lot of time off school, so I've been typing these chapters up like a maniac. I don't think you mind though. My second semester of high school starts soon, so I don't know how often I'll be updating, but I'll definitely be updating, just not as much as I have. But keep reading and reviewing, I love it!!!