Again, sorry for not updating in ages I've been busy with 'After The Last Hope' and my new series 'The Prophecy' book one is called 'Life Will Never Be The Same' I know I never update… but at least I update something… So sorry for not updating! This is going to be a long chapter... so, yeah


(The Start)

Princess carefully placed one paw in the snow, the coldness creeping up her legs, sending shivers down her spine.

She carried the small bundle of fur towards her brother, whose eyes were wide with confusion.

"This young kit, she's my only daughter… I want you to have her, teach her the ways of the clans," the kittypet told her brother truthfully.

"I can't, she's your kit Princess!" her brother exclaimed in disbelief, his green eyes stretched wide.

"And I decide! She is going with you to learn the ways of the clan!" Princess told her brother, a tone telling no one argue with her.

"Okay, she looks like me," he slowly admitted and Princess glanced at the dark ginger she kit, she did look like Fireheart, but only darker than him.

"Take her Fireheart, please," she nudged the little ginger kit towards him. "She can be your new apprentice…"

Fireheart didn't look convinced but he gave his sister a nod "Okay, I will teach her the ways of a warrior," he promised his sister.

"Okay, come and visit me soon! And bring my daughter!"


(Five Moons Later)
The little ginger kit pounced on her younger siblings… "I'll bite you!" she taunted, placing a paw on Fernkit's chest, and she let out a mock terrified squeal.

Suddenly she was bowled over by her brother, a fuzzy grey tom named Ashkit. "Hey! Get off me, you're as heavy as a twoleg monster!" she spat tauntingly at him and he gave her a long amused look. "That's not going to make me get off," he teased lightly, flicking her with his tail.

"Ashkit! Get off your sister!" my mother meowed and I managed to sneak a quick look to see Brindleface walking towards us. "Good one!" she hissed at him

"Blazekit, Ashkit, Fernkit, you are almost apprentices! You should start acting like one," Brindleface scolded but her pale green eyes shone with love and affections which showed Blazekit that she wasn't really mad.

Last moon, the young ginger kit had learned Brindleface was not her real mother, but a kittypet named Princess… sister of Fireheart, a warrior of ThunderClan.

Blazekit was angry for a while, having three moons of her life a lie, but soothed down a few days later.

"Sorry Brindleface," Fernkit meowed sincerely, the innocence in her voice almost making Blazekit snort.

"It's alright, you kits keep playing, I'm going to take a nap," she meowed, yawning, revealing her sharp teeth which made the dark ginger kits eyes widen. Once Brindleface had gone, Blazekit bared her teeth at Fernkit, waiting to see if she would squeal or yelp, but she gave a shrug and bared her teeth back at Blazekit.

"Who's got sharper teeth comp huh?" Ashkit asked, his dark blue eyes flickering from Fernkit to Blazekit

"Foxdung!" Blazekit cursed, unsheathing her claws and pouncing on a floating leaf, deciding to take her anger out on this rather than Fernkit. I may be part kittypet but I'll show everyone just how strong I can be!

She dug her claws into the leaf and flipped it over, so she was baring her teeth at it, she slashed viciously and finishing off her move with a bite to the centre of the leaf. Ha, I'm powerful… I'll be the finest warrior ThunderClan has ever seen, by the time I've finished training everyone will totally forget that I was part kittypet!

She glanced around and saw Darkstripe, a warrior who often tormented her of her kittypet roots.

He gave her a menacing glare and hissed, and she rudely turned her back on him, knowing she shouldn't let that mangy piece of fox dung get to her.


(A Moon Later)

Blazepaw walked towards the medicine cat den to visit her denmate, Sorrelkit. She was the daughter of Whitestorm, a loyal and respected warrior, and Willowpelt, a kind and brave warrior. Recently, it was believed that Darkstripe fed her deathberries! Blazekit and her foster siblings had been confined to the apprentice den because of it, but she wanted to question Darkstripe herself, so she told her mother she was going to visit Sorrelkit, which she was first.

Blazepaw spotted the medicine cat, Cinderpelt, lying beside the tortoiseshell kit, keeping her warm.

I guess I'll come back another time because I need to tend to the traitor!

She stalked out of the den and headed towards where Darkstripe was being held, with Brackenfur and Mousefur guarding.

Great, how am I going to get past these warriors?

She thought about it for a while and then slowly padded forward, her eyes narrowed as the two warriors gazed at her steadily. "What are you doing here Blazepaw?" Mousefur asked impatiently, her tail-tip twitching in annoyance.

"I came to tell you that Firestar has an important message for you!" she meowed as bravely as she could.

Brackenfur narrowed his eyes. "Why didn't Firestar come to us himself?"

Blazepaw shuffled her paws, but her eyes shone brightly. "I don't know, I was walking towards the medicine cat den, and Frostfur told me to get you guys to go! Firestar was by the Great Sycamore I think," she told them, pretending to put on her thinkers face.

Mousefur eyes were dulled and Blazepaw remembered her brother, Runningwind had been murdered by Tigerclaw, who was an exiled cat, who was once part of ThunderClan.

"Well? Do you believe her?" Mousefur's mew brought Blazepaw back from her thoughts.

"I don't know? If Firestar really does need us…" Brackenfur trailed on, looking confused, but then shook his head "Come on Mousefur, we'll tell Thornclaw and Willowpelt to take over guard," the two cats slowly began padding away and Blazepaw hurried into the cave where Darkstripe was being held.

His eyes lit up as she entered "Why did you try to murder Sorrelkit?" she snarled, her tail bushed out in defiance.

"I don't have to tell you anything kittypet!" Darkstripe spat, his claws unsheathing.

"So you're admitting it then? If you don't want to tell me anything! You tried to murder my friend!" she spat "Where is your loyalty? What is wrong with you?" she questioned him, her voice a yowl.

"So what if I tried to kill the little piece of dung? You have no proof now that I have told you!" he laughed menacingly at the kit.

Blazepaw bushed out her fur but before she could do anything a loud voice meowed, echoing through the cave. "We have all the proof we need!" Blazepaw spun around, her fur bristling with fright, until she realized it was just her mother's brother, Firestar.

"Thank you Blazepaw, go back your den, you should've been there all along!" he hissed at her flicking his tail so it pointed out of the cave.

"No Firestar, I'm staying right here!" she exclaimed, annoyance in her sparkling green eyes. "I deserve it, I got this proof!"

Firestar opened his mouth, but then closed it and sighed. "I guess you can, you deserve it,"

Blazepaw gave her clanmates a triumphant look before glaring at the prisoner. "What shall we do with him?" Brackenfur asked, his eyes narrowed, while Mousefur bristled beside him.

"Exile him, and if we find him on our territory, kill him!" Firestar decided, something flashing in his dark green eyes "And after that, I need to say something very important," Firestar added mysteriously, and Blazepaw gave him a curious look, but his eyes were guarded.


Blazepaw sat beside Fernpaw and Ashpaw when the ceremony started… she was only just listening to Firestar's accusations and Darkstripe's protests.

But one thing she did hear was. "Darkstripe, you are no longer a part of ThunderClan! If any of my warriors find you on our territory, they have my permission to kill you!" he spat, anger in his normally calm green eyes.

"Oh StarClan!" Fernpaw whispered beside her, and Blazepaw stiffened and leaned closer to hear Darkstripe's response. "I'd like to see them try!" he scoffed, walking towards the exit, his tail raised high like he didn't have a worry in the world.

Great StarClan, he's confident she thought secretly to herself, partly admiring his confidence as he strutted out of camp. He tried to murder Sorrelkit she tried to erase her earlier thought from her head, feeling horrified.

"And I need to thank a certain apprentice who helped me with this, Blazepaw!" her ears pricked as she heard her name and she ducked her head in embarrassment as the clan stared at her, and then started cheering her name.

At least I don't get mocked for my kittypet roots no more, well maybe Longtail gives the occasional taunt but that's it, I feel like a forest born ThunderClan warrior!


Blazepaw barely tuned into her battle session that day, her dreams had been troubled lately, of blood… and large cats fighting each other to the death! She had told Firestar and Cinderpelt, who were each very worried.

"Blazepaw!" an annoyed growl came in her ear and she blinked. "Wh-What?" she asked, shaking her head. Frostfur was leading a training session with Longtail and Brackenfur.

"You're not focusing!" the white she cat sighed. "Is something wrong?"

The reddish she cat rolled her eyes, the normal attitude coming back to her. "Of course not!" she scoffed. And Frostfur was convinced.


"ThunderClan fought bravely in battle against BloodClan, and we know that StarClan is watching us," Firestar's loud yowl echoed throughout the ThunderClan camp.

She sat with Ashpaw to one side and Fernpaw to the other, their eyes all shone and their battle scars were visible in the bright sunlight.

"There are three new warriors among us," he started and before he barely finished that, Blazepaw, Fernpaw, and Ashpaw were bouncing around like excited mice! What about Brindleface? Is she watching us now?

Brindleface had been murdered by Tigerstar, who had died in the BloodClan battle, Blazepaw partly wishing she was the one who got to kill him.

"Blazepaw, Fernpaw, and Ashpaw," the leader summoned them forward, and Blazepaw's eyes stretched wide… This was really, finally happening!

Firestar leapt off the Highrock and landed below, in front of the apprentices "They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble, and I commend them to you as warriors in their turn,"

The dark ginger she cat walked forward, Fernpaw and Ashpaw brushing her pelt on each side.

"Blazepaw, Ashpaw, and Fernpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?"

"I do," Fernpaw shivered beside her.

"I do," Ashpaw echoed.

"I do," Blazepaw meowed more loudly to outdo her foster siblings.

Firestar gave her an amused look before going on. "Then by the power of StarClan I give you your warrior name, Fernpaw!"

The pale grey she cat walked forward, body trembling. Firestar brushed pelts with Fernpaw and stepped back. "Fernpaw, from this moment on you shall be known as Ferncloud," Blazepaw exchanged excited looks with Ashpaw, wondering who would be next.

"StarClan honours your kindness and thoughtfulness and welcomes you as a full warrior of ThunderClan!"

The newly named Ferncloud sat down under the Highrock and her eyes flickered to Ashpaw, and then Blazepaw.


"Ashpaw," Firestar summoned.

The grey tom gave her a teasing triumphant look before walking slowly, but confidently towards Firestar. That mouse brain, she thought, faintly amused by his actions.

He brushed fur with Firestar and stared wide eyed as he stepped back. "Ashpaw, from this moment on you shall be known as Ashfur!" the grey tom bushed out his fur in excitement and gazed up at the stars, as if saying his new name to his deceased mother, Brindleface.

"StarClan honours your strength and courage and welcomes you as a full member of ThunderClan!" Firestar finished with Ashpaw, and flicked him playfully with his tail. Ashfur sat beside Ferncloud, both of their eyes on her


"And lastly, Blazepaw," pride filled Firestar's mew.

She walked towards her former mentor, her eyes bright with pride… not the least bit scared of the whole clan watching her.

She felt her soft, sleek fur brush with Firestar's, and her chest puffed out in pride and she gazed to the stars.

I've done it now Brindleface, I've done it now.

"Blazepaw, from this moment on you shall be known as Blazefur!" the reddish she cat tried to contain her excitement but instead she bounced around like a kit on its first day out of the nursery.

"StarClan honours your enthusiasm and courage, and we welcome you as a full member of ThunderClan!" the ThunderClan leader finished, a purr escaping his throat.


Blazefur looked at Ferncloud and Ashfur, her eyes stretched wide. "We did it!" she wailed like a kit.

"I know," Ashfur meowed, leaning in closer to her. Blazefur flicked his ear with her tail as they sat side by side with their vigil.

Suddenly she felt a tail twine with hers and she spun around, to see Ashfur giving her a smile. "What are you doing?" she asked slowly, confusion in her eyes. "That's not going to make me stop," the same quote he had used when they were kits, and the world was a few foxlengths wide.

"I never asked you to stop, I asked what you are doing?" she murmured cheekily, and she heard Ferncloud snicker on the other side of her. "We are supposed to not talk, I see we're not going to stop, seeing you two getting all lovey dovey over each other," she snorted, but there was kindness in her green eyes.

"Shut up Ferncloud," Ashfur's eyes were shining with love and affection and Blazefur gazed at him. "I never knew you felt like this Ash," she used her nickname.

"I always have… I'm so glad we ain't siblings!" Ashfur laughed quietly so they didn't wake anyone up.

Yes Ashfur, I am glad we aren't siblings too…

Sorry I cut that off so short… I know some of you might think that is weird, you grow up with your littermates until you learn that they aren't your littermates and you fall in love with your bro- no, your foster brother. Haha, funny… I like to make them long? So sorry if I have been ranting on too long… If I get two suggestions from two different authors

Mangoflame: Briarlight without crippled legs

Blossomstripe: Briarlight without crippled legs

I will move them up in the thing, next up is… What If Bluestar Never Gave Up Her Kits, which moved up one because two different authors suggested it! If Briarlight wasn't crippled has been moved up three! Everyone doesn't want poor Briar to get injured 3 her so much!
If you want to read a very amazing Briarlight fic, read Briarlight's Vision by Stormwhisker!
If you love Briarlight you owe it to her, one of the best fanfics I've ever read! :P