Hello it's Alice, I've been thinking. This story needs a fresh start (refrence to a new story I made called "Fresh Start", you should read it.). I'm going to rewrite this whole story, upgrade it, try to make it better. I was ten when I made this stroy and all my other stories. I see mistakes and I want to fix them by making them brand new. Later on in the future, might take a while, but I promise I will rewrite the stories i've made and I will make them better.