So this will be the 4th chapter. I've had some messages lately regarding the format of my writing. The reason why I use bold is for describing the scene, and to clarify between what's going on and what the characters are saying, I thought it would be easier to read. I might tweak things a little bit this chapter to make it easier I guess. I'll lean more towards script format.
- Claire's bedroom-
-We still see Brooke now laying down flat on her back. Her eyes are wide open, no longer with her headphones in her ears. She stares up towards the ceiling. We can make out the sight of tears on each of her cheeks. She begins to cry a little harder as her hands start to tremble. She sits up so she is leaning against the head rest on the bed.
-The lights are still on in the room and so we can see her glance at the cuts on her hands which are not too deep. She closes her eyes tight, trying to see if this is all a dream. She opens her eyes, to the same sight.
-She glances over to the right side of the room, she notices some blood coming out of the bottom of the bathroom door, which is closed, we see what looks like a normal light coming through the crack at the bottom of the door.
-Claire looks as if she is contemplating going over to the door and she stops herself at first but then gets up the strength to walk over to it. We zoom in on her feet as she gets off the bed, her knees are trembling as she takes slow steps towards the door. She puts her hand on the door knob when she gets to the door. Suddenly we hear a voice.
(Coming from outside the window on the other side of the room)
"Brooke!"
-Brooke turns around frantically
(Scared) BROOKE
"T-Troy?"
-We see two hands coming through the door, both bloody with scabs on the knuckles.
- The head starts to appear as the hands pull the bloody body through the window. The hair is matted and the arms are cut up and almost raw from cuts. The eyes on the lifeless Troy are still black. The neck has red marks from someone strangling him.
- As the rest of the body comes in we see that Troy has the same clothes on as when he died. Brooke starts to cry in terror. Troy still has the cuts on his back and blood on the front of his shirt from where he was stabbed.
TROY's voice mixed with FREDDY
"Come her Brooke? Hahaha"
-As Troy says this blood comes out of his mouth and we hear just Troy's voice scream after he says it. The laugh is quiet and it's just Freddy.
- Brooke slowly walks towards Troy, who doesn't blink. As she walks towards him we see his neck start to crack. We hear the sound of breaking bones.
BROOKE
"Troy! Stop!"
- Brooke screams at the top of her lungs as she sees her boyfriend decomposing. She finally darts towards him, and as she does she sees a claw go through Troy, who doesn't even open his mouth. We then see another burned hand come through and stretch out the skin in order to get out. We see the knives cut all the way up Troy's body. Then we see Freddy emerge with Troy's skin just falling back like a costume, with blood surrounding it.
(smirking) FREDDY
"My Brooke, I guess I'm your boyfriend now."
- Brooke begins to run as Freddy stares at her laughing. She opens the door to find herself in a BOILER ROOM. She immediately sees a flight of stairs which she runs down, not looking back. She gets to a crossroads and chooses the right side, we hear the Elm Street music start. As she is running she starts to sweat profusely and then looks down to see a doll on the ground.
- We see a little girl, blonde, looking up at her. She smiles.
LITTLE GIRL
"Come on! Hurry, Freddy's home."
- Brooke follows her, and looks over her shoulder to see if anyone is coming, no one is.
- As her and the little girl run, we see the setting start to change to a house. The wind starts to kick up, and the little girl, walks away. She gets on a little tricycle. She peddles away slowly, looks back and giggles. Brooke walks up to the house, it is cloudy and breezy. She glances over towards a tree. She sees Troy hanging from it, with Freddy's sweater on, and a smile carved in his face. As she looks back towards the house, frightened, the door opens for her.
