Okay now that I have a definite plot... the story will go up on your awesomeness scale... I hope *scratches head* anyway thank your for your evil characters, Avenging Angels and maxiscool, so anyway I'm adding a new character, for some reason I keep making girl characters... not that there's anything wrong with it, just that I used to have a bunch more guys.

But girls are more fun to write about, 'cause most the time they express their emotions, and usually I like writing about emotions verbally and physically (arguing, crying, yelling) Then with guys, who usually try to hide it to maintain "manliness" (arguing inside head, being sad on the inside) so anyway Lucy, Emi, Razor, Aaron, Auto and Chance (heh heh).

name: Chance

age: 16

appearance: long wavy brown hair, brown eyes, pretty, 5.6", wears purple sunglasses on head, (and my new favorite description, stolen from xxmadlovexx) curvy...

personality: a little shy, independent, sweet, major ass kicker, and... loving

personality fault: tendency not to listen to commands just because she doesn't want to...

how others in flock describe her: sweet, loving, somewhat evil.

wing description: pure white...

special ability: can meld into people's body

role in story: Apart of the *blankedy blank* flock

quirks: obsesses with Marceline from Adventure Time, loves jumping off of stuff

crush; REVIEWERS PICK!

DNA: 98% human 2% bird

birthday: 5/14

Ah, I just made turkey bacon so I am satisfied... I don't own Maximum Ride... Uh and no one described Auto for me... so I have to guess now... I quote

"Auto is a rather burly guy who looks like he's-"

Lucy POV

I looked around our kitchen to see who's voice I would focus on today, Auto... no, he was always thinking something mechanical, it gave me headaches, uh, Emi, no... she was kinda... um, bi-polar so I usually don't like to read her mind. Um, let's try Aaron, crap I spilled milk on my shirt...aw, I like this shirt, okay I could deal with that.

"Did Razor already leave," Chance asked quietly dipping her head down so the cameras in our house couldn't detect our voices, "Yeah, he's going after the blond first, she's the most emotional, either that or he's messing with Thorn's mind," Emi said sitting beside us at the table. "Well let's check on them," Auto said joining us, yes we do have cameras in the House of Freaks, well let me explain about us...

We were hand picked from the labs, we were the ones made to save the world, until the jackass Jeb butted his head in and we were sent back into the School, luckily we were promised limited freedom if we help the Erasers track down rouge experiments , the only ones we haven't been able to capture. The mutants from the House of Freaks, they had... the original avian human.

So we have been observing waiting for the perfect time to strike, Razor was going to take them out one by one, well, right now he was toying with the blond girl, and Heather, he had this sexist idea that the girls would break first. And he wouldn't listen to my idea... it was obvious we had to go after the emotionally scarred, Isaac, Jack, Whisper, and Energy, I knew they would snap first.

But Razor despised his twin brother and was going to do everything he could to "f" with him.

"Luce look at them," Emi laughed, the older bird kids, some of them were asleep all over the house, others were stumbling around running into things and falling, they're eyes were red, and all of them were half or fully naked. The only one I couldn't find were the younger ones and the big one with wolf ears, oh my god did she really just piss her pants. This was better than any show I had ever seen on TV, and kinda nasty, cause it was uncensored.

Auto zoomed the camera in on the really pretty girl, her dark hair was damp with sweat, and her green eyes were tinted red and flashing from place to place, she was only wearing jeans and a bra and was slumped against the wall. "What... the... Hell was in those... drinks, ughhhh Ariella I'm gonna... rip your...damn face off," she hissed, then heaved her guts up, I frowned, what the Heck.

Auto quickly zoomed away and zoomed in on the Floorez girl... I think her name is... Heather, she was draped across the couch, sweating, and shaking, in a deep slumber, I saw the wine cooler in her hand and the multiple bottles around her, ah, I know what happened. Oh geez the shaggy haired guy, Ghoust I think, was in the closet upside down, snoring.

Auto switched cameras so that we could see the whole entire room, there was a table covered in cards, there was a bunch of bottles, puke, and suspicious liquid everywhere, oh, a party. The girl who always wore head phones was moaning and shielding her eyes, lying on the DJ table, we switched through the cameras, ew too many naked dudes, my innocence...

"Wait stop look it's Razor," Aaron hissed, we all looked forward, he was in the blonde girls room, she was lying on a bed, clenched into a ball, saying something, while Razor whispered something, slowly running his finger down her neck. She whimpered and curled even more tightly into her ball, what the heck was he doing?

"Quick enable audio," Chance said quietly, Auto did some stuff and we could hear sound, "Th-thorn is that you?" she asked, her voice craggy, "Yes, yes, yes, we're coming, coming, coming," Razor said making his voice all echoey and whispery. Oh... he was having too much fun with this, "Guys you thinking what I'm thinking?" Emi asked, "That they had an intense night of strip poker?" Aaron replied, "Razor's gonna blow our cover, we have to hurry and act," I said.

"So are we gonna kill some things," Chance asked sighing, "No where gonna freaking murder somethings, because I don't feel like going back to the School, no more crap for me," Auto yelled, "WHO'S WITH ME?" " WOOOH LET'S COMMIT MURDER!" "YEAH!" "GET READY TO DIE!" "IS MURDER ILLEGAL?"

Tanner POV

Okay we had to go outside because the house smelled disgusting and all the older kids were all grumpy, so now we were in one of the trees that stuck out of the sidewalk for decoration, just me, Jinx, and Flame.

"Let's try not to drink that stuff," Jinx said twirling a finger through a curly pigtail, "Yeah, not planning on it... so what do you guys wanna do?" I asked, "We could push you out the tree and see if you land on your feet, cat boy," Flame said. "Uh... I object," I said, "Well... we could scream random things at the people below like... THERE IS A VAMPIRE BUFFET IN MY PANTIES!" Flame yelled.

People glared up at us, and in unison we all shot them glorious smiles, "Well I don't wanna get in trouble with the police so..." Jinx sighed, our door opened and our bedraggled guest began to walk back home.

"We could go swimming," Jinx said, "Yeah let's go," Flame said dropping from the tree like the ninja she is.

"Whatever," I sighed wriggling out of my comfy place in the tree and dropping, "This place has a pool?" I asked, as Jinx landed nimbly beside me, "Yeah outside, a gate locks it in, it's heated too, so we don't freeze to death," she said quietly then walked into the house.

I walked in and was greeted by Jack at the door, "Um... Archer does she have a Voice, because she's mumbling and I want to help her," he said, "I don't think she has a voice what's wrong?" I asked, "I don't know," he mumbled. "Well let me talk to her," I said and walked toward her room, maybe something was up.

I opened the door, I swear for the briefest second I saw a man injecting something into her, I slammed the door open but he was gone, "Archer are you okay?" I asked, "Protocol 27, overridden increasing android technology by 30%," she said in a monotone voice. Her grey eyes brightened and her mouth curved into a cute smile, "Kon'nichiwa,(Hi)" she said her voice becoming higher, "Chotto kawaii,(hey cutie)" she bubbled, "Watashi wa kon, anata o korosanakereba naranai...Sumimasen (I have to kill you now...sorry)," she said softly.

Hold on what was she saying? "Kaishi wa, chēnsō, (initiate chainsaws)," she said, and two slender chainsaws slid from her knuckles, "Archer?" I asked, and she sprung at me, I swung my foot upward and slammed it into her chest and she rolled to the side. "Teikō wa mudadesu, (Resistance is futile)," she giggled, coming at me again.

I tried to spin on my heels, but she twirled me in her arms like she was dancing with me, and thrust her chainsaw towards my gut, I whooshed my wings out knocking her away, but she just rolled away and jackniffed to her feet.

I ran toward the door, but there was a clink and she had her metallic wings out, "OH MY GOD HEEEELLLLLPP! ARCHER IS GONNA KILL ME!" I yelled opening the door and running into the hall.

The others came running and slowly we hurried back into her room, Archer stood arms crossed over her chest, "Sōn wa, watashi no atama no gaishutsu (Thorn stay out of my head)," Archer said in her sweet little girl voice. Then with a powerful punch she made a hole in the wall, while the rest of us stood shocked, she grabbed her raver goggles and put them on her head. "Watashi o yūsurute kurete arigatō (Thank you for having me)," she said.

Then leaped out the door, "What the Hell was she saying," Jack said shaking his head, "WTF happened to her," Ghoust said rubbing his head, "I know what she said," Jinx said in her small voice, walking over to join us...

Rhaksha will have romance, well slight romance in the next chapter... if I translated wrong, sorry... I was using Google Translator... I only know some japanese not that much... KAWAII!