First off, sorry about how bad last chapter was... and special shout-out to spiceypepper, your review really made me happy... sorry for enjoying your suffering but it got me into the writing mood and I managed to finish another chapter before the end of spring break =)
Also, i need to clear up some of the back story... So this is like in the original show that they met when they were 5. So they have known each other since that age, the rrb changed ways at 6 and since then they have been friends with the ppg. In this the girls are not sisters! Remember however they rrb are, after they turned good the professor took them in and has raised them as if they were his own. Since then, the girls have had some relationships that went wrong, and the boys, having the huge crushes they have on them, have to get the girls to be able to trust others again. Can they do it? Enjoy lovies!
Chapter 4 ~ No Boys Allowed?
(MOMOKO POV)
At first I thought I was hallucinating or something but after a while I realized that this was real life. This was happening. One of my best friends, Kaoru Matsubara was enjoying being girly. She would keep on trying on the outfits we picked for her out of Miyako's closet, all the different accessories and shoes, she let us mess with her hair, and even put some light makeup on her! She looked so adorable, I could tell Miyako was enjoying this probably even more that I was, she had wanted to do this with Kaoru for the longest time and now it was finally happening!
Right now I has sitting on the soft, well carpeted floor of Miyako's closet laughing at the goofy outfit Kaoru had put together out of mismatched clothes when I decided to go get something for us eat, "Hey guys," I said getting up, " I'll go grab us a snack, and Kaoru..." Her head popped out from behind the curtain of the dressing room, "Yeah?" " Put on something decent." I finished with a chuckle. Both of them laughed and started talking about something cute Miyako wanted Kaoru to wear next.
As I was about to leave the room I heard a noise that came from the other end of the room as I turned around I bumped into something; or might I say, someone, accidentally letting out a small yelp in surprise.
"Hi Momoko. Sorry, didn't mean to scare you." I looked up at who was talking, "Brick?" Suddenly another voice popped up, "Hey, are you gonna say hi to us too or what?" I turned around and saw Butch and Boomer walking up to me. I would be lying if I said I wasn't happy to see them so I ran up both to them and hugged them, once I let go I called Miyako to show her who had decided to drop by. "Miyako! Come over here now!" "Coming!" she called back behind the doors of her closet. She opened the door and as soon as she saw them she screamed and ran up to the three of them to hug them as well, she started questioning why they were here and why they didn't simply use the front door. All three of them laughed uncomfortably at the question and then Boomer said, " Well, we thought this was more of an all-girls night and plus, this is a sleepover. I doubt your grandmother would be very pleased about you having three boys over at a sleepover." Miyako simply chuckled and quietly said, " I guess your right..." After a minute or two of talking our attention turned towards the closet door one more time as it creaked open again, Kaoru's voice becoming more audible as she steeped out in the latest outfit Miyako had picked for her. She was looking down at her shirt, fixing small wrinkles until she looked up and was unable to finish her sentence, " Hey guys, whats up will all the noi-..."
(KAORUPOV)
Momoko had just left for some snacks and now I was alone with Miyako, she handed me a new outfit and told me to try it on. I heard Momoko call Miyako so she told me she would be right back, to go out to show her how the outfit looked once I was done. I simply nodded and started changing. It had already been a while and neither of them had returned, oh well. I looked up to look at my reflection on the mirror inside the changing room, I have to admit that I do like this new style. All my new clothes were perfect for me, they gave off this punkish-rock kind off vibe yet were still cute and sort off bad-ass in a way, if you get what I mean...
I gave myself once last look at decided to go out to see what all the ruckus was all about, all I head was indistinguishable conversation and laughter. As I started to open the door I noticed some wrinkles on my shirt so as I was fixing them I said, "Hey guys, whats up will all the noi-..." I wasn't able to finish my sentence because as I looked up from my shirt I was something; or might I say someone, that I just wasn't expecting to see at this very moment. Just my luck.
(BUTCH POV)
After all the hugs from both Momoko and Miyako were done we all sat down on Miyako's bed, the bean bags and the couch nearby just talking but I wasn't really focused on the conversation. I kept looking around the room waiting for Kaoru to come out but she wasn't anywhere to be seen. That girl really knew how to mess with my mind. Finally, after what to me seemed like hours, we heard the closet door open, we all turned around facing the door. At that moment I thought I needed three things, someone to punch me in case I was dreaming, someone to put my jaw back in place and last but not least, oxygen.
Kaoru came out of that closet wearing black romper shorts with suspenders, a dark green wideneck long sleeve shirt that showed off her shoulders, black and green tights halfway up her thighs and black boots that almost reached her knees. Miyako, Momoko kudos to you guys, you made the girl of my dreams look even more like an angel without even really trying. While I was looking at her with my jaw dropped she had been fixing some wrinkles on her shirt, she hadn't noticed my brothers and I were here. She began to speak still fixing her shirt, "Hey guys, whats up will all the noi-..." then she looked up. Just my luck, the first person she saw was me, she stared at me wide-eyed for a couple of seconds then my brothers broke the silence and yelled, " BC! Whats up!" She turned to look at then, apparently finally realizing that they were there and ran up to them, "Boomer, Brick onii-san!"
Yeah, onii-san. I told you Momoko and Miyako thought of me as an older brother didn't I? Well, Kaoru thinks of Boomer and Brick as older brothers so she calls them onii-san, those lucky bastards. Technically, in Kaoru's mind she has four brothers, her two blood brothers called Dai and Shou and my blood brothers Brick and Boomer. I simply looked on in jealousy as basically jumped on them for hug, a huge smile on her face as Brick moved some hairs out of her face and Boomer complimented her on her new style.
After a couple a minute or two I got fed up with them hogging up all of my Kaoru so I decided to interrupt their little moment my way. I simply walked up to them and while Kaoru's back was facing me I snatched her by the waist and sat with her on my lap on the couch nearby. I know that I probably seem jealous or something but I'm not. I guess I forgot to mention me and my brothers had been gone for 2 weeks on a camping trip (more on that later) but we haven't seen the girls since then and being Kaoru's best friend (unfortunately) I deserve some time with her, that's all. Plus, Brick and Boomer will want to have some time with their counterparts as well, I'm sure.
Sorry for the cruddy ending i felt like i had to finish it there but anyway i put it it always sounded awkward so im sorry =(
Im happy that it is longer than the last one and in my opinion a lot better overall... Did you guys like Kaoru's outfit? I hope i described it well. If you guys have any ideas for outfits for any of the characters please tell me!
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If you dont review Candle you-know-who will come to get you tonight! JK! But plz review, it gives me WIIINGS! (to write, of course xD)
P.S. : Extra kudos to anyone who gets the "Candle you-know-who " joke! Just remember to never say his name! LUV YA!
