Okay welcome to chapter four
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Soul- dude I like this story so far
Me- you better or I will kill you
Soul- .
Me- ha, I don't own soul eater… yet
Maka- you never will own soul eater
Me- I know, don't remind me T.T
Soul- hahaha you suck
Me- Ní mórán thú (Go fuck yourself (in Gaelic))
Soul- That was uncalled for
Me- Is cuma liom sa diabhal (I don't give a damn (in Gaelic))
Soul- Wichser (wanker (in German))
Maka- ze-ebees (stop bitching (in Russian))
Me & Soul- Chok (no (in Russian)
Maka- MAAKKKA CHOP
Me & Soul- owe
"So when do we go and find Eikichi, chi… and why does his name have your name in it." Soul asked
"Well because our parents weren't very good at naming mostly because they just wanted a girl." Chi informed
"Wait, so that means you two are brother and sister!" maka exclaimed
"Yep it does so please don't kill him." Chi said with the same look in her eye when Patti scared them last night
"…"
"Hahaha" Soul laughed at Maka's reaction
30 minutes later walking to the fight ring
"Maka can you use your soul perception in this kind of place." Kid asked looking around for the secret entrance
"Yea why wouldn't I be able to, kid?" Maka asked confused about why kid would ask such a question
"I was just asking, now look for his soul."
"Wow this place looks bad" maka said reading everyone's soul inside the pub (1) they all had the same feeling coming from them dark, evil, and cheating. But as she keep looking around she sensed a powerful soul that felt sad and lonely even more than Crona back home below them.
"YO I found the entrance" Liz yelled at maka who was spacing out
"o-okay" maka said wiping the look on her face
Soul saw the look on her face it looked like pity… but for whom; wait maybe for this Eikichi kid
*hey maka what's wrong did you find him* soul asked in from the soul link
Yea soul he seems lonely. maka told soul inside her head
*well can you read it to see what we might have to face*
Yea sure soul… his soul looks like an yin yang (2) it is stitched like stein's but some of the stiches are coming loose and has holes in it like it was shot at and one knife is being stabbed through it
*okay now what does that mean*
Well he may have and a dramatic thing happen to him and he must live with it for the rest of his life and he tries to keep himself in check by the look of the yin yang, so if we keep him at peace we should be able to defeat him
*Kay so now what*
We go in. maka said stepping toward the entrance
"Wait hold it where do you think you're going" a large man that looked like a bouncer
"To the fight club." Black*star said dryly
"I don't know if you should go in there you guys are just kids and we wouldn't want you to get hurt…. But if you insist be my guest and be careful of the one they call 0." The man said stepping aside
"But that's why we are her-." Patti said before getting cut off by Liz's hand to her mouth
"o-okay take care" the man said no louder than a whisper opening the secret entrance for them
"Thanks" soul said tucking a hundred into the man's jacket as he walked in only to get a nod of the head from the man
When they all walked in they saw a horrible sight one kid holding his fist up to a group of eleven men all with weapons inside the caged ring.
"OKAY LADY'S AND GENTS WE HAVE A SPECAIL FIGHT TODAY OUR VERY OWN 0 VERUS THE MAD MURDOCKS." a loud voice said into a megaphone at this point the men holding weapons started yelling "Ura" (3)
"LET THE FIGHT BEGIN AND START PLACEING YOUR BETS NOW!" The man yelled
As soon as the man said that the crowd started yelling and all the men charged at the boy, he just stood there with his fist in the drunken master formation (4) up then pulled out a chained necklace with a locket on it and kissed it and put it back into his pocket
Just as the Murdocks charged at him a song came on from the booth above the ring the song was "rock of ages" by def leppard and as soon as it came on the crowd started singing along
He sucker punched one man in the jaw making him fly back into the bullet proof glass surrounding the ring so no one got shot from any guns. Then he turned around grabbing another man on the shoulders and started kneeing him in the gut about five times and finally uppercut him in the face causing him to do a backflip and landing on another man knocking them both out. Then someone jumped on to his back and started hitting him in the head the boy tried to get him off by bucking around only to make the man's feet knock out three other guys finally he got tired of it and grabbed the back of the man's collar pulling him off of him and throwing him straight to the ground and then stomping his foot on his face breaking his nose. But then a man came up with brass knuckles and hit him in the jaw dislocating it, the boy only backed up for a second and grabbed his jaw pulling it right in a quick motion and pushing it back up to lock it back it to place and then ran at the man with a look of murder "YOU GOT A DEATH WISH DON'T YOU" the boy screamed out in rage making a sonic boom causing the guy fly backwards breaking the bullet proof glass wall. And as soon as he did that the last three jumped on his back all at once pulling him to the ground while hitting him in the head the entire time with their weapons just as soon as they thought they won they heard a yell underneath them "SOUL DOUBLE PALM FORCE!" he yelled knocking everyone off him and making them all fly into one of the six walls surrounding them just as the music stopped
"LOOKS LIKE OUR ONE AND ONLY 0 HAS WON ONCE AGAIN THIS IS THE ONE HUNDERD AND FIFTY SIXTH TIME WINNING." The announcer yelled
"Umm he going to be hard to beat isn't he maka" soul sighed
"Yea he is but how are we going to get to fight him?" maka asked
"I've got that taken care of just go down there to the door and they will let you guys into the ring." Delta said popping out of no where
"Yahoooo I, your god, will defeat him!" Black*star yelled right into Kidd's ear
"Owe that hurt black*star did you really have to yell!" Kidd yelled right back into black*star's ear
"Okay so let's get down there." maka said walking down the entire ten steps in one step
As when they got there the door slid open showing one kid with an all-black and blooded face. He was wearing a black wife-beater and red and black trip pants.
"Are you Eikichi?" maka asked
"H-how do you know that name I haven't gone by that name for years how do you know me?" 0 asked with a freaked out tone
"W-well your sister told us about you plus we need your help. So we came here to fight you and earn your respect." Soul said
"Wait chi is here, where?"
"Yea she is out somewhere in the crowd." Kidd told Eikichi with a straight face that meant business
"Okay but I won't go easy on you guys so name your rules."
"I don't really care what the rules are so you name your rules." Maka said sighing
"Fine name what you are and I will then choose."0 said
"Maka Albern scythe meister." Maka yelled excitedly
"Soul Eater death scythe." Soul groaned
"Liz and Patti demon pistols." Liz and Patti said unison
"Death the Kidd demon pistol meister." Kid said kind of cheery
"I am the great black*star ninja demon weapon." Black*star yelled
"Sorry about him I am Tsubaki ninja demon weapon." Tsubaki said bowing
"Ah I see, well… I choose you three teams to all come at me at the same time." 0 said annoyed
"OHHH I SEE WE HAVE SOME NEW CHALLENGERS. WELL WE DIDN'T HAVE ANYMORE FIGHTS LET SO JUST THINK AS THIS AS A BONUS." The announcer yelled into the megaphone
"Cool with me let's do it." Soul said lazily
'Oh yea, and maka I believe… you've already earned my respect. You are the first to want to fight me for my respect everyone else just wants power and fame, so if you want all of can just call me Eikichi I am only called by 0 by people who want to destroy me." Eikichi said
"As you wish, Eikichi." Kidd said with a nod of his head
"TRANSFORM AND SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT!" Eikichi thundered
"Tsubaki, shadow star." Black*star whispered
At that moment black*star charged at Eikichi jumping all around disappearing from one spot to another Eikichi just stood there watching as black*star ran at him, when he was right next to him he disappeared at popped up behind him but Eikichi saw it coming and reached behind him grabbing black*star the front of his shirt and tossed him towards the ground making him roll and land next to the gang
"OH COME ON IS THAT ALL YOU GOT BLACK*STAR, I KNOW YOU CAN DO BETTER! Eikichi thundered once again
"HOW DARE YOU TOUCH YOUR GOD LIKE THAT, AND THEN INSULT ME, TSUBAKI DEMON SWORD MODE!" black*star yelled
"Yes black*star." Tsubaki said quietly
"OH REALLY I GOT SOMETHING UP MY SELEVE AS WELL, MIRRORS EDGE!" as soon as he said that maka noticed that his soul is splitting up, and two new Eikichi's were made only a bit shorter than the real one
"What the fuck." Soul said confused
"His soul spilt into three of him the white dot and the black dot from the yin yang have moved and created them." Kidd said informingly
"WOW YOU ARE A SMART ONE KIDD!" the three Eikichi's boomed unison
Each one of the Eikichi's had a different weapon the one that came from the white dot was holding a red and white katana. The one that came from the black dot was duel wielding two sawed off double barrel shotguns one in each hand. The real Eikichi was holding a scythe that was red, black, and had some white in it, it was jagged and spikey
"Oh yea and you have to defeat all three of us to win." The Eikichi's yelled
"Okay Kidd you take on the black one, black*star the white and we will take on the real one." Maka said a little bit worried
"Got it Maka." Kidd said as Liz and Patti transformed into their weapons
"I'm going to shove my boot up his ass." Black*star said a little to confided
"Dude calm down, plus you're not even wearing boots" Soul said kind of annoyed
"ASS!"
"The bass, the rock, the mic, the treble. I like my coffee black just like my metal… I can't wait for you to shut me up. .UP! Lalala ooooh. Lalala ooooh." Eikichi started to sing with a creepy smile on his face like he just went insane and is waiting for the men in there clean white coats to take him back to the happy hotel
"What the fuck" soul said while the three Eikichi's formed back together
"0 REMEMBER WHAT I TOLD YOU ABOUT USING THAT." A weak looking boy said holding a detonator
"Hmm... oh yea no using that or this bomb collar goes off I got it asshole." Eikichi said he sounded pissed off as the two other Eikichi's formed back into him
"Wait what bomb collar? I don't see one." Maka said frighten
"Oh this one." Eikichi said holding up his left arm
"Okay black*star, Kidd we got this." Soul said
"Kay, but if you lose I'm kicking his ass!" black*star yelled
"Okay, maka, bring it on." Eikichi said pulling out a cane knife and his knuckle duster that was attached to the cane knife by a ten foot chain
"Well get ready to lose." Soul said
"Aye I will I can see into your souls and I already know that you and soul are stronger than me."
"Well can you state yourself since we did?" Maka asked
"Yes if that is what you wish… I am Eikichi death weapon/meister."
"What do you mean you're a death weapon/meister?" Tsubaki asked
"Well I have both genes inside me… just as maka has both."
"Wait I don't have both." Maka said freaked out on why he said that
"Yes you do, your father sprit he was a weapon and your mother kami she was a meister and a child takes half in half of the genetics so half of you is a weapon and the other half is a meister."
"Oh your soul is different."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean it has a different tune to it Soul's is a piano, Kidd's is a soft drum beat, Black*star's is a guitar screech, Tsubaki has a harp, Liz has a techno sound, and Patti has a fast beat of a snare drum but… yours is a mixture of things a drum, two guitars and a bass it sounds like a song without lyrics… wait I got the song is Cowboys from Hell by Pantera."
"Oh yea that well it used to have lyrics but they died with my meister. Enough of this talking if you win I will tell you that story."
With a nod of her head maka reached out for soul who already knew what she wanted so he transformed into a scythe. Maka caught soul and jumped up in the air swinging soul into Eikichi only to be blocked by his arm. Maka then jumped back and charged back at him swinging soul down at him at almost lighting speed about twenty times all of them where blocked or deflected. Eikichi got tired of being on the defensive side so he swung his knuckle duster at maka and knocked her back onto the floor. She got up in about a half of a second and rammed him in the gut with the butt of the scythe making him fall to his knees coughing up a grey liquid that looked like his blood, he then got back up to his feet only to get his feet swiped out from underneath him and go flying into the air and then got hit with soul again knocking him straight back to the ground. He tried to get back up but we he looked at his leg the bone was sticking out. He was shocked he couldn't even yell he only got back up a threw the knuckle duster at maka raping it around her arms making it so she couldn't move he them pulled on the chain causing maka to fly at him soul transformed in the chains and transformed his arm into a blade and cut the chains and got maka free and then caught her so she wouldn't go flying into the cane knife that was waiting to stab them.
*maka remember how we hurt Crona when we were trying to stop the Kinshin from having black blood* soul asked through the soul link
Yea why wouldn't I and no we are not using the black blood that caused me to go crazy last time
*yea I know but I wasn't talking about that I meant at the beginning let's try that*
Good idea soul thank you by the way
Maka then hooked the blade of the scythe around Eikichi and started punching him using soul force but it looked like it wasn't doing anything but then Eikichi started to cough up more and more grey blood. Maka was about to drop kick him like she did Crona but as her feet were about to hit him in the face he grabbed her and soul and threw soul behind him making him fly into the wall and he started cough up black blood. Maka was so scared she couldn't even move, just as Eikichi was about to stab her he saw someone in her, it was a young girl wearing a black and white dress with a long low pony tail, he knew who this was it was his old meister the one he was forced to kill and he couldn't kill her again not after what he has been through
The crowd started to chant "Finish her, finish her!"
"0 kill her now you both of you die." The weak boy yelled
But he still couldn't move
"Fine have it your way" the boy yelled at them and shot two shots at them aiming for both of their heads
Eikichi saw it coming he then threw maka towards soul so he could catch him, and then got shot in both jugulars he was bleeding badly but he didn't care he threw the cane knife at the boy and cut off his head causing him to spray red blood everywhere on to the crowd, the crowd panicked and ran out of the building leaving a dead boy, a dyeing boy and the gang left in the ring
"Eikichi!" chi yelled from the stands banging on the bullet proof glass trying to break it
"C-chi g-g-good b-bye." Eikichi shuddered out the entire time blood was oozing from his neck as he fell to his knees and he started a chant while holding his neck to stop some of the bleeding
"E-even i-in death m-m-may I be r-rewarded." Eikichi said before falling on to his face
Maka was speechless she couldn't even look away. Black*star only looked away trying to hide the tears that where forming up. Kidd was much more used to death since he was the son of death in the first place he ran up to Eikichi and used some of his soul to stop the bleeding completely
"Guys help me pick him up we need to get him to a hospital… Guys …. GUYS!" Kidd screamed to get everyone's attention
They all snapped out of it and came to help pick up Eikichi to get him to a hospital
(1) A pub is like a bar
(2) a yin yang is a symbol the Chinese use which means peace, even in the evilest soul there is still the will to do good, and through the purest of souls there is still the want to do evil… the black stands for the evil and the white is the good
(3) Ura it is a word that the marines came up with to get them pumped up
(4) It is a fighting technique that came from japan you loosen your muscles to dodge a lot easier
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Well this is the end of Chapter Four THE DEATH WISH
and im sorry for the bad details on the weapons
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