I decided to post early so here ya gooooo. Please read author's note at the end as well! It is important.
? Pov
The lady with the white hair.
She saved me.
I thought I was going to die.
But she came.
I'm cold.
Wait someone just wrapped me in something.
They must have noticed my shivering.
I opened my eyes and saw the white haired lady again.
Her eyes are red.
She's cloaked in black.
She's smiling at me.
Her lips are moving.
What is she saying?
I can't hear her.
She smiled again.
She showed me a piece of paper.
She has a pencil now.
She is writing something.
It looks like scribbles.
Wait those are words.
She wrote.
'Your safe now'
That's what the other people told me.
Then she wrote down.
'Don't worry you can trust me'
They said that too.
She still writing.
She wrote.
'Please talk to me, what's your name?'
She offered me the pencil.
I took it.
I wrote.
'I don't have one, but you can name me'
I then got an idea.
So I wrote it down.
'You could name me and be my mommy! I've never had a mommy before!'
I smiled at her.
She nodded and smiled back.
Maybe I'll know what a real family is like now.
Maybe I can finally find out what it means to have a mom.
To find out what it means to love.
Or to be loved.
Maybe.
Just maybe I will.
? Pov
I was laying down on the couch watching everything my clone was doing. Or at least whatever was controlling my body was doing. I'm going to call it the thing, so whatever is controlling me is now called the thing. So the thing that is controlling my body is in love with Lisanna for some reason, but I know that I'm not really in love with her am I? I mean could I after she did this to me? She's the reason I'm stuck here watching the thing get on the bad side of everyone. Especially Erza. The thing made me say things I regret saying even though technically I didn't say them. I watched from the eyes of the thing as the thing kissed Lisanna. Disgusting. It was like a giant window but I couldn't break the glass.
Ok so who do you think the mystery pov at the end was? Well I'm going to tell you! It's Natsu! It's kinda like Lisanna is controlling him but really what it is, is that Natsu is trapped in a white room in his mind where he can't do anything at all except sleep and watch in agony as the thing makes horrible decisions in his place. Soo review and tell me what I need to improve on pleaseeee.
