Once again, im sorry. here's the ending to chapter two.
Nar'lock went back to the queen to make shure she was safe. When we got to the western gate we found out that the intruder was a creature frome another tribe. Insted it was just one of those accursed chaotic players. His 'scaner' as it's called is just out of his reach. He then spoke in a scared voice.
"No! I'm not who you need to worry about! I came to warn you abou-!"
He was cut off as a section of the caves walls got demolished several feet away. When the dust cleared it reavealed an underworlder.
I really wanted this in as the ending to the last chapter, but my tablit was being dumb. Anyways, does anyone have any ideas who the creature is? let your imagination go crazy!