JUST DANCE
So finally the 4th chapter is up! I'v done a lot of work on it, first I wrote it in paper, edited it and now i'm finally typing it! and also I totally forgot to mention in the 2nd chapter that Illesh is not the correct name its actually Nillesh. I hope u like this chapher... (sorry, I took so much of time, cuz I have a lot of H.W from few days!)
esharocks- thank you! keep reviewing!
(CHAPTER 4) LUIEANS
Special guest- RDX Sir
NARRATOR-
All the students and teachers were staring at them, wondering whats wrong? They walked in whit the steps in the same was they stood first. They were inside everybody crowed around them, but for the first time Sharon was just staring at them form a distance "hey guys so all of u r to geather now?" RDX sir asked "TOGEATHER?" all of them asked "I ment a team!" RDX sir said "yes sir, we sure are" Ray said "GOOD GOOD! but where is Sharon?" he asked again "Sharon in no more in the team" Kriya said "y?" sir asked "mmm... actually sir..." Ray was stammering "its totally ok if u guys dont want to tell me!" he said "but what r u gonna be called? Dazzelers or Weeklings?" he added "NONE!" Kriya said, everybody looked at her, "what do u mean none?" Ray wispered to her "shhh! just follow my lead" she wispered back and turned to words RDX "sir we are called the LUIEANS" she said, everyone looked at her again, but she only looked at Ray "hmmm... guys thats a great name" Rdx said "thank you sir" Rsay says. Then Rdx goes, "dude what a name" Vishaka says "thx" Ray says "hello! Ray, I kept the name, not u!" Kriya said...
Kriya's P.O.V-
"Lite" Ray said, "hey sis! nice name for the team!" "THX VICKY!" I said, "give me the beat guys!" Nillesh said, asusual Vicky started beat-boxing and Nillesh went on "RDX asked where is Sharon, but we just said nothin' then he asked us if we called dazzlers or weeklings, none of knew anything, then Kriya came up with a name, which was none other than LUIELINGS" "hahahahaha good 1 Nillesh, but its LUIEANS!" Swyam said "thx man, and srry!my bad" Nillesh said. We all then walked to the steps and while we walked there I saw Sharon all alone, she was really sad, but y was i supposed to care? after all Ray kicked her out because of her. "OOUCH!" I said, Vishaka had slapped me, I really felt like screaming but I didnt "sorry Kriya! u were in your own world and we r trying to discuss important stuff!" she said "yeah miss. Dheradun, dont u know!" Ray said "first dont call me that!" I said. Rinny and Simmy sat on the steps and pulled Neha, but Vicky wouldnt let her go, "ew! mushy!" I said to myself, I really feel like throwing up when i see Neha and Vicky! "where r u lost?" Ray asked "nothing, nothing at all" I said "dosent look like" he said back; I turned around and started to walk to words the w/c "hey Kriya where the r u going?" Rinny said "nothing, I'm not really feeling too good, I'll just be back in 5" I said and walked away. "Kriya wait" I heard someone call out to me, I looked around and who called me was none other than miss Sharon, she walked closer to me, I was about to walk away but she held my hand "Kriya please, I really need to talk to u!" she said, I pulled my hand away "what is left to talk about Sharon? do u still want to insult me?" I said "no, its nothing like that!" she said "sorry Sharon, I'm a so called weekling, how can i talk to a dazzler?" I said and walked away...
Rayanch's P.O.V-
Where is this miss. Dheradun! I so badly need to talk to her! "guys listen" it was RDX sir, we turned towords him "yes sir" Neha said "today is a party my place! u all r invited!" he said "AWESOME!" we all said "ok guys, so be there till 8:30-9:00" he added "sure sir!" I said, Rdx walked away. I looked here and there, FINALLY soptted Kriya, I had to ask he rout for the party. As she moved here, I quickly pulled her to the fire exit "Ray r u mad?" "look I need to talk to u, and I cant do that in front of everyone!" I explained "ok,ok fine, what do u have to say?" she asked "look we all just met RDX sir and he is throwing another party for us..." I said but didnt finish my sentence "party for us and?"she asked "and can u please, please, please, please,please go with me, as my date?" I pleaded her "WHAT THE!" she said "I mean, u know we r starting to be friends now and u know, just to get to know each other better" I said, cuz I naturally couldnt tell how I feel about her! I was too scared, I dont want my heart to be broken! "ooh like that haa..." she said "then I'll go out with u! pick me up 8:30" she added and walked away. It was like a magical feeling! I mean to say this was like the first time ever she was going to go out with me! I felt like screaming my heart out... Vicky just palked towords me and asked "ooye Ray! what happened? Y r u so happy?" "U WONT BELIEVE ME! BUT I ASKED KRIYA OUT FOR TODAYS PARTY AND SHE SAID YESS!" I said in excitement! "WOAHHH! thats great buddy" he said "I know! and yeah me and Neha will pick u both up 8:30 as Kriya said" I told him, he nodded and we went to the parking, I saw Sharon there. Vicky just looked at her with disgust and I didnt look...
Narrator-
Kriya was at her house getting ready, "omg what should i wear!" Kriya asked her self! Her room was in a total mess... but after all she choose the perfect dress! Perfect make-up and her hair looked amazing!
Rayanch's house-
He kept wondering what he should wear and finally Vicky called him and told him what color dress Kriya was wearing, cuz he wanted to wear the same color as her! "Vicky ure a life saver" he said to Vicky on the phont and cut it.
Kriya's P.O.V-
I heard a horn, I ran to the window and there was Rey! Me and Vicky went out to his car, he and Neha got out, I saw Neha, she looked amazing (she wore a white short tube w/ a white long sleeved ripped jacket and white jeans. And Rey wore black harrams, a white shirt w/ a purple jackrt just like my dress color. How can i forget Vicky? He had on a white half sleeved shirt w/ a black vest on top and black bottoms! And I, I just wore a pretty purple dress w/ heals) "Wow Neha u look amazing!" Vicky said, he just couldent stop staring at her, suddenly we all heard a horn, I looked at the side and there was Swyam, Bharat, Vishaka, Rinny, Simmy, Amar and Nillesh. All of them got down the car "Hey dude!"Ray said to the guys "hey" Bharat said back, "Kriya and Neha u bth look so good!" Rinny said "thx hun. U, Simmy and Vishaka also look really good!" Neha said "I agree!" I said "thx Neha and Kriya!"Vishaka said "well so lets leave, me, Kriya, Vicky and Neha will go to geather" Ray said "and Swayam, and the others go in Swyam's car!" he added "fine" Swyam said and we all sat in the cars, first Swyam left and we followed. "Kriya!", I turned towords Ray "yes?" I asked "u look amazing" he said, I blushed a little "thxx" I said. I turned away thinking that I might just say something stupid! Mean while sir's farm house came... The others had already reached, we all got down and stood to geather. RDX sir walked to us and said "thx for coming all of u!" "No problem sir!" Nillesh said "Xactly what he said" Amar said, I knew he didnt have someting to say, "hmmm, well please come in" sir said..
Narrator-
They all went in and again every body was staring them, even Sharon!
That was the 4th chapter! I hope u liked it and I'll ce u all soon with the 5th chapter!