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You guys always make me so excited to update again! This time special shout-out goes to Mhernandez5, you are a totally awesome reviewer and you've reviewed every chapter so far, so much love!

So this chapter is super dramatic! I will warn you it gets a bit racy, definitely earns it's T rating, however there is nothing M rated in it. You have been warned!

Right, as you know, I don't own the original Gallagher Girls series, so on with the show...


Chapter 4: Loosen Up


Zach's POV


I walked away from the girls as they resumed their squealing and hugging and I covered my ears as Grant finished chuckling beside me. I broke into a grin as well though, it was nice to have Mace and Bex back.

We decided to go over to our parents to say a last goodbye before heading up to the school. I hugged my mum and I knew, as always, she was holding in the tears, and then I gave my dad a quick man hug and then they were off. Finally, freedom.

We stayed and talked to some mates for a while, then the girls joined in as well. I felt the eyes of several other girls I didn't really know on me but I'm used to it. Lots of girls stare, they look at Grant too but he's either oblivious or way too infatuated by Bex to notice.

I turned around at a tap on my shoulder and came face to face with a good looking girl with dark hair and a playful glint in her eye, I smirked. "Can I help you with anything?" I asked innocently.

She smiled mysteriously back and led me slightly away from my friends. "Well," She began slowly, eyeing me up and down, I took the chance to return the favour and my smirk grew. "I like what I see…" She let it hang as she bit her red lips.

"Well, maybe you're in luck… What's your name gorgeous?" I asked turning on the charm and looking down her blouse which was open more than the regulations allowed.

"I'm Tina," She said and pulled her blouse at the bottom while breathing in and I watched her boobs push up slightly. But before I had the chance to reply I felt a tug on my sleeve.

Beside me Grant snorted and pulled me away, "Sorry dear, we've gotta take our stuff to our room." He started to drag me off, but I quickly turned back, "I'll see you round Tina." I winked at her as she smiled, "Don't worry I'll make sure of it, I think we'd enjoy seeing more of each other." She grinned and walked away, her hips swaying beautifully.

"You have no idea honey…" I replied loud enough for her to hear before following Grant away.

"You are unbelievable, we've been back at school for 1 hour and you can't keep it in your pants Goode." He shook his head in despair. It's not as if Grant's abstinent, he just knows who he wants, but we don't all have to be that tied down. "What can I say," I replied. "When you've got it, you've got it."

We walked into the school foyer before this time Eva Alveraz came up to us, she ran and flung her arms around me, I quickly hugged her back enjoying her large tits pressed up against my chest.

"Zach baby, I've missed you so so much!" She squealed. Next to me Grant was scowling, probably recalling how I punched him before. But right now I'm so distracted by what Eva is whispering into my ear that I don't care.

"Grant, mate, can you take my stuff I've got to help Eva with something…" I called back vaguely over my shoulder as she whisked me away to find an empty classroom. I was grinning like a mad thing. 2 months it's been, and I swear to God, I need this!

In LA there's quite a few girls who I can easily make out with, but they wouldn't go the whole way, and I would never push them to either. I think living away from your parents makes you more independent and grow up faster. Well, and there not there to catch you doing anything.


Finally. Finally. We were in an empty classroom on the second floor and Eva was slowly unbuttoning her shirt, allowing me to see her lacy blue and white bra holding up her boobs which looked like they might spill over. I was shirtless and walking towards her, I really really need this right now.

We'd been kissing and making out for about 10 minutes and finally it was getting down to some real action. Eva's hair spilled over her shoulders, the tips licking her chest and making her look so enticing to me right now.

"What the hell is going on?"

"Shit!" Eva said frantically doing up the buttons of her shirt and turning dark pink through embarrassment. I turned and saw Cam with Josh Abbrams standing in the doorway looking shocked.

"Crap." I muttered, but I couldn't help adding, "What the hell does it look like Cam?"

Cam looked aghast but Josh looked slightly amused as I scooped up my shirt and pulled it on also.

"Do you know how many rules you're breaking right now? God, anyone could walk past and see you… like we just did!" Cam was ranting, and due to her rubbing her eyes was obviously trying to get rid of some sort of mental image. She is so uptight, she just needs to relax and live a little.

"I'm so sorry, really I just… I'm sorry." Eva was spluttering and trying to get a grip. She was obviously ashamed and totally mortified having been walked in on.

"Eva, its fine. Just… God I never want to see that again in my life." Cam said and Eva quickly ran out of the classroom and probably up towards her dorm. Damn it, like I would ever get another chance to have Eva now, she'll always be worried about being walked in on.

"For fuck's sake, what the hell was that? Why did you interrupt us?" I spoke angrily towards Cammie. I knew it was wrong and that I was breaking the rules but I'd just lost my shot with Eva and I was a bit wound up at the moment.

Cam's eyes narrowed as she retorted, "Seriously? You think this is our fault? Zach, you can't even wait until the evening when there is less people around. You can't do it in a private room somewhere that no one's going to walk past. For Christ's sake, you can't keep it in your pants for one hour after we arrive at school!"

She was seething with anger but I didn't give a shit. I wasn't exactly going to tell her she had a point.

Instead I said, "Cam, what the hell do you even know about this stuff? Maybe if you got a boyfriend to fuck, or just have a quick shag for the first time in your life you'd loosen up a bit!"

Cams face turned dark, I couldn't tell if it was with anger or embarrassment but I knew I'd just crossed a line.

"Ok Zach, maybe you should just go and we'll forget about this." Josh tried to alleviate the tension. God, I wish I had a filter sometimes, but still, I took my chance, I nodded once at Josh and headed out the room to find Grant and the others.


I walked into the common room and went and sat down with Grant, Jaz and Macey. I smiled at the girls as I sat down next to Macey.

"Hey Handsome, what's happening?" Macey asked shuffling up and resting her head on my shoulder. She yawned and cuddled in as I wrapped an arm around her.

"Not much Beautiful, how was Dubai?" I replied, settling into our usual back and forth banter.

"It sucked but the boys were hot and rich, killer combination." She smirked and I grinned. I love mine and Macey's relationship, since her parents are pretty shit she always picks carefully when it comes to her friends, and then they become her family. We've had a sibling relationship for as long as I can remember since we started Gallagher.

I grinned and turned to Grant, he was still a bit annoyed. "So you couldn't keep it in your pants then, your stuffs upstairs by the way, your welcome." I sighed, suddenly this whole thing with Eva was barely seeming to be worth it.

I rolled my eyes, "Nah, it didn't get out, Cam and Josh Abbrams walked in on us before she even got her bra off," I complained sighing. This time Grant did crack a grin and the girls laughed along too.

"What! Oh, I bet Cam loved that!" He said laughing. I allowed myself to laugh also as I remembered her flushed face which we'd obviously somehow scarred, but frowned again when I thought of our fight.

"Yeah well, you know, they usual happened." I replied soberly.

Macey sat up and accusatively stared at me, "God, what did you say to her now Goode. How long are we going to have to deal with you guys sniping at each other for?"

"Quite a while I imagine." I said quietly, I really did regret it. I know I crossed the line tonight but I don't know how I always lose my head when I fight with her. Macey sighed but settled back onto my shoulder. While Macey always supported Cammie, she never truly turned against me.


An hour or so later Cam and Bex walked in. Cam settled with a book in the armchair furthest away from me but still in our circle. Bex sat on the sofa next to Grant and glared at me. Bex was far more aggressive and therefore her loyalty was strong. Her support for Cam was not only friendly but also literal, if I'd hurt Cam then she would physically block me from talking to her for as long as Cammie needed.

Macey and Jaz threw Bex looks, obviously wondering what was going on with Cam and I. Bex shrugged but still looked pissed. Great, so Cam was obviously so upset that she wouldn't tell the girls what the problem was. To be honest, this worked out best for me. If they didn't know how bad it was, it's likely the girls would treat me pretty much as usual after a day or two.

But it is so frustrating. I had promised Grant I'd try especially hard this year. In the summer we had become vaguely civil, even joked around once or twice, but in the space of two days we'd both said things we regret and all our effort has been wasted.

Now we're back to square one.


Wow, so I hope you liked that chapter! A lot of DRAMA! I feel like it's finally getting into the story line, less filler chapters now.

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