My gosh, with my second chapter, no one payed attention to my three reveiws thing. As long as you people keep reveiwing, I shall keep writing, but you just got yourselves back on the "three reveiws per chapter thing"! I luv ya all anyway! The elves and Eragon probably think she's a nut case, but she's not, so don't start going to conclusions.
BlackWolfHowling, what do you want advice on? I will give you, and the other readers, advice on whatever you want, just ask!
ON WITH THE STORY!!!!
---At The Imperial Hall---
"I demand your name, young lady!" Queen Islandzadi was at the head table, surrounded by many elves, with Eragon and Arya on either side of her.
"I will speak to no one accept the rider, with the exception of my friend. This sentence will repeat itself untill I get to speak to the rider." She smiled sweetly.
"I'd expect your friend to save you by now. Well where is your dragon friend?"
"I will speak to no one accept the rider, with the exception of my friend. This sentence will repeat itself untill I get to speak to the rider."
"I will ask you one more time, what is your name, and where is your dragon? "
"I will speak to no one accept the rider, with the exception of my friend. This sentence will rep-"
"Get the rider!"
"Hello, Shur'tugal! I am Luna, of the Gray Wing Clan. I was sent here to ask for you. I came from far off seas. I am no royalty, but a messenger. We, of the Gray Wing, the Fire Claw, and Blue Fang clans wish to assist you in the battle against Galbatorix. The trees, the ocean, the animals, have been moaning for us to come and help you. They tell us if you lose, the world will fall under his reign."
"If you are a messenger, why were you running away from me?!" Eragon roared.
"Because it's fun to make humans run around." She simply smiled.
Eragon stalked over to the panel of people.
"We can't trust her yet. We have to make sure she is no threat to the resistance. We can't afford another attack so soon." The Queen stated.
"We can't. We should put her in a cell for now. Tommorow, we will probe her." Arya agreed.
They all decided it was best to keep her in the prison chamber.
---The next morning---
A gaurd went to go and feed her breakfast in the early morning...
"Mi'lady, Mi'lady! The girl has escaped! The entire back wall has been torn down be somthing massive!!!"
Queen Islandzadi immediatly called Eragon, Saphira, and Arya.
Arya examined the gaping hole.
"It has to be a dragon. These walls are impervious to magic. But the thing I find strange is that it looks like it's been torn down from the inside!"
"I don't want to think about it, but do you think..." Eragon sent pictures of a transforming Luna.
"I told you that's immposible...right?" Saphira sounded a little worried...
I got 8 reveiws for three chapters. YES!!!! How old is Eragon, like, twenty, right?