Right now, I am actually re-writing the whole thing, because i read it the other day, and found lots of things wrong with it i
Right now, I am actually re-writing the whole thing, because i read it the other day, and found lots of things wrong with it in the first chapter. i'll try to get it all redone before i post it up here, but if you want to read how its going as it is done, there is a really good chance that i'll have it up on my DA account. i don't know how to hyper link stuff here, and i am too lazy to figure it out... the links are on my author page :)
Thanks to all those ppl who have read it so far…
I might post up the new version here as it gets re-done, but until I am pretty much up-to-date from the plotline of this version, I wont take this one down… if that makes sense…..
