Songbook12- I feel the need to tell you this, if only to embarrass my lil' bro. Do you know how much proof reading I gotta do for this child?! He forgot to capitalize the first letter of the dialogue every time. He had a run-on sentence that lasts a whole paragraph! Not to mention how much he uses the word then! It's hard to proof-read stuff without changing too much! I don't want it to seem like I wrote it, so... I don't really read it, just skim and fix mistakes.
Which there are a lot of.
Brian- They get it K- Songbook.
Songbook12- NO! NO THEY DON'T! Man, all you beta-readers deserve a virtual cookie! You guys must be so busy! Man! Take a congratulatory virtual dessert.
That's right. I'm letting you pick your dessert.
Brina-... ANYWAYS, I hope you enjoy the chapter. And her rant. She likes to rant...
SB- Lies!
Chapter 4
Bad things happen to Robin
Robin started walking on the platforms. After awhile he found a man, and blood marks all over the walls. Then blood hit the top of his head and Robin looked up and saw a dead policeman pinned to the ceiling by a very sharp tooth. Then out of nowhere Killer Croc jumped out of the water and landed on a pontoon but he- Killer Croc- was about fifty feet away.
Robin thought, 'What was on his neck?' but he remembered last time they got Killer Croc in jail they put an electric collar on his neck. But then Killer Croc charged so Robin throws a sonic bird-a-rang at the electric collar. Luckily Robin's hunch was correct and the electric collar turned on. Killer Croc fell into the water. After that incident Robin was very careful and after a bit Robin reached a dead end.
He found a piece of paper and he saw on the paper to do list and it showed kill Batman, Robin and whoever comes down. So Robin turned back and went the way Batman went.
Batman looked around and he saw three different tunnels at that point Batman wished Robin were here but then at of nowhere Robin said, "you need some help".
Robin told him about the policeman killer croc and the list then Batman said "Now we need to find the venom get out of here but now Robin this time you go left and I'll go right once your done your tunnel come back here and wait". So Batman went off into his tunnel after awhile he found a Taser and under it he found a police badge.
Batman reached a dead end so he walked back to the main part there was one more tunnel up ahead and that is probably where the venom was.
Robin looked around his tunnel and found another dead policeman and then reached a dead end. But once again Killer Croc jumped up onto the pontoons and then Killer Croc charged but this time Robin knew what to do. So he threw a ring at his collar and then Killer Croc fell into the water after that Robin went back to the main part where Batman was and he told him about Killer Croc again. Then Batman told him, "The venom is in that tunnel but this time stay together, ok?"
Songbook12- This is getting interesting!
Brian- R&R!