Ghost Of You Written in Proper English
Disclaimer: Um okay I don't own this and it's co authored with xxxbloodyrists666xxx.
AN: The other story got a bit boring so here goes and if you're one of the fuckers who flamed Tara's story you can go to Hell, cause she helped with this. I don't give a fuck when Harry Potter takes place. This takes place NOW, and it's MY story, so they can have iPods and NORMAL clothes and shit if I want them to. So if you're against goths or a prep or something then do everyone a favor and fuck off.
(Please define NORMAL.)
Hermoine Granger checked her black lipstick in her black makeup mirror as she trudged her way to the Hogwarts Express. Last year, she probably would have been a freak with a bushy mass of hair and brown eyes.
(Hermione was fine till you fucked around with her...well book version at least. I don't like movie Hermione.)
But after the events of this Summer, she certainly didn't. Hermione had changed over the Summer. Her parents had revealed to her during their summer vacation in America that they were not in fact her parents at all, rather, both her parents were wizards and she had been adopted by the Grangers. The Grangers, who had spat on her, abused her, neglected her for so long (Note: And yes, this is possible because it is never implied that it's NOT true.) The nights Hermione had spent suffering in her room, wishing it would all stop…They refused to reveal to her who her parents were and why she had been abandoned. In her rage, Hermione or Maya, as she was now called had murdered them, using magic. This was unknown to the Ministry. Hermione spent the rest of the Summer in Tokyo at Cho's apartment with her and Ginny. She had grown very close to both of them.
(Yes remember everyone just because something isn't stated to be true doesn't mean it can't be true. Maya? I mean it sounds slightly better than Smith but still not great. Cho is Chinese not Japanese.)
Now as she embarked the train to her sixth year, Maya swished her nearly waist-length, newly dyed raven locks and blinked her emerald with the use of magic eyes as she stepped into a seat on the Hogwarts Express. She wore a black leather bustier, a blue plaid mini trimmed with black lace, ripped black fishnets, and black lace-up platform boots. On her face was lots and lots of black eyeliner, blood-red lipstick, and matching eyeshadow. Her skin was pale white from the lack of sunlight, and she was slender, but with curves in all the right places. She took out her iPod and put on an Evanescence song at full volume. Some preps stared at her.
(Most normal people regardless if they are preps or not would stare at you.)
"Oh my like god, what are you, like, listening to?" Gasped Luna, who was sitting on another seat with a bunch of giggly blonde preps wearing a pink mini, a slutty pink halter top and Gucci shoes.
(Raven both you and Tara have no room to talk when it comes to slutty clothes. What exactly do you have against Luna?)
She looked exactly like Hilary Duff and some preps next to her giggled. Maya stuck up her white-skinned middle finger at them. They gasped and Hermione went back to listening to her iPod. She then changed the song to a My Chemical Romance one and tried to drown out the prep's voices by listening to Gerard's incredible, sexy voice and thinking about him.
(Once again Raven please point on the doll where Hilary touched you. There was no reason for you to give the preps the middle finger. You're just provoking people because of your stupid high school clique bullshit mentality.)
Suddenly, someone tapped her on the shoulder.
"Fuck!" She screamed.
She then looked behind her and Virginia (There's you Tara love you girl!) and Cho, whose nickname is Dementia after her middle name, (Filly you rock bitch, MCR also rocks 666!) were standing next to her, looking excited. Ginny was wearing a sexy black corset dress with red lacing, pink fishnets and black high heeled boots. She was wearing black lipstick and eyeliner and her hair was blood-red, with black tips. Dementia had new purple streaks in long, silky ebony hair and was wearing a torn black MCR t-shirt, a ripped black and red plaid mini, safety pin earrings and black combat boots with heels.
(Really? Virginia? That's the least sounding goth name ever.)
"Well, that's nice." Said Dementia.
"Oh, sorry! Sit down, my bitches." Maya said jokingly.
(I still don't understand your obsession with calling people bitches.)
Her friends trooped in and sat next to her. Maya noticed now who she was sitting behind...Draco Malfoy. As he heard her voice, he looked around coyly for a split-second and then looked back. His hair was dyed black and slicked back (AN: Kind of like Tom Felton in the first movie). His eyes were icy blue and suggested inner depths of darkness. Maya and the girls then high-fived and chatted for a while. After some time, Ginny asked…
(Nothing better than a good old fashioned high five to pass the time.)
"So have you seen the guys?"
"You mean Harry and Ron? No." said Maya.
"Well, you better find them soon because they're gonna be lovin' your new look." said Dementia.
(Yeah I beg to differ!)
Just then, the train stopped and the girls got out, grinning, freaking out preps.
(I doubt it was just preps who were freaked out.)
Maya didn't see Harry or Ron, but she just might have seen a boy in leather pants, a leather jacket, black hair, and blue eyes smile at her.
(Yes I also find it weird when Jesus smiles at as well.)
The End
This is the end of all of Tara and Raven's stories as far as I can tell at least. Commentary for this story isn't as good since there was only one chapter and it was short. Anyways if you still crave more My Immortal related stuff I'm working on a new story currently. It takes place in the My Immortal universe. It focuses on four new characters but takes place during Ebony and friends' story. Ebony and the others aren't the main focus though and only show up every once in awhile. But other than that I don't have anything else My Immortal related I'm afraid.