Naruto, The Bloody Maelstrom

by Hector Enix

Naruto awakens the King of Hell in the Forest of Death, and in order to save his life, makes a pact with him. Watch as he forges his path as the vessel for Blood Hounduar; Watch the rise of the Bloody Maelstrom. Naru/Kin. On Hold for awhile. Sorry

4. Don't Kill Me

Hello My Freaky Darlings!

I'm afraid I've got terrible news... unless you wanted this to be redone, in which case I have wonderful news.

I've got a poll on my profile that has Hell Knyght( The rewrite) as an option. Now then, I'm not working on ANY story until I get 100 votes on the poll(At least). If you don't want this to be redone(In a different way I might add), then I'm sorry, but I can't continue this story without Phantom, and he's not gonna help me anymore due to the distance between us(And he hates computers)

Now then, It might be unfair to tell you this and expect you to happily vote with a small paragraph of a description; So, since I'm assuming most of you will want the re-write of Bloody Maelstrom, I'll describe my rewrite a little.

Basically, Naruto dies when the Kyuubi is sealed in him; the catch is that his soul fuses with the Kyuubi's, and he goes to hell for the Fox's sins. He's taken in by an elderly demon, a former member of the Hellion Elite, after being rejected for torture on account of his incredibly young form and mind(He's about five or six hours old at this point). He grows up in Hell, making few friends until he meets her ; I won't say too much(Half because I don't wanna ruin it, half because I have no idea what I'm doing), but an escaping soul ends up kill both her and Naruto's adoptive "Father". Needless to say, he wants Revenge. After training with the Current Hellion Elite and obtaining the rank of Black Guard(A rank in Hell's army; separate from the normal chains of commands and sin-based factions).

Then he returns to the human world(Material Plane) looking for the man who killed his "Family". Boom, we have a plot.

I will detail his time in Hell during the first few chapters, though the chapters will be shorter than they used to(About 17-20 pages per chapter; much easier then 39-45 pages per chapter).

Alright, I've explained myself and my intentions(Kinda). Now get off your lazy asses and vote; I want to get the first chapter done before Monday, when school starts up again.

I'll post another note letting you know if Hell Knyght won, and when the story will be up(Provided it wins). Actually, considering the circumstances, This isn't really a rewrite; it a new story with similar themes... hmmm. Oh well. VOTE!