Bloody Future
Disclaimer: I do not own Percy Jackson or Heroes of Olympus
Pairings: Luke x Jason x Nico x Percy, Frank x Reyna x Hazel x Leo
Warning: Slash and character bashing
Author's note: Okay, so I know that I'm not supposed to do this but I really want to thank a couple of awesome people. I'm going to start posting my favorite reviews at the beginning of all my fic's because I feel like you deserve it. Also, people seem to like it a lot.
Anyway, I know I could do this in a PM but where's the fun in that? Thank you Kyuubi's death, Uracow99, Wolfman613, and WhatchamacallitThingamajig. I want to add more but I'm pretty sure a lot of people stopped reading so I'm not sure who to add…
Anyway, my fav. reviews:
Chap. 3 of Scarlet Past
Lex chapter 3. Aug 18
So, I love you.
Let's skip the first date and jump straight to declarations of affection, I'm not ashamed.
I am, however, now doubly intruiged by this fic.
There really ought be more multi-chaptered 'Percy-Joins-The-Dark-Side-They-Have-Luke-Slash-Fi cs'.
Add on top the unique twist of psychological gender-identity abuse and you have yourself the perfect tea-time novela.
And please, don't drop the depression on our account. As long as brats HermesIsMySire1 and ImAnUnclaimeHalfblood2 latch unto showered guilt, Im all for it. Glad Luke convinced Perce to play amnesiac. Those kids dont deserve forgiveness :S
Babe, there is nothing better than a story full of well deserved grovelling. And a protagonist who aint so forgiving.
Another fucktastic chapter (and that's a compliment! I just like the f-bomb, don't judge)
Cant wait for more babe,
Stay Brilliant.
Lex.
Chapter 1-5 of Scarlet Past
Takara Phoenix chapter 5 . Aug 25
"Our path to world domination", oh Percy, why so casual about that? xDDD I was throwing myself away with laughter at that (do you even say that in English? I have no idea...)!
Looking forward to seeing some minor kids and 'traitors' like Alabaster and Ethan later on! o
Short chapter, short review. I really don't have much to say this time. Aside from: Luke, you're an idiot! Percy is perfect, even - and especially - as a boy! *hits him upside the head*
Well, I'll be sitting here, waiting for Nico to appear. xD
Greetings, Phoe
Takara Phoenix chapter 4 . Aug 25
I really like the way you describe feeling, situations. You're good with first person. May kind of suck at that or keep slipping, but you bring it over really well.
Poor Percy. Well, Gabe abusing Percy shall always be my headcanon, but still, poor Percy. *hugs him until the pain goes away*
Clarisse and her minions! *laughs loudly* That is awesome! xDDD But somehow I had been under the impression the girl who trains all girls, the buff one with the pretty face, had been Clarisse... _
Either way, still awesome Clarisse. Clarisse and her minions. I'm not getting over that. xDDD Clarisse and Nico are my favorite character, so yeah. Sensible and helpful Clarisse is being awesome. o
Hah, off to the next chapter! See you there. ;)
Greetings, Phoe
Takara Phoenix chapter 3 . Aug 25
Good guilt and regret. At least that. I still think that kids, especially those kids, wouldn't say stuff like that in this contest, but the guilt and regret outweight it at least a little.
You did good with the emotions, Luke's emotions. But the fainting was a little much clicheed. xD
Oh seaweed brain. That takes me back. *feeling all nostalgic* It's so Percy not to know what the Big Three are. *shakes head* He's just too adorable to be true.
Weightning down hard on him that he's feeling like even more than a mistake now... I doubt he really doesn't care that much anymore. Poor thing.
Greetings, Phoe
Takara Phoenix chapter 2 . Aug 25
Love Clarisse. Always love a good Clarisse. I think you did a good job on characterizing her, she was rough and tough but not a mean bastard.
Though I think it was a bit over the top, the way the others in the Hermes cabin reacted. Figuring that most of them are unclaimed and a bunch of kids from different parents, I think they're more accepting. If others, claimed ones, would have reacted that way, maybe. And the whole assuming he's gay? A 12-years-old kid? A bit very off there, I'd say.
I realize you needed the strong provocation to get to the point of this, the whole attempted suicide, but it was still a little extreme.
Huh, let's go and see the aftermath of an attempted suicide! Gotta dash!
Greetings, Phoe
Takara Phoenix chapter 1 . Aug 25
Sooo thanks to you answering my certainly annoying PMs, I had to dive in.
Now that I've read the first chapter, gotta share my opinion. ;)
I for my part love a crossdressing Percy. That's always a nice thing. And a darker, more twisted Percy is always an interesting read too.
Not very much of a fan of Lukercy, buuut I gotta sit it out and wait for Nico to appear. *grins sheepishly*
I like the way you characterized Annabeth here, because at the beginning of the books, she had been suspicious and not very keen on Percy either. I can't picture her being joyous over a female demi-god either and also not really paying much attention to 'her', thus not realizing Percy actually is a girl.
But you gotta explain to me what pageants are, because the only thing my translator comes up with kind of doesn't really make sense... Middle aged market plays? Really? Or does that really don't make sense?
And how come Percy calls himself Percy Jackson? When was it that his mother died in this? Does he still have vivid memory of her, or shouldn't he kind of introduce himself as Percy Ugliano? Curiosity. *grins*
Anyway, I'll be off to the second chapter!
Greetings, Phoe
I think this is enough for now. I'll add more next time I update so make sure to review.
Chapter 4:
Alex slipped out from the dinner table while the older demigods were distracted fully with their guests. He tightened his grip on a small bear that Percy had brought him and made his way towards where the other demigods were seated.
"Leo!" He cried once the Latino was in his sights. The small boy rushed into the boy's arms and held him tightly.
Leo froze in shock for a couple of seconds before returning the hug. "Alex," He whispered holding the boy securely in his arms.
Piper grinned, "Thank the Gods you're okay!" She sighed in relief. "We should leave now before Percy notices."
Alex pulled away at that. "Why?" He asked confused.
"We're going to rescue you," Piper said giving him a kind smile.
"Rescue me? From what?"
"From Luke and Percy," Frank stated.
"Why? Percy is really nice. He brought me new clothes and all the toys I wanted." Alex pouted holding up an extremely fluffy teddy bear.
"Alex," Piper's used her charmspeak, "Percy is the bad guy. He killed many of our friends."
Alex's eyes glazed over, "Percy is the bad guy?" He asked.
"He's using you," She insisted.
"Alex? Alex, where'd you go?" Percy's voice rang through the restaurant.
Alex broke out of the haze and looked up at Piper teary eyed, "You used your power on me?" He whimpered. "Percy was right! You're using us! Percy! Help me!" He cried.
Hazel covered his mouth with her hand, "Shhh, we have to get out of here while we still can."
Alex struggled against her grip frantically. Frank threw him over his shoulder. Alex held the stuffed bear closer to him and cried.
Leo frowned and took the boy from Frank and held him protectively against his chest. Why was the boy so upset? He should be happy that he was being saved. Did Percy brainwash him into believing that this was the bad side?
"I want Percy!" Alex sobbed out once they exited the restaurant. "Leo! Put me down!" He demanded.
"Hush now child." Piper cooed, "You're safe now. Percy won't be able to hurt you anymore. What did he do to you?"
"Nothing! He was nice to me and he cared for me," Alex pouted, his eyes watering.
"Don't fall for his charm!" Piper snapped angrily. "He is the bad guy!"
"I beg to differ," A cool voice said from behind them.
The demigods turned around to face a certain blond man. Luke glared at them; it was pretty obvious he was upset.
"I believe that little boy belongs to Percy." Luke said dangerously. "Now hand him over before I am forced to kill you."
Alex looked up at Luke through his tears and blinked.
"Luke, I want Percy," Alex held out his arms so Luke could pick him up.
Leo instinctively pulled Alex away but Alex managed to squirm out of Leo's arms and ran to Luke's side. Luke lifted Alex and turned away. He ignored the demigods for now because he had no idea what their strengths and weaknesses were.
"Alex!" Percy's relieved voice sounded. Percy pulled Alex into his arms and held him tightly, "Please don't ever do that again. I was so worried."
Alex held onto Percy like his life depended on it. "I'm sorry." He whimpered. "I wanted to talk to them though."
Nico appeared, "Chronos and Gaea left. They want to meet with us again but in a more private setting."
Luke nodded. "I see."
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I groaned and glared at the giant pile of work I need to get done. I swear it kept growing. I do one, five more appear. It's no fair and it isn't like it's just sign this and move to the next. No, I had to actually read and fill out each paper.
Alex was asleep on the bed behind him and Luke and Nico were finishing their own work so I was all alone with boring paperwork.
"Stop glaring at the poor paper work." Luke wrapped his arms around my waist and pulled me towards him so he could kiss me.
"I have ADHD and dyslexia," I pouted. "Paperwork and I don't go well together."
"I guessed that," He chuckled. His warm breath puffed on my skin.
"You know, we never finished what we started a couple days ago." I whispered in his ear. I reached my arm around him and took his hand and lead it to my crotch.
"Careful, our 'son' is here. You still have to explain to me when Alex became our son because you seemed to be the only one who knew about it."
I smiled, "I always wanted a loving family and since we are lacking the right body parts to actually have kids why not adopt? Besides," I murmured looking over to where Alex was sleeping. "Isn't he the cutest thing you've ever seen?"
Luke chuckled, "You and Nico are pretty cute though you have nothing on Alex," He agreed.
I playfully hit him, "Hey," I pouted.
"You're cute in a different way," He chuckled kissing me again.
I pouted, "Better be," I pulled away from him and pulled off my shirt and pants until I was in just boxers. "Good night," I told him as I slipped into bed and cuddled next to Alex.
Luke frowned, "You're such a tease."
"Thank you."
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Jason frowned, that entire operation was a failure and yet all he could think of was that kiss and how good Percy's lips felt against his.
What troubled him was Alex though. The boy seemed to want to stay with Percy and think that Percy was on the good side. He also definitely wasn't brainwashed and he seemed happier with Percy.
Jason groaned, "This is so frustrating."
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Leo pouted; he lost Alex for a third time. Tears welled in his eyes, Alex was supposed to rely and look up to him but he looked like he wanted nothing to do with the Latino.
"Leo," Hazel whispered.
"I don't understand," Leo whimpered. "Why am I such a bad person?"
"You're not a bad person," Reyna whispered holding the boy closer to her. Leo was practically in her lap.
Frank sighed, "Stop cooing over him. He's upset and I'm sure you ladies aren't helping."
Leo cuddled into Reyna's breasts, "Let me mope in peace." He complained. "And I'm perfectly okay with these lovely bre- girls." He blushed red and covered his face. "Oh Gods, I'm turning into a pervert!"
Frank chuckled, "You can try all you want but you will never turn into a pervert. You're too innocent for that."
"Stop distracting me while I'm moping!" Leo pouted again.
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