Pokémon extreme quest part 4:
I don't own Pokémon If I did Ash would've won the Hoenn league, and May and Max would be the main focus then Max's.
I decided to put some of the Pokémon ability and moves I'll add more lately.
I'm going to try to get this story started; I know have four other stories so I will write this story and focus on finishing off The return of Ahsoka, then the other stories… Batwoman beyond is on hiatus, sorry fan base, I get to it eventually.
Figure I was finishing the first chapter of this new story for the New Year.
Does anybody think Serena should be trying to get all the Kalos gym badges alone side with Ash give her some goal; this is why Dawn and May are my favorite of Ash companion.
This is a short story while I describe the characters and their Pokémon.
I choose Molly because she awesome and the 3rd movie is the best.
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PS Ash 14 here.
Ash and his friends from Kalos met up with his old traveling buddy, in a town where human are disappearing and several odd powers Pokémon are appearing, and some of Ash old friends have strange experience as...Pokémon.
Review:
eternal mistchapter 3 . Feb 23
ok... first things first. I like the concept of all of Ash's companions meeting each other, though I kind of expected them not to get along. Overall it sounds good though I wish you'd spend more time on dialogue and less on the battle, but thats a person preference. The battles are extremely detailed, which is nice to see
I try to add conflict to the story between the characters that may just be my plan. Thanks you, I will not have a battle for a few chapters so I figure this would do. I try my best to makes the battles with enough detailed that it not dull, I glad you approve.
Flash back:
"Let's go get something to eat Max's." Molly said.
"Sure Molly, I know a place." Max's said.
They went to the shop Max's talk about where there were 3 some familiar faces in charge of the food.
"Hey Max's how do you know about this restaurant?" Ash said, while Molly was holding Pyro and putting some super potion to spread on her Pokémon skin.
"We'll Ash; Molly, May, and I were traveling where we found a few boys all in nets we free them and their Pokémon." Max's said.
"Really; Max how nice of them to tell you that they have a restaurant." Ash said.
"Yeah one of them mentions they knew you." Max said entering the restaurant.
"Really, who is it Max?" Ash said.
"I can't remember, he said he travels with you." Max said.
"There he is." Molly said point at one of the waiter.
No one POV:
A green hair waiter, smile at them, "Max is that you with Ash?" Cilan said.
"Yeah," Max said.
"I would never think I would see the two of you again let alone together." Cilan said.
"I'm glad I get to see so many of my old friends together." Ash said.
"Hey, Ash Iris was here early want to see her?" Cilan said.
"Sure do." Ash said, this cause Serena to be secretly upset.
"Maybe after work I can battle you." Cilan said.
"I think I can do that." Ash said.
A few seconds later a blue hair girl enters the restaurant, "Dawn?" May said.
"May wow, Ash, Brock it a reunion." Dawn said.
"Yeah everyone seems to be here." Max said.
"I saw Iris here earlier." Dawn said.
"What do you guys think should I go find Iris?" He said to his current companion.
"I get to see more Pokémon to play with?" Bonnie asked.
"I don't know maybe Bonnie." Ash said.
"I say we go." Bonnie said.
"OK, but what do you guys say?" He asked his current companion.
"I don't know?" Serena said, still not wanting Ash seeing another girl.
"If we do could I possible battle her." Clemont said.
Serena looks at him, "I don't see why not." Ash said.
"Fine," Serena said, but Ash is obliviousto the fear and angry in her voice.
"I say we eat something first." Ash said.
"Ya, I think that a good idea Ash." Bonnie said.
"I agree with Bonnie." Serena said, trying to avoid Ash meeting any others girls.
"That's sound good, your meals on me." Cilan said.
They all smile at the news of free food.
The eleven kids ate the food happily.
"He is a great cook." Serena said.
"Yeah, I would have him but he didn't want to go to Kalos." Ash said.
"And what of this Iris character." Clemont asked.
"She is a pain but fun to be around." Ash said.
"So I have to ask you Misty why did you leave Ash." Serena said.
"I knew if continued on my adventure to Hoenn then my sister would run the gym into the ground." Misty said. *
"Really, your family runs a gym that awesome." Serena said.
"Yeah, my parents are missing. So my sister and I are gym leaders." She said.
"Sorry about your mom." Serena said.
"It ok, hey what your parents like." Misty told the other girl.
"My mom is a champion Rhyhorn Racer." Serena said.
"That is awesome Serena." Misty said.
A bell rang at the door and Iris came.
"Ash is that you?" The purple hair girl said.
"Iris is that you?" Ash said.
She smiles at her old friend.
"Hey, Ash would you mine telling me who your friends are?" Iris asked.
He told her everyone names, where and how he met them.
They heard a couple kids yelling to Officer Jenny; one of them was a brunette girl, the other a red hair boy.
"We lost of friends in the past." The boy said as 2 Torchic came and gently peck his legs.
One of them had a fedora on, and the other had an orange scarf. "That my friend Billy Torchic the one with the scarf."
"And who does the other Torchic belong to?" The police officer said.
"I don't know but that Billy hat." The girl said. Trying to remove the Torchic hat but it wouldn't let her.
There was a Bulbasaur with a plastic flower on the grass Pokémon left ear, and another one dragging a multi color scarf.
"That Lindsey Bulbasaur, and that her scarf." He reach for the scarf as the other Bulbasaur walk away slowly.
Max asks Molly if they should help.
Meanwhile with The officer and the kids, "Listen…uh."
"I'm Jim and this is Tasha." The red hair boy said.
"Can you tell me what happen?" Officer said.
"Well they said they heard a weird noise." Tasha said. "We wanted to feed the Pokémon so we didn't follow them that were a day and a half ago."
"We have to assemble a search party." The officer said.
Everyone of the group heard it and they all knew after Cilan shop close they would help them.
Next chapter the limits of a world where two story dragons can go into one inch balls is reach a new limit.
To be continued…
*Yeah I have no idea why she left.