mari-ahh i finally finished it...so this is just most of chuunin exam, i realized that towards the end of it i start to ramble like afte the fifth page for some reason, don't know why, but i think it has to do with the time of day i was typing in.\
mahjike- she used alot of music while typing this fic
akiri- mari does not own naruto...when will i come back
mari- when i stop being lazy and acualy type your next chapter -sigh-, enjoy
Hinata tapped the desk unpassionately. God she was bored, bored of the stupid bandages on her eyes, bored of knowing that any one of her siblings could come for her and yet they haven't; bored with the fact ryu hadn't shown up yet. Bored knowing that she couldn't completely kill the sun bastered with out starting a war, bored that she heard her old teammates voice. No wait she found that weird and interesting, and wanted to investigate that further. Oh and she was bored with the fact that the stupid chuunin exam hadn't started yet. She could really be doing better things then this, like counting down the hours until she was freed of these stupid bandages which as actually like in a couple of day, and the first thing she wanted to see wore the shadows, and then her dear friends.
"hey hinata-chan" our blond secondary character said smiling at her, taking the seat next to her
"hey naruto-kun" hinata said with a fake smile trying really hard not to sigh.
"alright you maggots, shudder we're going to start this thing, now as blah blah" hinata completely zoned out after 'start this thing'.
'finally what took them so long'
'grrrrrrrrrr….'
'oh right I forgot you wore here'
'what's going on'
'the test is finally starting'
'…you woke me up for this…call me when you get into a fight'
'fine be that way kiki…night eh day'
'yah'.
"okay begin" and soon a paper was passed out, as hinata licked her fingers to hide the fact that she was releasing the chakara. Her hands quickly skimmed thur the page as her eyes would have widen with shock.
'-inner hinata groaned- it's the same test I took when I graduated from the academy…'
'didn't every firkin jounin and your siblings tell you that the eclipse was always many steps head of the rest'
'yes
'well there you go, so are you going to answer then'
'hell no I bet you that all of this is useless except the last question and even then I don't have to actually be awake.'
'nap time'
'nap time'
Every one just stared at hinata as weird squeak like noise wore coming from her. it wasn't until one of the tester people walked up to her, did they realize that she was in fact asleep. Shikamaru was sleeping as well, but he didn't make noise when he slept. The guy just poked her a bit and the noise stopped.
Sasuke, along with all the sun people and koaru smirked, obviously think hinata and her team would never pass, imagine there surprise inner person when in fact all they had to do was not raise there hand for the last question, and not let down there teams.
Kiba and shino just walked towards their team mate and poked her. hinata raise her head a bit lazy like as akamaru licked her cheek and she giggled. "okay hinata time to follow the rest of the people and continue with this exam"
"can one of you guys take me, I'm lazy right now" hinata said blushing a bit but in truth was she really really didn't want to get up.
" fine " kiba said as he picked her up and put her over his back given her a piggy back ride. they walked out and reach the other at the forest. Anko was going on about some waver and stuff when hinata decided to pay kiki another short visit,
'hey kiki they call this place the forest of death…do you think miro-sama will be there'
'that leave basterd I doubt he'll be here…he normally sends out his minions to do his 'evil' work'
'you really don't like miro-sama…'
' of course not that lazy basterd…if you must know he's my ex'
'oohh….I'll just ask one of my sister about it later'
"earth to hinata-chan"
"…oh hi guys"
"you just spaced out, and we're about to enter the forest and we want to to be ready with us got it"
"yes….so what are we doing:"
"we have five days to find the sister of this scroll here…."
"so what scroll do we have…"
"the heaven now let's go" and with that they entered the forest. At first nothing was out of the ordinary, and then they unexpectedly walked into someone's blood fest. Hinata activated her byakugan just to see what left her teammates speechless. And that's when she saw him the carrier of shukaku. Hinata had heard stories of both of them corrupted with there lust for blood, and for the first time in many weeks/days hinata feared for her and her friends life.
So after that little episode the three decided the fast they could get the sister scroll and head towards the tower all would be fine. The day went on and they some how wore able to completely miss another team the whole day. Setting up camp high in the trees. Hinata listen to her teammates breath as they fell into there sleeping patterns. She smiled lightly, as she got up and headed some where remote from where she was. opening her jacket she reached into the inner pocket; Which was like a black abyss that could even hold a whole house and would create no problem for the user, or make it noticeable; and out she took her handy dandy mega headphones. Setting the song to something that brought happy but sad memories. (I'm listening to Ella me levanto, by daddy yankee…yah I know….but I really like the lyrics and the music, and it goes with the dance she's remembering about.)
It started with her head that bobbed to the music.
Flashback #1
'Come on hina-chan yida-sensei said you have to get better at the sound taijutsu, since my family specializes in that I'm going to help, get ready hinata cuz I'm going to teach you how to become a dancing siren.' A boy's voice said to her. hinata looked up to see a guy with spike hair that just smiled at her. his hand out to him taking it and then it began.
Flash back #2
'Come on hinata we need you to distract them, you can do this' the same boy said now except he looked like a 16 year old
'jinx-kun, I'm firkin out here, what if the jutsu gives out half way thur what it shi-kun fails, what if they don't fall for my dance' a 16 year old looking hinata said. Until jinx just flicked her forehead. 'ow'
'hinata-chan, do you really think we're going to fail, especially when you have the greatest dance partner, trust me if your moves don't keep them distracted your future looks will damn looks like me and shi-chan are going to have a handful keep guys away from you, now here they are cueing our song remember, we're the distraction while shi-chan gets the scroll…oh come on hinata we your team mates and practically older brothers like we'd ever let something happened to you…now lets go and hypnotize people'
End of flashbacks
Those who wore up only stared in amazement as the show started. Hinata was now in a trance of dusted old memories while her body played back the way she danced those days with the onii-kun. Her hips swayed from fast to slowly, her hands become in tracing moving like snakes around her and on her. her legs then slowly joined in along with her shoulders, moving them back and forth. She moved in these wide steps, as her hips kept swaying mimicked by her shoulders, and then out of no where some one joined her, placing one hand on her hips while the other one grabbed her right hand that was in the air. twirling her around, dancing the same style that she did it. It was as if they already knew the steps. Hinata felt the way she had danced with jinx, (just to let you guys know in my mind their dancing mambo-ish). Hinata felt there bodies start to move to the beat of her music perfectly, as they did turns; as the came together, as they separated. She needed to know, who this dancer was.
"byakugan" she muttered, to only go into a conversation with her self again
'you realize mahjike-sama is going to be pissed if he finds out you've been using this technique'
'well he'll never know now will he'
'I'm not going to lie to my king, I won't tell him, but if he finds out and asks for the truth, I will tell'
'fine with me'
Back to the real story, hinata looked in front of her a gawked in disbelief while still dancing, the guy she was dancing with was identical to jinx, minus the fact that he had blue hair, and that's when she noticed to things. 1) the guy had a sun hitae-ite. 2) there wore two souls within the bond one was some dude over the age of twenty which looked nothing like the current vic. The other did look exactly like jinx, who looked identical to vic, except his held no emotions, they wore blank with sadness, a chain was around his neck that was tied to the real bodies forehead.
Hinata was now pissed, it didn't take her long to realize that in fact her dear teammate was indeed alive, and blocked out by the sun ninja possessing him at the moment. While still dancing with him, hinata realized that the guy right now was not in control but jinx was. Taking off her left hand, hinata took out a kunai, and cut on to her palm the same mark as the one on her gloves. And then headed straight for the guy's forehead with such force that she cut the sun hitae-ite in half as a black light surrounded her palm and the guy's forehead.
Jinx/vix, stood in complete shock, as the guy we saw earlier was now laying on the ground also in shock. Hinata walked passed jinx/vic and towards the man.
"who…no one should be able to break the seal, not till he dies should I be freed"
"you….you killed my people and imprisoned my aniki…you better hope he become fond of you" hinata said as rage and happiness was coming out of her breath. As she grabbed the guy by the collar of his shirt.
"please hime-sama let me handle this, it seems like jinx-kun hasn't been able to completely come out of his trans." Kiki said as she came out of the shadows, but this time she had bat wings and a silver tail, that resembled a lot the bone structure. "plus its been a while since I killed for a reason" she said smiling devilishly. Hinata dropped him, as kiki then charged towards the man quickly taking flight to have…fun.
Hinata turned her attention back to jinx. "aniki…..onii-chan…….Vic..….JINX" hinata shouted to him, only to be embraced, and feel something wet drip on to her shoulder. She could hear him sobbing on to her shoulder, as he held her.
"its really you…I'm sorry…I'm sorry we weren't strong enough hina-chan…I'm sorry" jinx's kept saying as he cried on to her.
"shhh…its okay aniki…its okay…I'm just so happy that your okay to…god damn it you made me cry" hinata said now crying as well. (I hate when people do that to me)
"I'm sorry for all the pain my body caused you, but now I'll never leave your side, that the oath from your older brother"
"yah about that…we're in the middle of the chuunin exam and…ahh" hinata screamed as she threw her headphones changed to a different song…and they wore on full blast. (that just happened to me and I jumped).
"…"
"..oh right the exam, and you are in a different team from. You're with this chick made koaru, and a sun….wait if your alive, that must mean….shit Leon's satoshi…wait I can see that. Jinx, those people on your team will call you vic, basically you have the same personality, except you're a bigger jackass, and you're mean to me."
"well gee thanks…so why are you telling me this."
"jerk I can't see yet, the only reason I saw was cuz I used that technique"
"GASP" jinx/vic said making fun of little hinata….if only he actually knew what mahjike would do if he found out. Nope mahjike was not a fan of the hyuga's/ moon tribe after what they had done to three of his five children.
"…shuddup, so if I'm right Leon should look identical to satoshi, and you have to watch him, while we continue with this exam, and until I can 'fight' him and set him free."
"so it's been at least a year since we last actually saw each other"
"it's been a year since I've actually seen"
"….."
"….."
"wow….so who are you with"
"oh right. some guy friends of mine that are from konoha."
"…I want to meet them right now"
"no….not until we set satoshi free, then you can stop pretending to be vic. I'll tell them about you, but this has to stay between us. Now go before your team start to wonder about you…I should do the same"
'and before you go and start why you're not good enough to be my imouto-chan friends rant'
"imouto-chan" jinx/vic called back to her as she was leaving
"…yes" hinata turned to have him kiss her forehead.
"be careful…night" and they left. Oh and to let you guys know the other people that wore watching this little performance, but wore not able to hear a word they said, wore none other then Sasuke (yes I'm a hinasasu fan, and god damn proud), Neji (the original pairing I first read about, and don't start with the whole incest is wrong cuz you know your totally into twincest and I know you know what I'm talking about if not I'm sorry…I'm going to hell), and shikamaru (personally I wish more people liked this pairing sigh), and may be gaara still pondering about that, not sure.
Sasuke's inner mind
'what the fuck was that all about and who the hell was the guy that came out of that sun kid and why did he act all 'nice and friendly towards her….wait….wait….why do I -note the I , care about what miss I have bandages on my eyes, who is really good at dancing….
Cuz she's hot
No I will not think this...these thoughts…. I have someone I must kill….and this stupid tattoo now…I'm going back.'
that was sasuke's inner thoughts. Now for the next guy Nejd.
'that girl…I swear to god she muttered byakugan before she attacked the man…no I'm just imagining things….or am I'
Neji left the rest of us here on earth to have a weird and philosophical conversation with god, or himself to ponder about stuff like life and stuff and who was it possible that hinata might actually be related to him. which I will reveal later on with her lost four year memories which will in really only count for as two years tops.
We don't even need to go into shikamaru's and maybe gaara's, sure still mind to know what they're think about. Obviously its how troublesome this girl will be, and how delicious her blood will be only to get smack by shukaku for thinking such things about the demons princess.
…any ways it was day break hinata, told (and I just lost THE GAME (1)…sorry) kiba and shino about vic and how he was actually jinx, only to get hit in the head as kiki entered her again.
"hinata are you alright"
"yes…lets just take someone's scroll and head towards the tower, I want some food (wait gaara already headed towards the tower so he saw nothing so ignore all I said about the blood lust and hitting in the head…I just remember if that's what you're wondering) hinata said to her teammates as they accidentally waked into someone's trap and in the end they ended up stealing the trap peoples scroll.
"…well that was interesting…." Kiba said since the really didn't do nothing shino just scared them off with a wave of insects, if you ask me that sound actually really scary since I really don't like bugs that much I know.
"…we can finally go to the tower now" hinata said with some kind of shine in her self
"…my precious are happy"
". . . . ."
" . . . shino . . . we're still here"
"..I know…now-cough- lets go to the tower" and thus our heroes head towards the tower and thus…the plot thinks…not really but I really felt like typing the phrase down.
Any way, hinata and her teams entered the tower. It was really lonely since barely anyone was there. Of course that was soon to change when they ran into the infamous sand siblings. –cues sparkler, musical music and jazz hand- if you must know which you probably won't care about I saw hairspray, and I'm bored. So the three just stared at the three.
"well look what the cat dragged in"
"…guys whose talking"
"the sand people"
"…oh…."
"…hey you're the girl that knocked into me I think its time I taught you a lesson" kankuro said as hinata just twitched, and akamaru and kiba growled. Shino did nothing but if you looked closely you could see that bugs coming out of his jacket. Before the guys could actually kill each other the door, open and our favorite sun ninjas came in. they walked towards them quietly.
"nena oye nena, cuidate nena cuidate." Translation 'girly hey girly watch your self nena watch your self.
"chch...chch...oyes eso, es tu ultima noche Chula tu ultima noche"translation. 'hear that, it's your last night girly your last night'
They all noticed as Hinata's knuckles started to turn white.
"eye Chula I need to tell you something" hinata then turn to hear vic. In front of her. he bend down also said a threat, in Spanish
'you're right it is satoshi, I used the element taijutsu and he instantly corrected me, so what do we do now.
'keep this up and if he attacks me or better yet we're paired up to fight'
'karma has never been on my side hinata-chan so I doubt it greatly…'
'well go on they need you'
'fine are those the guys with you'
'yes'
'nice…I approve for now…'
'right just like I have the right to approve of all your girlfriends'
'well you're a chick.'
The exterior of hinata held a glare like face in the direction the sun people left.
"…I want pie…" was all she said before she disappeared somewhere. Kankuro called out to her again only to meet the death glare of shino's sun glasses. Gaara obviously never took any attention to this, while shukaku was just constipating how delicious her blood would. Ahh yah he couldn't sense that kiki was seriously glaring at him. so everyone else finally got there. Hinata just sat there next to shino and kiba with a juice box. To those who enter they wore just staring, but to them and jinx they wore in a deep and thoughtful conversation….inside Hinata's mind.
'so basically you wore under a foreign control that cause you to both physically and mentally harm hinata'-k
'…yes…and I really hate my self for it, now we're going to free my team mate'-jinx
'so how are we going to do that'-kiba
'…no clue'-jinx
'how wore you set free…'-shino
'I felt a rhythm the one I normally feel when I practice my families and villages taijutsu…and hinata then contacted my forehead with her palm…that had her blood mix with mahjike-sama's symbol….shit he's going to kick my ass now.'-jinx
'no he won't he'll kick your souls ass when you go to the other world…we need you to breed more eclipse ninja's'-kiki
'gee thanks…wait what are you doing here'-jinx
'who are you'-kiba
'she's….one of the many personalities that watch hinata.'-jinx
'…I really want a cinnamon roll…bun would be nice'-hinata
'….'-kiki
'….'-others
'person focus'-jinx
'..oh right, all we have to do is get me to fight with him, and hit his seal…unless he really isn't under a control. Then I can't do anything…'-hinata
'can I have the person whose with in him.'-kiki
'what!?!?!?! Why can't I have him'-jinx
'…but I want to.'-hinata
'…no…'-kiki
'…'-shino
'…you guys are weird'-kiba
'you're one to talk'-hinata
"hey guys" the three looked up to see wore loving team seven and ten. Hinata kept sucking on the juice box.
"…so you guys made it as well" naruto said to them
"…looks like lee's team made at well." mister grumpy pants said
"…"hinata just drank her juice not knowing
"they're the team with the really fast weird dude, the weapon specialties and"
'a weapons specialist sounds like fun'
'shuddup and listen'
"and the hyuga kid" and at that moment hinata started to chock on her juice. 'shit shit shit'
'ah ryu and kisa will have a laugh…mahjike won't be so happy though'
'ahhhhhhhhh'
"hinata are you okay"
'…no'
"yah –gasp –I'm fine" hinata said looking at her juice box sadly since there was no juice left."…no more juice. So when does this next part start" hinata said throwing her juice box into the trash can. Well the match started. it was Sasuke vs.yoroi, it seemed like a good match hinata didn't feel like caring, that's when it happened out of no where many ohh's and aww's came, and hinata sensed it, demonic like chakara, but it wasn't free like the one that ran threw her veins thur the demons, no this one was fabricated, and this pissed our little hinata. The match then ended with hinata still pissed.
"hey hinata, just listen you'll have fun" shino said as he head towards his match, hinata went and enhance her ears, she could her the crawling of shino's bugs as they reached his opponent, the sound dude never stood a chance so the matches went on till kiba lost hinata, was sad, but then the next battle started, Neji hyuga vs, jinx/vic. Hinata waited patiently she heard every moment, and was extremely astonished by the fact that jinx lost. And then the next match was called
"kaoru yamada vs. hinata ito" hinata shout her head up as many people turned to look at her, surprised to find that she was the eclipse nin that they wore talking about the other day. Kaoru smirked as she quickly jumped off, she wanted to instantly start this thing, while all the eyes wore on hinata who just slowly got up, as she walked down the stairs to the arena she took out her head phones, she couldn't give them the pleasure of actually hear her drums now could she.
"bitch your not going to take me seriously"
"…I am, that's why I have these headphones…now are you ready cuz I really need to get a distraction" hinata said not really looking at the girl. Koaru just smirked
'sure be cocky slut, but there's one thing your dear brothers taught me and that is the little secret behind your neck that not even you know about.' Koaru said, and soon it was time to begin.
Hinata started just like she started the other day, bobbing her head but this time to a much more up beat song (feel good inc.) and then as soon as hayate said start kaoru charged at hinata at such speed that they almost didn't believe it. but what surprised them even more was what hinata did. Kaoru was ready to punch her, but hinata grabbed her fist and kicked the lower part of her knee causing her to fall. And then walked away giving her some chance to stand up.
"I'm going to make you regret that"
"…"
koaru threw hinata a low kick, hinata was falling back but her hand got there first, shifting her body weight she send her one of her legs towards koaru's face while the other went towards her legs. She was sent to the ground and hinata just got up.
"Is that all you got man my team was sucky if they switched me for the likes of you" koaru said trying to break hinata.
"…you say something"
"why you"
"I can't hear you remember the head phones"
Koaru was pissed, now she did some hand sighs "let me show you what your dear brothers taught me you little slut, SUNFLOWER no jutsu" out of no where millions of sun flower started to grow, but as they grew they took on forms of females that started to attacked hinata, it didn't matter how many she took down they would come back and with greater numbers.
"it doesn't matter and haven't you notice something about your wounds sweetie" and then hinata realized it, as a burning sensation started, she and wounds and those wounds wore cause by poison attacks.
'shit' hinata was not happy. For a second she seemed to lose the will to fight as the sunflower completely engulfed her. shino was firkin out under his hard complexed, and the rest just stared at the girl, to then see that the sunflowers at then end started to wither away, along with kaoru confused face, which was then replaced by a blind light. Soon cleared it should hinata without her jacket instead it looked like a vest now that was open on her hand was silver chain. That just dangled.
"now let me show you one of my secrets." Hinata said, and then black light filled the room as kaoru's shadow started to come to life. Piercing red eyes just stared at her. "koaru…met the koaru shadow, koaru shadow….airta" the shadow then just smiled started to dance, moving in such a way that left koaru in a trance, she instantly started to attack her self. All the spectators watched, these match kept becoming a one-sided match, that was until a little possesses ninja intervene. Yes Leon, while no one was watching him did a hand signal.
Hinata's chakara pathways wore all of a sudden clogged. And she left something tug, at her neck.
"cute…they also said this necklace was the only clue you had to the past…won't mind if I take it." koaru said as she took hinata's necklace and that was when she snapped. She picked her self.
"you better give me that back" hinata said growling, as she took out a hair tie
"oh so your going to finally get serious I doubt that can change much with your chakara pathways clogged up.
"…I can still fight, like you have no idea" hinata said. As she pulled her hair up for the first time revealing to the many eyes the bandages that blocked her view. "don't let these intimidate you. If I was you I'd give that back." Hinata said as she took out kunai.
"and what if I d---" a kunai whiz passed her cut strands of her hair.
"did I mention my aim is incredibly off" hinata said with a smirk. Kaoru was now pissed and charged with her own kunai. Which hinata blocked, they kept going they kept fighting, as hinata kept slowing down, but not before giving a cut to koaru on her left cheek. And with that she went to attack hinata, but she moved her self back that in the end koaru only cut the bandages on Hinata's eyes.
Hinata slid on the ground until she hit the back wall. The headphones cracked and broke, as the bandages fell from her eyes, they all waited patiently to see her next move or to open her eyes, since they had all realized that they had never seen her eyes. A grunt was heard followed by blinking then two eyes that resembled spirits stared at every one, the girl that was now in front of them did not look human, the sickly pale skin, followed by the black blue hair she had, and now the grayish white eyes that just stared at them. And then none of them expected the next. A scream filled the air, as the same patter that was on Hinata's gloves started to form around her eyes, on her arms and legs. A pressure was left that radiated from her, as something was shot out of hinata. and it didn't help that the sound of drums was going off like crazy.
"ow….fuck… mahjike is going to kill me " kiki said as she started to get up. And stared at the people "what haven't you guys ever seen a demon before….aww shit…okay who was the idiot that removed the bandages…" they all pointed to koaru who was now unconscious.
"hey demon what the big deal if her eyes are out or not" some by stander shouted. And then aloud sound filled the air they all turn to see the dark wall that was slowly engulfing the building.
"well if this counties we'll all get sucked into the purgatory (2), and I and her won't be freed until mahjike send for us, but you guys will have to spend the rest of eternity in there. Now who here is good with chakara control….you moon tribe boy get down here" kiki yelled at Neji who just stared at her.
"boy get here or we die…well you people will" so Neji did, and after he closed all of Hinata's chakara points. Everything went back to normal
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Now our favorite people aka the akatsuki (you have to love them) wore still walking around. When an immense of demonic chakara surged from that way.
"…oh I get who the moon tribe is now"
"really who are they"
"well you see in my hometown there was this one clan that had blank eyes there name was the hyuga clan…"
"…"
"shit we have to go to my home town …"
"wow…sucks for you"
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"and the winner of this match is hinata ito….can you let me go now" hayate said to kiki who just held him by the collar of his vest
"…of course" kiki said as she enter hinata again.
"…some one take this girl to the hospital…no both of them…"
tO b3 couNtiuEd
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