So, here's the next.
I'm facing a really serious writer's block )):
but anywhoooooos, changed the name of the OCs,
now I own, Ally and Rachel.
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Driving along the evening streets back home, Ally and Rachel were happily chatting about their encounter with McFly. 'I'm so excited about Saturday!' Rachel was talking furiously now and she doesn't seem to be stopping, 'Oh my! What are we gonna wear? We've got to go get new clothes Mils,' seeing the look on Ally when the name was said, Rachel quickly added, 'I mean, Ally. Dougie seems to like you a lot anyway, you should've seen the look on his face when you agrred to the date.'

Focusing on the road ahead, Ally can't help but giggle, which eventually led to the two girls laughing hysterically. 'Yea, I guess I did saw it, but he was cute isn't it? When he trips over himself,' she turned around to focus on the road in front of her so Rachel couldn't see the growing redness in her cheeks, but she was way faster.

Rachel gave a pout and said in a sing-song voice, 'Awww, somebody's blushinggg, oh just admit you like him, Ally. There's nothing wrong.'

Raising an eyebrow at her, 'Hmm, so why don't you admit you like Danny too? And I guess you must be wondering what I wrote on that paper napkin?' her words seem to spark the little curiosity in her best friend's mind as a sparkle twinkled from her grey blue eyes.

'Oooh yeah, so what didja give him?' Rachel tried her best to ask in a nonchalant tone and looked at her nails, but Ally knew she was more concerned than anybody else in the world.

'Well, I gave him,' pausing to park the car on the curb and turning off the engines, Ally played with Rachel as the latter waited eagerly for her answer, 'your cellphone number.' Ally walked out of the car and closed the door, watching Rachel do the same, but with a blank look on her face. Finally, the look of a teenage girl meeting her idol surfaced on Rachel's face as she shrieked and jumped around then ran towards Ally and engulfed her in a suffocating hug.

Gasping, Ally tried to pry herself from an overly-highed Rachel but to no avail. 'Ehh, Rach? I'm getting deprived from oxygen here.'

'Oh, whoops, sorry,' Rachel broke into a huge grin and hugged her again, but this time, in a looser way, 'Thanks so much Ally! He's got my number! He's got my number! He's got my number…' Rachel recited the words over and over again, as though it was a holy prayer. A beep from Ally's cellphone signaled that she had a message. Opening the inbox, she realized it was a new number that had sent it.

Hey Ally, we're wondering if u and Rach will be alright if we had a picnic on sat night. Tom and Harry's gfs, Giovanna and Giselle will be there too. We'll come pick u guys up, give me your add. –Dougie–

Smiling, Ally quickly saved his phone number and sent a reply:

Hello, me and Rach's ok with e arrangements AND she's just a little too excited for the picnic. I'm looking forward to it too, seeming tomorrow's Saturday already. We're staying at 8 Princess Park, Evergreen Apartment, Royal Drive. –Ally–

Soon after, her phone vibrated again, and opened it quickly scanning her eyes through it.

Cool, you're staying pretty near us. We'll pick u up at around 6. We're gonna have an awesome night tomorrow! – Dougie –

Stepping into the apartment, Ally saw that Rachel was staring at her phone with eyes the size of plates. 'Oh my god! Ally! It's Danny!' Rachel fumbled with the phone nervously and nearly dropped the phone twice. 'His gonna pick us up! Oh gods!' turning to Ally, she pulled her into the wardrobe and started pulling out stacks of shoes and handbags, muttering furiously under her breath and scurrying here and there.

'C'mon, get a move on already, Ally. Tomorrow's the day! The BIG DAY!' Rachel paused in the midst of pulling out another stack of shoes, while she emphasized on the word, 'big day', 'we've got to get ready.'

Having no choice but to help the ever so stubborn Rachel, the two girls spend the rest of their evening choosing out their clothes and shoes and whatnots.

Saturday evening came pretty quickly, considering the fact that the day before was already Friday. Tonight, Ally was dressed casually, in a two layered top, black skinnys that showed off her curves and a pair of cute, dark blue ballet flats. Rachel on the other hand was dressed casually too, but was forced by Ally, having been told off that they were going on a date, not a ball. Whilst Ally sat back on their couch and waited patiently for the guys to arrive, Rachel was pacing the living room, wringing her hands together nervously.

'Rachs, if you don't stop now, there's gonna be a hole on the floor.'

'Ally!' Rachel suddenly screamed as though she remembered something and looked at Ally, wide eyed who was equally shocked, hands in midair, just as she was about to switch to another channel.

'What!'

Rachel look like she was about to cry when she flopped onto the empty seat beside her best friend. 'What if I screw up? I always screw up when I'm nervous! Oh dear, I'm gonna screw it up.'

Chuckling at her friend's nervousness, Ally gave Rachel a reassuring hug and whispered comforting words into her ears. 'You won't screw up hun. You never did. But even if you do,' hearing Rachel gasp loudly, Ally continued quickly, 'which is a one in a million chance of having that happening, you've still got me. We'll kick their asses if they spoil the night.' Just as Rachel was about to gave another sarcastic reply, the doorbell rang and startled both the girls.

'Ah, it's them. Let's go now Rachy, be confident.' Opening the door, she smiled at the beaming Dougie and Danny who were, fortunately, dressed as casually as they were.

'Hello, beautiful ladies, are you both ready?' Dougie asked, looking at Ally who was blushing faintly.

'Yeap, we're all ready, let's go.' Ally grabbed her handbag and was about to step out of the house and past Dougie when she was stopped by him placing his hands on his waist, making a loop for Ally to put her hand through. Laughing, Ally locked her arms into his and whispered, 'You sure are a gentleman, aren't you?' while Dougie just gave his trademark smirk. Turning back to make sure Rachel was alright, Ally smiled when she saw Danny reaching out to hold Rachel's hands, who was already blushing wildly before the picnic even started.

Walking to their car, Ally and Rachel was surprised to see it empty. 'Where are the rest?' she asked Dougie, who was staring ahead of him.

'Oh yea, Tom, Giovanna, Harry and Giselle decided to have a date of heir own, which I must add, might end up in a shagging session.' Dougie spoke the last bit softly; hoping that Ally couldn't hear it, but a faint laugh from her told him that she did heard it. Danny, on the other hand, was looking so dreamily at Rachel, that he did not seem to notice Dougie calling out to him, asking him to drive the car. Giving up, Dougie activated the car and start the engines himself, while the two girls stepped into the back seat.

Shaking his head, Dougie looked into the rearview mirror and said, 'He might end up crashing into something with that dazed look on him. Better be safe than sorry,' this caused the girls to burst out laughing while Danny was still zoning out, but had finally 'woken up' and was chatting happily as with the others on the car about their lives so far.

'Alright, we're here guys, and girls.' Dougie announced as the car starts to slow down and the engines gradually stopped. Pulling out the car keys roughly, Dougie stepped out of the front seat and opened the door for Ally, who was holding onto the basket of food for their nighttime picnic. She found out that, they were in a park, a quiet park with a small little pond. By now, both Dougie and Danny has had their beanies pulled low over their eyes for wearing shades is not a good idea at night.(HAHA)

Dougie and Danny led the way to a spot by the pond, while the girls helped set up the food and drinks as the picnic slowly began. The park has had small streetlights everywhere, so it wasn't really that dark. Whipping out Ally's camera, the four of them started to capture candid snapshots of each other and also group photos. The night went on considerably well, until Danny frowned as he saw nothing but a few meager drips of the dark liquid dripping out from the empty wine bottle. 'We're out of wine, but why?' Danny was still frowning at the empty win bottle while the others had the how-dumb-can-you-get look on their faces.

Dougie looked at Danny as though he was out of his mind. 'Cause we finished it, dude. God, how dimwitted can you get. I already can't stand my stupidity, but with yours; I'd kill myself already.'

'Hey! I'm not dumb, it just… took me a few moments to process the… thoughts.' Danny retorted lamely and pouted, causing Rachel and Ally to laugh loudly until Dougie hushed them up.

'C'mon you,' Rachel was beginning to loosen up with the guys as she stood up and reached out to pull Danny up with her, 'let's go get more wine, I'm sure there's a convenience store somewhere.' Danny was smirking wildly as he took her hands and started walking towards the convenience store, hands in hands.

Ally looked at the both of them, smiling happily, contented that Rachel has finally found someone she likes. 'Awww, look at them, how sweet can these two lovebirds get.'

Smiling, Ally stood up and brushed the dirt off her jeans walking towards the edge of the pond and sat down, with Dougie following behind her and occupying the space beside her.Ally sighed and brought her knees to her chest and commented. 'It's a beautiful night, isn't it?'

'Uh huh, I guess it is.' Shrugging, Dougie took a piece of rock and threw it into the pond, causing water ripples to form on the calm surface.

'Hey, don't do that!' Ally held out her hand and stopped Dougie from throwing a second stone, but pulled back almost immediately as though she was touching something extremely hot.

'But why not?' Dougie asked, confused at her sudden outburst and her response when she touched his arm.

'Well, one, you might hurt the fishes or whatnots in the pond. Second, you never know what's in it. If you disturb it, it might come after us. I don't wanna be chased by a freaky animal on a date.'

Dougie laughed, but stopped when Ally sneezed and shivered, bringing her knees closer to her body. Shrugging off his jacket, he placed it on Ally's shoulders and scooted nearer to her, then wrapped his arms around her in an attempt to warm Ally up. She couldn't stop the smile that was creeping up her face when Dougie hugged her and her heart was beating so fast and loud, she was sure Dougie could hear it.

'Thanks,' Dougie just nodded and smirked at her, the smirk that could make any girl melt, but it only made Ally blushed. Unknowingly, Ally began fiddling with the necklace as Dougie watched her twirl the metal chain on her fingers lightly, her eyes sporting a faraway look.

'So, tell me more about yourself, I don't quite seem to know you well enough.' Dougie tucked a stray lock of hair behind Ally's ears then turned his attention onto her face, taking in every little details of her. The moonlight made her look even more beautiful. His eyes wandered around her hazel green eyes, the freckles on her nose, her slightly tinted pink cheeks and her lips. He couldn't help but stare at her lips for a few moments, it was too alluring.

Ally made a deliberate cough, 'Erm, Mr Poynter, if you don't mind, my eyes are,' she stopped to point to where her eyes are, 'up here, and,' she then moved her hands to her mouth and continued, 'not here'. She laughed; her laughs are like the tinkle of a bell to Dougie, and he loved hearing her laughter. Yeah, take that, how cheesy could this 20 year old boy be.

'Sorry,' Dougie muttered, embarrassed at being caught staring at her, well, lips.

Ally laughed again, 'S'okay. And to answer your questions, I was from London from what my mom told me, I was born here. But moved to California when I was still a baby, for god knows what reasons my mom has.' Again, Ally's hands reached up and fingered the necklace lightly.

'Then can I ask you where did you get this necklace from?' Dougie questioned further, but cautiously, for fear of saying or asking things that will upset her.

Slowly, Ally reached up behind her neck and unclasped the necklace, holding it out with one hand while the other held up Dougie's hand. Placing the necklace gingerly in his palm, she allowed him to take a good look at the ring chained onto it.

Sighing, Ally hugged her knees close to her again stared out at the ripples on the surface on the pond the wind was making and continued, 'My grandmamma gave me that necklace. It was a gift from my dad to my mom. When my mom was killed in a freak car crash when I was 10, I lived with my grandmamma in California ever since. Until recently she passed away, leaving me this necklace, telling me to come back here, and find my dad, which I think is a one in a million chance of that EVER happening. But even if that one in a million chance really did happen, I doubt I'll be able to forgive him.'

Taking a deep breath, Ally rested her chin on her knees while tears sprang to her eyes. She tried hard to blink it away, but doing so only made them fall faster. Soon, she was sobbing uncontrollably. Having no idea what to do, Dougie stood up abruptly and walked behind her, clasping the necklace back onto her neck. Then, he walked in front of her, and brought the small shaking figure into his arms, wrapping his hands around her, allowing Ally to cry into his chest. Seeing Ally so hurt and heartbroken made Dougie's heart ache with misery too. He did not think that a girl like her could have had such an awful past. Ally's uncontrollable sobs began to slow down as her breathing even out. Thinking that she was asleep, Dougie removed his arms from her body and made to carry her back to the car, but was shocked when he found out that she was wide awake, her arms wrapped tightly around him.

'Don't go away.' She mumbled, her voice small and tiny, resembling a small girl who was afraid. Nodding, Dougie scooted near her again, and brought her into his arms, while he rocked back and forth, running his fingers through her hair.

'I'm sorry,' muttered Dougie, who was still rocking back and forth. Ally and Dougie turned around at the same time and found themselves staring at each other's eyes. Ever so slowly, the two moved closed and closer, till their noses were rubbing against each other. Ally shuddered under the coldness of the night and also the feeling of Dougie's breath on her lips. The next moment, Dougie's lips were on hers, kissing her gently, as though telling her he will never hurt her like how others did. Ally smiled against his lips as she returned the kiss, closing her eyes at the same time, enjoying their first shared kiss together. Little did they know that there was a reporter among the bushes, capturing pictures of their kiss. The two broke apart after awhile, coming up for air. Ally blushed and turned away but was stopped by Dougie, who tilted Ally's face back to him and rested his forehead on hers, staring into her hazel green eyes.

'I won't let others hurt you, I promise.' The words made Ally smile broadly before Dougie brought her lips to his again, kissing her gently then hugging her and rocking her back and forth again. Soon, Rachel and Danny returned hand in hand, but the wine was nowhere to be seen. Their clothes however, were crumpled and Danny's face was smeared with lipstick.

'Hohoho, what have we got here?' Danny chuckled, signaling to Dougie and Ally, who were smirking at them in the same manner.

'Speak for yourself, Dan. How does the lipstick feel? Sticky?' Ally and Dougie burst out laughing while Danny looked at them in shock and grinned somewhat sheepishly while Rachel blushed and smiled at them.

'Well, looks like we've finally settled down, Dougs.' Danny said as he and Dougie threw the rubbish into the bin.

'Yea, I think so.' Shrugging, they both walked back to the girls who were waiting for them at the car park, whispering excitedly but stopped immediately when they saw the boys.

'C'mon, let's go home.' Deactivating the car alarm, Dougie passed the keys to Danny, who managed to catch it just in time, before it fell to the ground.

'Dans, you drive, I'm gonna sit in the back seat.' Danny gave a knowing smirk to Dougie who just rolled his eyes in return. Holding Ally's hands, he opened the door for her while Danny did the same for Rachel.

When they reached the girls' apartment, both were sound asleep, with Ally's head on Dougie's shoulders and Rachel's head resting on the car window, since Danny was driving. After parking the car safely beside the curb and activating the alarm, Dougie carried Ally in his arms, bridal style while Danny slung Rachel over his shoulder. Insensitive creep, Dougie thought, shaking his head in amusement at Danny who was now looking for the house keys. Finally, he found the bunch of keys as he opened the doors to the apartment; the guys brought the girls back to their rooms and tucked them into bed.

Placing Ally gently on her bed, Dougie took off her shoes and covered her with the blanket before kneeling down beside her bed, looking at the sleeping form of his new girlfriend. Girlfriend, yes, Dougie is in love with Alyssa Perrington now.

'Good night,' kissing Ally on the forehead, he tucked the tired girl in again, who was now sleeping with a tiny smile on her face.

there ya go :D
hope you liked it.it's the longest chapter i've ever written
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